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Apna chehara tu wahee shokh nooraanee rakhna
tujhko pahchaan looN koi to nishaanee rakhnaa
shiddat e pyaas jalaa detee hai tan ko mann ko
HaaN yahee soch pariNdoN ko bhee paanee rakhna
sust qadmoN se bahut door hai maNzil kaa mukaam
apne qadmoN me hawaaoN see rawaanee rakhnaa
thokreN khaa ke abas waqt bitaa dete ho
de sabaq yaad wo har ek kahaanee rakhnaa
bhool jaa dard sabhee gham ke fasaane bhee sabhee
dil ko bahlaaye jo har yaad suhaanee rakhnaa
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2010, 09:52:11 AM » |
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maine yun to kai bar mehlon ko khak hote dekha hai
bas yahi soch apni chhat gareebon tak taanee rakhna~
maja aaya ..mamta diii...bahut khoob likhahai apne..
dher sari daad~
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2010, 11:27:49 AM » |
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di ke kisi kone me thodi si jagah baaki rakhna.. bhule se bhi na bhulo wo yaad purani rakhna.. **** aapki to baat hi nirali hai Mamta jee!!!! dil garden garden ho gaya fir se  ** |
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«Reply #3 on: November 12, 2010, 01:00:34 PM » |
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Abhi waqai ma'anikhaiz likha hai tum ne sach-much mazaa aa gayaa.
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2010, 01:04:12 PM » |
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Subhash jee! kya baat hai! badi sada or pyaari si baat kah gaye aap.aap ke dil ke baagheeche me bahaar kee aamad bani rahe...inhee duaaoNke saath ....
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2010, 01:48:39 PM » |
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Maan gayi Mamta di....bahut khoob kitni karuna hai Parindo k liye.... "shiddat e pyaas jalaa detee hai tan ko mann ko
HaaN yahee soch pariNdoN ko bhee paanee rakhna"Ye lines dil mai gehre uttar gayee diiiiiiiiiiiiiii Tan kee gatee se kab taiy hotee hain manzilein
Dil-o-deemaag vicharoN ki gati se hoti haasil
Thokerein khaa ke rukk mat jaana o-rahee tu
Sudhaar kar sambhal kar aage kadam badhana tu
[/quote] Apne chehare pe wahee shokh adaayeN rakhna
tumko pahchaan looN koi to nishaanee rakhnaa
shiddat e pyaas jalaa detee hai tan ko mann ko
HaaN yahee soch pariNdoN ko bhee paanee rakhna
sust qadmoN se bahut door hai maNzil kaa mukaam
apne qadmoN me hawaaoN see rawaanee rakhnaa
thokreN khaa ke abas waqt bitaa dete ho
de sabaq yaad wo har ek kahaanee rakhnaa
bhool jaa dard sabhee gham ke fasaane bhee sabhee
dil ko bahlaaye jo har yaad suhaanee rakhnaa
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«Reply #6 on: November 12, 2010, 04:33:10 PM » |
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Koyal kaheeN paRhaa thaa paanee kee ek booNd ke liye kai pariNde apnee jaan se haath dho baithte haiN logoNse guzarish kee gayee keh woh apne gharoN me pariNdoN ke liye paanee rakheN.....yahee baat kaheeN dil me gahare utar gayee or shair ke roop me mukhrit ho gayee.
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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2010, 05:59:59 PM » |
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bahaut hi khoob mamata ji. jitne nafees khayal utna hi sateek aur nafasat bhar andaz e bayaan.
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2010, 05:16:31 AM » |
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Behad se bhee zyadaa shukriyaa Zarra jee! aap ne jin lafzoN me meraa houslaa bulnd kiyaa uske liye dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hooN.
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2010, 07:34:54 AM » |
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Apne chehare pe wahee shokh adaayeN rakhna
tumko pahchaan looN koi to nishaanee rakhnaa
shiddat e pyaas jalaa detee hai tan ko mann ko
HaaN yahee soch pariNdoN ko bhee paanee rakhna
sust qadmoN se bahut door hai maNzil kaa mukaam
apne qadmoN me hawaaoN see rawaanee rakhnaa
thokreN khaa ke abas waqt bitaa dete ho
de sabaq yaad wo har ek kahaanee rakhnaa
bhool jaa dard sabhee gham ke fasaane bhee sabhee
dil ko bahlaaye jo har yaad suhaanee rakhnaa
Mamta Bajpai
wah bahoot hi khoob hamesha ki tarah..badhai
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2010, 09:12:28 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Snjeev!Hameshaa kee tarah saraahane ke liye....
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2010, 09:29:00 AM » |
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Apne chehare pe wahee shokh adaayeN rakhna
tumko pahchaan looN koi to nishaanee rakhnaa
shiddat e pyaas jalaa detee hai tan ko mann ko
HaaN yahee soch pariNdoN ko bhee paanee rakhna
sust qadmoN se bahut door hai maNzil kaa mukaam
apne qadmoN me hawaaoN see rawaanee rakhnaa
thokreN khaa ke abas waqt bitaa dete ho
de sabaq yaad wo har ek kahaanee rakhnaa
bhool jaa dard sabhee gham ke fasaane bhee sabhee
dil ko bahlaaye jo har yaad suhaanee rakhnaa
Mamta Bajpai
mili mohbat mei mujse bus uski yahi nishani hai aaj bhi use soch aa jata meri aankh mei paani hai |
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«Reply #12 on: November 13, 2010, 12:29:04 PM » |
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Haan di mein bhi roj....apne poudho ko jab paani deti hu usske k saath ek bade bowl mai paani rakhti hu....dusre mai Dana..... PARINDO K LIYE...... Koyal kaheeN paRhaa thaa paanee kee ek booNd ke liye kai pariNde apnee jaan se haath dho baithte haiN logoNse guzarish kee gayee keh woh apne gharoN me pariNdoN ke liye paanee rakheN.....yahee baat kaheeN dil me gahare utar gayee or shair ke roop me mukhrit ho gayee.
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2011, 01:46:18 PM » |
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waah Manoj jee kyaa khoob likhaa hai aap ne or tajjub ye ki humaaree nazar se chhupaa rahaa bahut hee khoob.......
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«Reply #14 on: May 04, 2011, 01:51:01 PM » |
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bht bht khoob mamta ji....
sply 1st one...
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