Abra ghanghor the...........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on November 16, 2010, 12:29:11 PM
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Subah ke hum ujaaloN ko taraste rahe
abra ghanghor the wo baraste rahe

hum ko chouNka gayaa raah ka soonaapan
phir bhee patte dagar me khad.kte rahe

kaisaa sailaab sab kuch bahaa le gayaa
tinke bhee aasaroN ko taraste rahe

tujhko chhoo kar gayee jab se baad e sabaa
phool khwahish ke saare mahakte rahe

dil me deedaar unkaa munaasib naheeN
aks aaNkhoN me bante bigd.te rahe


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«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2010, 07:42:52 AM »
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bahaut hi umdaa mamata ji. ghazal ka pholosophical aur mystical treatment bahaut pasand aayaa. aur andaaz e bayaan to har baar ki tarah sateek aur chubhane waalaa hai hii.
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2010, 07:57:52 AM »
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Zarra jee hairaani hui ......kisee ne to humaare kalaam ko humaari hee nazar se dekhaa...behad khushee hui....saath hee behad shukriyaa!
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 08:11:07 AM »
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behad khubsurat kalaam mamta ji........
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 08:12:33 AM »
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Behad shukriyaa Ksak jee!
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 08:17:53 AM »
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Mamta jee...
mene socha me b kuch Daad de dun...wese iski jarurat nhi fir bhi....behad khubsurat .
aap jaiso se hi to mujhe kuch sikhne ko milta hai..
god bless u Mamta ji..thanx
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 08:04:29 PM »
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Subhash jee !aap ye kyoN bhool rahe haiN keh aap kee ye houslaafzai humare liye kisi pranvaayu se kam naheeN humaraa kalaam, aap kee daad ke binaa jeenaa chor degaa...kalam kee nok kuNd ho jaayegee...aap kee blessings kee hume bahut zaroorat hai varnaa yahee kalaam kisee dairi me dafn ho chuke hote...humara har kalaam aap ke dastkhat kee raah dekhtaa hai...
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2010, 08:22:41 PM »
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Bahut Khub Mamta Ji...
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2010, 08:24:05 PM »
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wahh mamta jii..
aapne kya baat kah di:)
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2010, 08:38:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Hum-dum jee!
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2010, 08:41:26 PM »
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Shukriyaa Subhash jee!
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