QALB KE JAANE KE BAAD.!

by qalb on April 17, 2012, 11:14:59 AM
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                    ghaltiyaan dohraate rahe samjhaane ke baad.
                    sunte nahin janaab baar-baar kahne ke baad.

                    kaisee 'anaa' paal  rahkhee  hai  khud mein.
                    toot jaata hai pathar bhee takraane ke baad.

                    baarah  rotaa  rahaa  woh  khataa  pe apnee.
                    miltaa kahaan hai teer tarkash se jaane ke baad.

                    ye nigaah,ye dharkan, ye dillagee rahtee kahaan.
                    rah jaatee hai ashiqee zaeefee aane ke baad.

                    kar  denaa  dafan  khataa  bhee  saath  mere.
                    rahe khushnumaa daaman mujhe dafnaane ke baad.

      rahe khamosh-sainee bhee, hasan bhee, parwaaz bhee ..na jaane kaun kaun.
                    huee mahfil barkhaast qalb ke jaane ke baad.
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2012, 11:23:16 AM »
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Ghalti  Saini  ki  thi ,  na  Hasan  ki ,  na  Parwaaz ki
Qalb ji , aap  gaye  hi  kyuun  Mahfil jum jaane  ke  baad


        Bahut  khoob , Qalb ji. Magar itni khubsurat ghazal ,
        Mazaahiya category mein kyuun ?
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2012, 11:36:07 AM »
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waah waah waah mazedaar shaandaar ek time men ek hee+ de saktaa hoon agar chhoot htee to ese hazaaroN + qurbaan
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2012, 12:30:52 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2012, 01:01:04 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2012, 01:16:56 PM »
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waah waaah...awesome qalb jii.....Usual Smile...bahut khoobsurat....
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2012, 01:21:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Kya khoob kaha hai aapne Qalbji!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2012, 02:18:23 PM »
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                    ghaltiyaan dohraate rahe samjhaane ke baad.
                    sunte nahin janaab baar-baar kahne ke baad.

                    kaisee 'anaa' paal  rahkhee  hai  khud mein.
                    toot jaata hai pathar bhee takraane ke baad.

                    baarah  rotaa  rahaa  woh  khataa  pe apnee.
                    miltaa kahaan hai teer tarkash se jaane ke baad.

                    ye nigaah,ye dharkan, ye dillagee rahtee kahaan.
                    rah jaatee hai ashiqee zaeefee aane ke baad.

                    kar  denaa  dafan  khataa  bhee  saath  mere.
                    rahe khushnumaa daaman mujhe dafnaane ke baad.

      rahe khamosh-sainee bhee, hasan bhee, parwaaz bhee ..na jaane kaun kaun.
                    huee mahfil barkhaast qalb ke jaane ke baad.

humara bhee sawaal yahi hai ki--
itni umdaa post Mazahiya section me kyun ?

!
kuch chijen badalti nhi qalb
tere jaane ke baad ya mere jaane ke baad
rangaten sa'or ki badha kar janaab
kyun uth chale mehfil jum jaane ke baad
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2012, 02:32:02 PM »
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                    ghaltiyaan dohraate rahe samjhaane ke baad.
                    sunte nahin janaab baar-baar kahne ke baad.

                    kaisee 'anaa' paal  rahkhee  hai  khud mein.
                    toot jaata hai pathar bhee takraane ke baad.

                    baarah  rotaa  rahaa  woh  khataa  pe apnee.
                    miltaa kahaan hai teer tarkash se jaane ke baad.

                    ye nigaah,ye dharkan, ye dillagee rahtee kahaan.
                    rah jaatee hai ashiqee zaeefee aane ke baad.

                    kar  denaa  dafan  khataa  bhee  saath  mere.
                    rahe khushnumaa daaman mujhe dafnaane ke baad.

      rahe khamosh-sainee bhee, hasan bhee, parwaaz bhee ..na jaane kaun kaun.
                    huee mahfil barkhaast qalb ke jaane ke baad.



Bahut bahut Khooob..Pehle Teen Ashaar To khaas
Taur par Bahut Khoob Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2012, 05:51:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2012, 05:55:53 PM »
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Qalb Ji bahut khoob likha,  notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2012, 10:29:37 PM »
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Bahut khoob. Nice.
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2012, 11:22:06 AM »
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bahut umda ghajal qalb jee  javaab nahi.. 
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2012, 12:29:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2012, 01:58:09 AM »
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very good sir... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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