berukhi..............................mamta bajpai

by mamta bajpai on July 24, 2010, 12:35:14 PM
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AANKH SE AANKH CHURATA KYON HAI
BARHAMI MUJHSE CHUPATA KYON HAI

MERI KHATA, LAKH SAZAYEN DE DE
UNGALI MAHFIL ME UTHATA KYON HAI

DARD JITNE BHI TERE NAAM MERE KAR DE
ASHQ PALKON PE SAJATA KYON HAI

PALKEN UTHNE DE GIRNE DE ZARA
YE SITAM WAQT PE DHATA KYON HAI

KOUN AAYEGA IDHAR ,IS DAR PAR
DIYA DAHLEEJ PE JALATA KYON HAI

MAI TERA KOI NAHI KYON FIR BHI
BEKHUDI ME PAAS BULATA KYON HAI

GAIR SE BAAT OR NAZAR HAI MUJH PAR
BERUKHI AISI MUJHKO DIKHATA KYON HAI
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2010, 01:22:18 PM »
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AANKH SE AANKH CHURATA KYON HAI
BARHAMI MUJHSE CHUPATA KYON HAI

MERI KHATA, LAKH SAZAYEN DE DE
UNGALI MAHFIL ME UTHATA KYON HAI

DARD JITNE BHI TERE NAAM MERE KAR DE
ASHQ PALKON PE SAJATA KYON HAI

PALKEN UTHNE DE GIRNE DE ZARA
YE SITAM WAQT PE DHATA KYON HAI

KOUN AAYEGA IDHAR ,IS DAR PAR
DIYA DAHLEEJ PE JALATA KYON HAI

MAI TERA KOI NAHI KYON FIR BHI
BEKHUDI ME PAAS BULATA KYON HAI

GAIR SE BAAT OR NAZAR HAI MUJH PAR
BERUKHI AISI MUJHKO DIKHATA KYON HAI


Very Impressive .....very touching.....mamta Ji ! nice one... !
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2010, 01:37:57 PM »
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dhanyavaad Naresh!aap ki sarahana ki hamesha khwaishmand rahoongi.
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2010, 12:28:34 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah Mamta ji Wah... kya kehne... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2010, 10:46:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Klaskar ji!
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2010, 12:55:38 AM »
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kya baat hai mamtaji, aap bahut accha likhti hai,
kailash pandey dubai
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2010, 10:12:19 AM »
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Kailash bhai! Aap kee houslaa afzai dil ko khushee se bhar detee hai ....bahut bahut shukriyaa.....
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2010, 10:48:48 AM »
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AANKH SE AANKH CHURATA KYON HAI
BARHAMI MUJHSE CHUPATA KYON HAI

MERI KHATA, LAKH SAZAYEN DE DE
UNGALI MAHFIL ME UTHATA KYON HAI

DARD JITNE BHI TERE NAAM MERE KAR DE
ASHQ PALKON PE SAJATA KYON HAI

PALKEN UTHNE DE GIRNE DE ZARA
YE SITAM WAQT PE DHATA KYON HAI

KOUN AAYEGA IDHAR ,IS DAR PAR
DIYA DAHLEEJ PE JALATA KYON HAI

MAI TERA KOI NAHI KYON FIR BHI
BEKHUDI ME PAAS BULATA KYON HAI

GAIR SE BAAT OR NAZAR HAI MUJH PAR
BERUKHI AISI MUJHKO DIKHATA KYON HAI


bahut sundar peshkash hai aap ki Mamta Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2010, 11:44:48 AM »
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bahut khoob mamta di...
2nd wala behad khoobsurati se gada gaya he..

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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2010, 11:48:37 AM »
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bht khub mamta ji..behad khubsurat shikayat
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2010, 02:40:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Rajesh jee!
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2010, 02:42:46 PM »
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Yaqeenan is gazal kaa sahee sheershak aap ne hee diyaa Kasak jee...shukriyaa....
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«Reply #12 on: December 02, 2010, 02:46:36 PM »
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Abhi ye punarjeevit rachna hai .Kailash Pandey jee ne is par likh kar ise punrjeevit kiyaa hai...saraahane ke liye behad shukriyaa....
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2010, 04:31:51 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Mamta Ji
Bohat Achha Laga Aapko Padkar
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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2010, 10:19:12 PM »
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Shukriyaa Shiba jee!
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