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« on: January 13, 2009, 12:55:53 PM »
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MEIN NE KHA TERI YAAD MEIN ANKHEN ROTTI HEIN
JAWAB AAYA YEH ISSI TARAH SAAF HOTI HEIN
MEIN NE KAHA DARD EH HIJR KA KOI ILAAJ BATAYIEH
JAWAB AAYA VASL HO GA ISSI TARH ROTE JAYEIEH
MEIN NE KAHA AB ANKHON K SAATH DIL BI ROHTA HAI
JAWAB AAYA ASHIQOON K SAATH AKSR AISA HOTA HAI
MEIN NE KAHA ANSONWOON SE TAKIYE BEEGH JATE HEIN
JAWAB AAYA ISSI BAHANAY HUM TUMEIN YAAD TAU AHTE HEIN
MEIN NE KAHA MERI SHAYRI K BARAY KUCH FARMAAIYE
JAWAB AAYA ASGHR KHUDA K LIYE HAMEIN BHOOL JAAIYE
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« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2009, 02:14:33 PM »
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Achchi kahee sunee hai Asghr Ji
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« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 02:20:51 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Asghrji.. Applause Applause Applause
Aapne isse Mazahiya Shayri Mein Post Kiya, Par Humein To Iss Mein Bhi Dard Nazar Aaya...Bahut Ache..
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« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 06:32:45 PM »
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Aap laug hosla afzaaie kar daite hain magr mein khud ko iss kabil nein samjta waise b asghr ka matlub hai chota magr aap laugoon ne Akber bana (yehni bada)shukriya.asghr tearyeyed icon_salut
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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2009, 04:46:35 AM »
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Very Well.. Very Very Nice Work Asghr Ji... Applause


Bahut Bahut Khoob Asghrji.. Applause Applause Applause
Aapne isse Mazahiya Shayri Mein Post Kiya, Par Humein To Iss Mein Bhi Dard Nazar Aaya...Bahut Ache..


Ditto.. Same with Me..
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« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 04:56:06 AM »
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MEIN NE KHA TERI YAAD MEIN ANKHEN ROTTI HEIN
JAWAB AAYA YEH ISSI TARAH SAAF HOTI HEIN
MEIN NE KAHA DARD EH HIJR KA KOI ILAAJ BATAYIEH
JAWAB AAYA VASL HO GA ISSI TARH ROTE JAYEIEH
MEIN NE KAHA AB ANKHON K SAATH DIL BI ROHTA HAI
JAWAB AAYA ASHIQOON K SAATH AKSR AISA HOTA HAI
MEIN NE KAHA ANSONWOON SE TAKIYE BEEGH JATE HEIN
JAWAB AAYA ISSI BAHANAY HUM TUMEIN YAAD TAU AHTE HEIN
MEIN NE KAHA MERI SHAYRI K BARAY KUCH FARMAAIYE
JAWAB AAYA ASGHR KHUDA K LIYE HAMEIN BHOOL JAAIYE

Yaar Kya Kahene Is Kalam Ke Hila diya tune mere bhai kasam khuda ki ye kalam ki gahera-e- ko samjh kyoon nahi pa rahe app azgar bhai isko funny shayari me post karke iski tauheen ki hai tumne kasam mai tumse naraz hon !! shayari ke qadardan ye bardash nahi karsakte mere bhai !!

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« Reply #6 on: January 14, 2009, 05:22:16 AM »
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Bahoot khoob asghr ji
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« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2009, 05:24:47 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 05:39:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob Asghr ji.. I too agree with Khwaish ji... padkar dard ka ehsas b hua ... Good work  Applause Thumbs UP
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« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2009, 05:51:35 AM »
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MEIN NE KHA TERI YAAD MEIN ANKHEN ROTTI HEIN
JAWAB AAYA YEH ISSI TARAH SAAF HOTI HEIN
MEIN NE KAHA DARD EH HIJR KA KOI ILAAJ BATAYIEH
JAWAB AAYA VASL HO GA ISSI TARH ROTE JAYEIEH
MEIN NE KAHA AB ANKHON K SAATH DIL BI ROHTA HAI
JAWAB AAYA ASHIQOON K SAATH AKSR AISA HOTA HAI
MEIN NE KAHA ANSONWOON SE TAKIYE BEEGH JATE HEIN
JAWAB AAYA ISSI BAHANAY HUM TUMEIN YAAD TAU AHTE HEIN
MEIN NE KAHA MERI SHAYRI K BARAY KUCH FARMAAIYE
JAWAB AAYA ASGHR KHUDA K LIYE HAMEIN BHOOL JAAIYE


arey wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bahut khoooobbb .. kya kamaaaaaaal ka likha hai aap neh , bahut khoob. bahut sunder likha hai aap neh


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« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2009, 04:38:19 PM »
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bahoot khoob, but I am agree with Khwaish ji and Mahiya... Apki is kavita ki last line bahoot dard wali hai... sari kavita padte waqat  jo fun mehsoos hota hai wo last line ke sath ek dum dard main badal jaata hai.
Overall Good creation!! Good job!!
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« Reply #11 on: January 14, 2009, 09:41:18 PM »
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Very Well.. Very Very Nice Work Asghr Ji... Applause


Ditto.. Same with Me..

LIFE IS BIT BUSY SOMETIMES I REPLY LATE I HOPE NO ONE WILL MIND I REALY APRECIATE EVERYONES COMMENTS ALL I CAN DO WISH ALL OF U A LOT OF HAPINESS IN LIFE.ASGHR icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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« Reply #12 on: January 14, 2009, 09:47:11 PM »
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arey wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bahut khoooobbb .. kya kamaaaaaaal ka likha hai aap neh , bahut khoob. bahut sunder likha hai aap neh


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« Reply #13 on: January 14, 2009, 09:51:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob Asghr ji.. I too agree with Khwaish ji... padkar dard ka ehsas b hua ... Good work  Applause Thumbs UP
THANKS FOR APRECIATION.ASGR icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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« Reply #14 on: January 14, 2009, 10:01:45 PM »
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bahoot khoob, but I am agree with Khwaish ji and Mahiya... Apki is kavita ki last line bahoot dard wali hai... sari kavita padte waqat  jo fun mehsoos hota hai wo last line ke sath ek dum dard main badal jaata hai.
Overall Good creation!! Good job!!
AAP SHAAID YAQEEN NA KARAIN YE BAATAIN AIK DOST SE PHONE PE HUI AUR MEIN NE 2001 MEIN YE NAZAM UUN KI IJAAZAT SE MAZAQ KA RUNG DE KAR LEKHI,DEKHA HUM GHUM KO B HANSI MEIN TAAL DAITE HEIN.MUJE UDAAS KAR DIYA NA.AAP KA SHUKRIA.ASGHR icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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