ek baar to................mamta bajpai

by mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 05:17:09 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 09, 2010, 06:36:05 PM »
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kya baat hai aapki shayri mai
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«Reply #16 on: November 09, 2010, 10:53:05 PM »
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Kailash bhai!
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«Reply #17 on: November 10, 2010, 05:16:28 AM »
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SHIKASTA  QADAMO SE BHI CHAL KAR AAYA HOTA
USNE IK BAAR TO KHATIR SE BULAYA HOTA

YUN NA KAT-TA SAFAR BEDARI ME TANHA APNA
MUJHKO IK BAAR TO THAPKI SE SULAYA HOTA

BENATEEJA HI RAHE TAWAAF TERE KOOCHE KE
DEEDAR IK BAAR TO APNA KARAYA HOTA

MUNASIB-O-MOUJOON ME MUMKIN NAHI USKA BAYAAN
TAARUF IK BAAR TO USKA KARAYA HOTA

KYA BADI BAAT JO MAIKHANE SE TOUBA KARTE
HI!IK BAAR TO NIGAHON SE PILAYA HOTA
mamta ji humesha ki tarah ek baar fir se aapki bilkul napi-tuli rachna, har sher sampoorn..dheron daad
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«Reply #18 on: November 10, 2010, 05:19:09 AM »
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bht hi khubsurat gazal mamta ji...bas gungunate rahe hum to kaafi der tak..

gar ek bar jo aankho sepilaya hota
nasha umar bhar na fir utar paya hota

dedeke sula dete jo thapki tumko
tumne aaj ye mukaam zindagi me na paaya hota

shikast zindagi ki humne apne naam na ki hoti
aaj zamane ne tumhe na palkon pe apni bithaya hota

haan bewafa kehde tu aaj mujhko koi gum nahin
na karte bewafai to ye dard tere lafzon me na aaya hota...!!!
Kasak ji itna arthpoorn jawab is rachna ka mai kalpna bhi nahi kar sakta tha....dil ke har kone se aapki is rachna ko mera salam..bahoot khooooooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: November 10, 2010, 07:59:04 AM »
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Sanjeev jee behad shukriyaa!

 
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«Reply #20 on: December 02, 2010, 05:10:39 PM »
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Waaqai Kasak jee kaafee ma'anikhaiz likhaa hai aapne ....bahut khoob!
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«Reply #21 on: May 31, 2011, 04:31:01 PM »
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kya khub likha hai mamta ji


aur KASAK JI aapne bhi kamaal kar diya
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«Reply #22 on: May 31, 2011, 11:51:00 PM »
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Shukriyaa Kamal jee ! lagtaa hai aaj humaare kalaam kee baaree hai........
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«Reply #23 on: June 01, 2011, 04:01:03 AM »
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bahut bahut khub mamta ji............

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«Reply #24 on: June 01, 2011, 06:00:45 AM »
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shukriyaa Manju!
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«Reply #25 on: June 01, 2011, 07:04:50 AM »
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ahaaaaa ahaaaaa kya baat hai mamata diiii....wah aaj bade din bad ayaa or padhkar dil khush ho gaya...

ham to waise bhi mit chuke or eise bhi maare gaye,
muddat baad jo usne haule se mera naam pukara hai~
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«Reply #26 on: June 01, 2011, 07:39:54 AM »
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SHIKASTA  QADAMO SE BHI CHAL KAR AAYA HOTA
USNE IK BAAR TO KHATIR SE BULAYA HOTA

YUN NA KAT-TA SAFAR BEDARI ME TANHA APNA
MUJHKO IK BAAR TO THAPKI SE SULAYA HOTA

BENATEEJA HI RAHE TAWAAF TERE KOOCHE KE
DEEDAR IK BAAR TO APNA KARAYA HOTA

MUNASIB-O-MOUJOON ME MUMKIN NAHI USKA BAYAAN
TAARUF IK BAAR TO USKA KARAYA HOTA

KYA BADI BAAT JO MAIKHANE SE TOUBA KARTE
HI!IK BAAR TO NIGAHON SE PILAYA HOTA



BAHUT KHOOB, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


EK CHIRAAG KO NA TARASTE KABHI HUM,
 CHEHRA GAR TUMNE DIKHAYAA HOTA
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«Reply #27 on: June 01, 2011, 08:26:42 AM »
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Waah Waah Abhi ! ek to itane din baad aaye or aate hee teer maarne lage? poochh saktee hooN ?  kahaaN the itane din?humaare kitane qalaam tumhaaree nazar ko taras gaye?
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«Reply #28 on: June 01, 2011, 08:29:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob Adil jee! cheharaa or chiraag .waah kyaa baat hai.....aap ke is sher par humaaraa qalaam kurbaan.....
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«Reply #29 on: June 03, 2011, 07:43:30 AM »
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Waah Waah Abhi ! ek to itane din baad aaye or aate hee teer maarne lage? poochh saktee hooN ?  kahaaN the itane din?humaare kitane qalaam tumhaaree nazar ko taras gaye?

maafi chahta hun diii..mai bhi taras gaya tha ..par ajkaal job me busy reheta hun ..jitna waqt milta he yahan aap logo ki post padhkar hi gujarata he....
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