MOHABBAT KE OFFER ........................... HASAN

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Mohabbat  ke  Offer   bahut   aa  rahe  haiN  ,
HameeN  Dil  lagaane  se  ghabra  rahe  haiN


Raqeeb  andar - andar  to  tharra  rahe  haiN  ,
Gali  meiN   magar  teri   mandla  rahe  haiN


Kabhie  Zulf  jhatkeiN , kabhie  yunhi  matkeiN  ,
Khade   Aaine   par   woh   itra   rahe  haiN  


HameeN  par  gadaaye  haiN  nazreiN  woh  kab  se  ,
Magar   saaf   milne  se   katra   rahe  haiN


Kabhi  taan  ghoonsa  , kabhi   kheench  thappad  ,
HameiN   apni   khidkee  se  dhamka  rahe  haiN


Chalo  bhaag  leiN  Hum  bhi   sarpat  galee  se  ,
Idhar  hee  Woh  KuttoN  ko  hushka  rahe  haiN
 

Koi   sher   kahne  meiN   shayed   lage  haiN  ,
'Hasan'   der  se   sar  ko   khujla  rahe  haiN
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2013, 06:42:08 PM »
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hahahhah lajawab hasan sir bahut khub bahut umda........

hasan sir sher kehne ke liye aap kyun sar khujla rahe hai

hum to aapka likha har sher padhkar hanste hee jaa rahehai



behad lajawab...aap jaisa saini sir jaisa aur khwahish bhai jaisa koi shayar aur yahan hai hee nahi jo har tarah ki gazal se dil jeet lete hain...
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2013, 07:00:42 PM »
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wah kya bat kya bat
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2013, 07:02:27 PM »
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Mohabbat  ke  Offer   bahut   aa  rahe  haiN  ,
HameeN  Dil  lagaane  se  ghabra  rahe  haiN


Raqeeb  andar - andar  to  tharra  rahe  haiN  ,
Gali  meiN   magar  teri   mandla  rahe  haiN


Kabhie  Zulf  jhatkeiN , kabhie  yunhi  matkeiN  ,
Khade   Aaine   par   woh   itra   rahe  haiN   


HameeN  par  gadaaye  haiN  nazreiN  woh  kab  se  ,
Magar   saaf   milne  se   katra   rahe  haiN


Kabhi  taan  ghoonsa  , kabhi   kheench  thappad  ,
HameiN   apni   khidkee  se  dhamka  rahe  haiN


Chalo  bhaag  leiN  Hum  bhi   sarpat  galee  se  ,
Idhar  hee  Woh  KuttoN  ko  hushka  rahe  haiN
 

Koi   sher   kahne  meiN   shayed   lage  haiN  ,
'Hasan'   der  se   sar  ko   khujla  rahe  haiN


ha ha ha ha ha ,sir
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2013, 07:12:10 PM »
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Karein bhi wo kya , aap sunte nahi jab,
Hasan waah hasan wo, kahey jaarahe hain. 

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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2013, 08:08:19 PM »
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Hasan Sahib,
            Aadaab !

Waaaaah waaaah bahut khoob majahiya kalaam
kaha hai .......kya kahne.....

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen...

Raqeeb
 
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2013, 09:27:16 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2013, 11:16:36 PM »
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Just awesome hasanji. hazaron dili daad qubool kare..
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2013, 11:58:00 PM »
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Kabhie  Zulf  jhatkeiN , kabhie  yunhi  matkeiN  ,
Khade   Aaine   par   woh   itra   rahe  haiN  


HameeN  par  gadaaye  haiN  nazreiN  woh  kab  se  ,
Magar   saaf   milne  se   katra   rahe  haiN


Koi   sher   kahne  meiN   shayed   lage  haiN  ,
'Hasan'   der  se   sar  ko   khujla  rahe  haiN

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
Is Ghazal ke mutalliq aik sher aapko Nazr karna chahta hun-

SUNO DOSTON AAJKAL YE HASAN JI,
BAHUT UMDAA GHAZALEIN FARMAA RAHE HAIN.

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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2013, 02:56:19 AM »
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Khushnaseeb Hain Aap Ki Koi Itna Chahta Hai
Yahaan To Makhiyan Bhi Pas Aane Se Katraati Hain

Bahut Khub Likha Hai Saheb Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2013, 07:54:45 AM »
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Kya baat hai kya baat hai - loot liye Siddiqui sahab
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Laajawaab peshkash
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2013, 12:09:39 PM »
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hahahhah lajawab hasan sir bahut khub bahut umda........

hasan sir sher kehne ke liye aap kyun sar khujla rahe hai

hum to aapka likha har sher padhkar hanste hee jaa rahehai



behad lajawab...aap jaisa saini sir jaisa aur khwahish bhai jaisa koi shayar aur yahan hai hee nahi jo har tarah ki gazal se dil jeet lete hain...
soudagar ji , housla afzai ke liye bahut mamnoon hoon .
aap khaksar ki koshishon ko mohabbat se saraahte hain
ye mere liye behad musarrat ki baat hai . khuda aapko
khush rakhhe.
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behad lajawaab....
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2013, 11:51:33 PM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard =))ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Hasan saheb bahut hi umda mazaahiya kalaam, maza aa gaya padh ke aur bahut haNsi bhi aai. Matla aur Maqta khususann bahut pasand aae. Ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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