Dard mit_ta hee naheeN...............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on November 14, 2010, 03:27:34 PM
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Dard mit_ta hee naheeN laakh dawaayeN de do
neeNd se jaagooN naheeN aisee duaayeN de do

mujhko darr lagne lagaa apnee hee parchhaayeeN se
jo mujhe khud me chhupaa le woh kabaayeN de do

aag bhaRkee hai jo baarish me to kyaa keejiyegaa
jo use raakh banaa de woh hawaayeN de do

thak ke khaamosh hui meri zubaaN kyaa keeje
lout aayeN woh unheN aisee sadaayeN de do

naam ulfat kaa rahe duniyaa me sadiyoN tak
ho karam mujh pe mujhe aisee wafaayeN de do

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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2010, 03:54:03 PM »
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Mamtaa jee Aadaab!

Kafi dino bad humara yahaaN aana hua hai.. aur us per aapki yeH gazal Masha Allah ... Usual Smile

Abhi matla hi padhe hai Daad khususan matle ke liye...
Humare dil ki baat kahi hai aisa laga hume... Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam per aate hai... Usual Smile         



Dard mit_ta hee naheeN laakh dawaayeN de do
neeNd se jaagooN naheeN aisee duaayeN de do

Kia baat hai mamta Jee bahot umdaa Masha Allah kia kamaal ka sher kaha hai aapne dil se daad kabool kijiye... Usual Smile         


mujhko darr lagne lagaa apnee hee parchhaayeeN se
jo mujhe khud me chhupaa lo woh kabaayeN de do

Sher achcha jee per ..... Misra e sani meiN chupaa "le" chahhiye tha humare hisab se... sirf lo ki wajaah se kuch nahi bahot kuch ajeeb sa sher lagne laga hai.. Usual Smile         


aag bhaRkee hai jo baarish me to kyaa keejiyegaa
jo use raakh banaa de woh hawaayeN de do

Oye hoye Masha Allah Masha Allah Kia shayari ki hai mohatarma.... wakai behad khoob sher kaha hai... Behad shayarana..... Dil se daad is sher per..... Usual Smile         


thak ke khaamosh hui meri zubaaN kyaa keeje
lout aayeN woh unheN aisee sadaayeN de do

Hmmm Aameen Allah aapki dua kabool kareN Jee... Usual Smile Achcha sher hai daad         


naam ulfat kaa rahe duniyaa me sadiyoN tak
ho karam mujh pe mujhe aisee wafaayeN de do

Hmm misra e sani hume kuch kamzor laga ... Humare hisab se aise hona chahiye tha bher meiN lana aapka kaam hai:P sirf khayaal dekh lijiye.... Usual Smile

Naam ulfat ka rahe duniyaa meiN sadiyoN tak
Har shay ki kismat meiN aisee wafaayeN de do         



Mamta Bajpai




Khair mamtaa jee aapki is purkashish kalaam per dheroN daad hazir hai......

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2010, 04:05:34 PM »
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Dard mit_ta hee naheeN laakh dawaayeN de do
neeNd se jaagooN naheeN aisee duaayeN de do

mujhko darr lagne lagaa apnee hee parchhaayeeN se
jo mujhe khud me chhupaa lo woh kabaayeN de do

aag bhaRkee hai jo baarish me to kyaa keejiyegaa
jo use raakh banaa de woh hawaayeN de do

thak ke khaamosh hui meri zubaaN kyaa keeje
lout aayeN woh unheN aisee sadaayeN de do

naam ulfat kaa rahe duniyaa me sadiyoN tak
ho karam mujh pe mujhe aisee wafaayeN de do

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2010, 06:42:57 PM »
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bahaut acchhaa mamata ji. virah ki peerha aur soz e firaq ka evocative bayaan.
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2010, 10:30:58 PM »
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Parvez jee!ek muddat baad aap ko yahaaN dekh dil khushee se bhar gayaa...is beech humaare kuchh kalaam aap kee raah dekhte rah gaye...wahaaN aap kee gair-haazijiri darz hai......
      aaiye gazal ke sahan me aate haiN...'lo'kee jagah 'le' honaa tha..is jagah spl mistake hai...baaqee aap kaa mashwaraa achchha lagaa.Shukriya!
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2010, 11:07:04 PM »
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Shukriya Manoj jee!
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2010, 11:11:33 PM »
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Shukriyaa Zarra jee! aap kee sameeksha ka hume intezaar rahtaa haikyoNki kam shabdoN me aap sab kuch kahne me samarth haiN.   
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2010, 04:41:47 AM »
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dard jo mit jaye dawaaon se,
kya hum bedard na kahlayenge fir hawaon se...
neend se gar jo na jaage hum,
kya bharosa na uth jayega fir humara duwaon se...
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2010, 05:42:42 AM »
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Ulfat par nahin hai zore tera  mera hona
ye to shola hai bas jal k fanna hona....
Dard mit_ta hee naheeN laakh dawaayeN de do
neeNd se jaagooN naheeN aisee duaayeN de do

mujhko darr lagne lagaa apnee hee parchhaayeeN se
jo mujhe khud me chhupaa le woh kabaayeN de do

aag bhaRkee hai jo baarish me to kyaa keejiyegaa
jo use raakh banaa de woh hawaayeN de do

thak ke khaamosh hui meri zubaaN kyaa keeje
lout aayeN woh unheN aisee sadaayeN de do

naam ulfat kaa rahe duniyaa me sadiyoN tak
ho karam mujh pe mujhe aisee wafaayeN de do

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #9 on: November 15, 2010, 07:47:20 AM »
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mamta di....chaliye no comments bas likh deta hun~

apne sare sitam mere naam kar e khuda
mere hisse meri duayen mere mehboob ko de do
ek mujhe de do thodi si jhalak uski
chand or taron ke khwaab mere mehboob ko de do
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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2010, 08:29:19 AM »
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Sushash jee kalaam ko izzat bkshane ke liye dil se shukrguzaar hooN........
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«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2010, 08:32:17 AM »
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Shukriyaa Abhi !aap kee meharbaanee ....khushee hui ...bahut achchha likhaa aap ne ...humaari or se bhee aap ko dher see badhai.....
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«Reply #12 on: November 15, 2010, 08:40:12 AM »
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Shukriyaa Prince!

karam hee karnaa hai to ye karam kar de
mere Khudaa tu meri khwahishoN ko kam kar de

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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2010, 08:44:39 AM »
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Shukriyaa Abhi !aap kee meharbaanee ....khushee hui ...bahut achchha likhaa aap ne ...humaari or se bhee aap ko dher see badhai.....

apka shukriya mamta di...waise hi chhota hun ...meherbani bolke ..or chhota na kijiye...hehehehe
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2010, 02:14:13 PM »
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Abhi bade saahas kaa kaam hai kisee kee prashnsaa karnaa...or woh kaam tum karte ho...iske liye shukriyaa ada karnaa humaaraa farz bantaa hai ........
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