teer-talwaar !!!

by sarfira on March 15, 2012, 03:28:36 AM
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na teer chali na talwaar chala
waar pe fir bhi waar chala tongue3

na chot lagi na dard hua
kesa shool zigar ke paar chala tongue3

na aank ladi na palakk jahpke
mann dol magar sau baar chala tongue3

na maut hui na dafan hua
rooh ko le yamraaj magr bhense pe sawaar chala tongue3

na galti thi na jurm koi
pairon me ghoongru fir bhi baandh chala tongue3

na ghooghat uthi na chaand dikha
ban kar lekin !mai! khataadaar chala tongue3
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meri iss utpatang post pr bht mistakes h--coz raat bhr soya nhi offi k karan to ab natija ye hai --!
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2012, 03:35:48 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2012, 03:47:17 AM »
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Sarfira ji teer chalaa n ki teer chalee baqee khoob soorat peshkash hai badhaai ho
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2012, 01:51:15 PM »
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haha....sai hai..utpatang mei b menaing lg rha hai lik ur name...haha:)
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2012, 02:54:43 PM »
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wah typical sarfira post
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2012, 03:21:11 PM »
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Hehehe

Kya baat hai Sarfira ji .. Ak dum mast Likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2012, 06:46:05 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 15, 2012, 03:28:36 AM
na teer chali na talwaar chala
waar pe fir bhi waar chala tongue3
wah aap ke ladaai ka alag andaaz hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
na chot lagi na dard hua
kesa shool jigar ke paar chala tongue3
kisne aisa shool chalaaya hai sarfira ji drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
na aank ladi na palakk jahpke
mann dol magar sau baar chala tongue3
aap ke saath hi aisa anjaam kyon hota hai janaab Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
na maut hui na dafan hua
rooh ko le yamraaj magr bhense pe sawaar chala tongue3

na galti thi na jurm koi
pairon me ghoongru fir bhi baandh chala tongue3
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
na ghooghat utha na chaand dikha
ban kar lekin !mai! khataadaar chala tongue3
! Embarrased Embarrased
meri iss utpatang post pr bht mistakes h--coz raat bhr soya nhi offi k karan to ab natija ye hai --! Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased


bahut khoob.......!
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2012, 07:19:54 PM »
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