baat chheRhee hee naheeN thee............Mamta Bajpai

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Baat chheRhee hee nahee thee keh fasaane nikle
daastaaN duniyaa kee kyuN tumko sunaane nikle

usne pahchaanaa nahee bheed me tanhaai me
jiske dum par ye shahar apnaa banaane nikle

hum kabhee or manaayenge jashan piyaaloN kaa
hai amaavas abhee hum Gangaa nahaane nikle

sochiye kuchh to zaraa waqt ko haalaatoN ko
bheege mousam me kahaaN aag lagaane nikle

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2011, 07:31:09 PM »
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usne pahchaanaa nahee bheed me tanhaai me
jiske dum par ye shahar apnaa banaane nikle

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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2011, 11:07:18 PM »
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Gazal pasand farmaane kaa behad shukriyaa Rahim jee!
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2011, 12:00:23 PM »
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bht bht khoob mamta di...
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2011, 03:16:45 PM »
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achhe khyaalaat hain mamtaa ji dil se mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2011, 03:25:10 PM »
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mamta ji aapki ye peshkash bahut hi khoobsoorat hai.
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hazir hai.



Mamta ji aap to chhai rehti yo par.
lekin aaj hum bhi aapko kuchh kehne nikle.

Aap jo likhengi kaagaj par.
Hum unhen khud ko samjhane nikle.

Hum to pehchante hain aapko bheed mein .
Tanhai mein yaadon mein kho jaane nikle.
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Baat chheRhee hee nahee thee keh fasaane nikle
daastaaN duniyaa kee kyuN tumko sunaane nikle

usne pahchaanaa nahee bheed me tanhaai me
jiske dum par ye shahar apnaa banaane nikle

hum kabhee or manaayenge jashan piyaaloN kaa
hai amaavas abhee hum Gangaa nahaane nikle

sochiye kuchh to zaraa waqt ko haalaatoN ko
bheege mousam me kahaaN aag lagaane nikle

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2011, 09:50:14 PM »
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Behad shukriyaa Priyaa!
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 09:53:50 PM »
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Saini jee ! aap ke dastkhat apne thread par dekh kar beintehaayee khushee hui...darasl mai bhee aap kee shairi ke e kaayal hooN...........houslaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa........
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2011, 11:21:17 PM »
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Suresh jee! der se jawaab dene ke liye maafee chaahooNgee........badee sharmindagee see ho rahee hai....aap ne jis tarah se mere kalaam ko nawaazaa uske liye dil se shukraguzaar hooN.........par haqeeqat me mai khud ko is qaabil nahee samajhtee ...ye aap kee hee meharbaanee hai jo zarre ko aaftaab banaa diyaa............ek baar phir nazar nawaazee kaa behad shukriyaa...
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2012, 08:46:05 PM »
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Rahim jee! Der se reply dene ke liye sabse pahle aap se maafee chaahtee hoon ......aap kee housla afzai kaa behad shukriyaa.......
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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2012, 03:29:52 PM »
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Baat chheRhee hee nahee thee keh fasaane nikle
daastaaN duniyaa kee kyuN tumko sunaane nikle

usne pahchaanaa nahee bheed me tanhaai me
jiske dum par ye shahar apnaa banaane nikle

hum kabhee or manaayenge jashan piyaaloN kaa
hai amaavas abhee hum Gangaa nahaane nikle

sochiye kuchh to zaraa waqt ko haalaatoN ko
bheege mousam me kahaaN aag lagaane nikle

Mamta Bajpai


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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2012, 08:17:23 PM »
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Waaah waaaah waaah kitani khoobsooratee se aap ne is ek sher ke zariyepoore gazal kaa lubbolubaab saamne rakh diyaa............behd shukriyaa Adil jee!
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