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apnaa gham bhool ke auroN ko haNsaayaa jaaye
marham e zakhm kaheen aur lagaayaa jaaye
de ke khushiyaaN unhe dil shaad huaa hai apnaa
aisee shaadaabee ko kuchh aur badhaayaa jaaye
kyaa kamee mujhme nazar aaye mai kyaa jaanoo
aaenaa mujhko kisee tour dikhaayaa jaaye
khudgaraz zindagee pe laanat hai
jazba e nek karam dil me jagaayaa jaaye
apne aamaal kaa sarmaayaa lutaa dooN sab par
sachchee neeyat me baraqqat ko badhaayaa jaaye
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2011, 05:21:46 AM » |
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ache khayalat pesh ki hai aapne…
acha laga…
yun beth kar tanha yado me din gujarne se acha hai
kuch kadam auro ko saath nibhaya jaaye…!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2011, 07:03:27 AM » |
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apnaa gham bhool ke auroN ko haNsaayaa jaaye
marham e zakhm kaheen aur lagaayaa jaaye
de ke khushiyaaN unhe dil shaad huaa hai apnaa
aisee shaadaabee ko kuchh aur badhaayaa jaaye
kyaa kamee mujhme nazar aaye mai kyaa jaanoo
aaenaa mujhko kisee tour dikhaayaa jaaye
khudgaraz zindagee pe laanat hai
jazba e nek karam dil me jagaayaa jaaye
apne aamaal kaa sarmaayaa lutaa dooN sab par
sachchee neeyat me baraqqat ko badhaayaa jaaye
Mamta Bajpai
bahut nek jazbe ka mozahera kiya hai aapne mamta ji |
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2011, 07:16:03 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa S F Jee! je aap se mai isee sambodhan se mukhaatib houngee.......vajah aap ko aap ke id name se mukhaatib hone ko meraa dil gawaaraa nahee kartaa....jo shairy ke aalaa soch kaa maalik ho woh sarfira ho hee nahee saktaa....
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2011, 07:19:02 AM » |
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jee ek baat to kahnaa hee bhool gayee woh ye keh aap ne bhee nek mashwarah pesh kiyaa hai qaabil e gour hai...shukriyaa..
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2011, 07:21:14 AM » |
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oopar waale kee mehar hum par hai Adil jee jo nek khayaaloN se humaare zehan ko roshan kar rahaa hai.....gazal pasand farmaane kaa behad shukriyaa jee!
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2011, 07:52:10 AM » |
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Achchhe ghazal hai..Mamta Ji
kahte rahiye..
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2011, 08:07:04 AM » |
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uparwale ki aisi mehar aap par hamesha bani rahe… oopar waale kee mehar hum par hai Adil jee jo nek khayaaloN se humaare zehan ko roshan kar rahaa hai.....gazal pasand farmaane kaa behad shukriyaa jee!
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2011, 08:42:17 AM » |
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Shukriyaa S F jee!
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2011, 08:42:48 AM » |
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shukriyaa Satish jee!
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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2011, 08:54:20 AM » |
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Shukriyaa khwaish jee!
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2011, 08:56:16 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa S F Jee! je aap se mai isee sambodhan se mukhaatib houngee.......vajah aap ko aap ke id name se mukhaatib hone ko meraa dil gawaaraa nahee kartaa....jo shairy ke aalaa soch kaa maalik ho woh sarfira ho hee nahee saktaa....
itni tarif ke lie i hav no alfaaz for sukriya… muje jo marzi kah lo aap sarfira ko itna maan pahle nai mila… sukriya thanx dhanyabad |
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2011, 11:42:30 AM » |
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bht bht khoob mamta di.....
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2011, 12:39:15 PM » |
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Shukriyaa Priyaa!
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