* Bahuwon Ki Baaton Se*

by Roja on January 31, 2009, 05:16:08 PM
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Aankhon mein satrangi sapne Raj Bhawan ke bare mein
Chintaye lekar firte hai log watan ke bare mein..

Kab kaliyon ko khilna hai, kab phoolon ko murjana hai
Kante hi tayi karte hai her baat chaman ke bare mein..

Pehli barish mein hi khul jate hai jod makanon ke
Tum baatein karte ho jane kis sawan ke bare mein..

In kabharon ko padkar kaise so lete hai rahnuma
Surki mein jo chapti hai, her roj watan ke bare mein..

Beton ke mann jahir hote hai bahuwon ki baaton se
Mujhse aur na poocho, mere ghar-aangan ke bare mein..

Sehme-sehme phool batate hai is upwan ki peeda
Mai kya bolu toofanon ke chal-chalan ke bare mein..

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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2009, 05:50:01 PM »
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Aankhon mein satrangi sapne Raj Bhawan ke bare mein
Chintaye lekar firte hai log watan ke bare mein..

Kab kaliyon ko khilna hai, kab phoolon ko murjana hai
Kante hi tayi karte hai her baat chaman ke bare mein..

Pehli barish mein hi khul jate hai jod makanon ke
Tum baatein karte ho jane kis sawan ke bare mein..

In kabharon ko padkar kaise so lete hai rahnuma
Surki mein jo chapti hai, her roj watan ke bare mein..

Beton ke mann jahir hote hai bahuwon ki baaton se
Mujhse aur na poocho, mere ghar-aangan ke bare mein..

Sehme-sehme phool batate hai is upwan ki peeda
Mai kya bolu toofanon ke chal-chalan ke bare mein..



Bahut badhiya roja...

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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2009, 09:47:13 PM »
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Really wonderful Roja Ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2009, 06:18:35 AM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah kya kahene is ghazal ke roja bahen “aaj mujhe kahena padega ke tumhari ghazalon me “ Shrimati Lata Hayat , aur Shrimati “Dipti Mishra” Jaise umda shayaron ki shayari ko mahesoos kiya ja sakta hai !! Qaas taur pe apki ghazal ka ye sher zabardast tamacha hai watan ke har na qabil rahenuma ke liye !! kya wazan diya hai is sher ne puri ghazal ko !! Allah tumhare kalam ko izzath de roja kya likha hai lajawab koi jawab nahi mere paas likhne ko !!

Paheli barish me hi khul jate hain jod makano ke !!
Tum baten karte ho jane kiss sawan ke bare me !!

………….. ……..Roja…………………….

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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2009, 07:10:32 AM »
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Bahut badhiya roja...

Thanks Hasina dear
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2009, 07:13:42 AM »
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Really wonderful Roja Ji

Thank you Rajesh Harish ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2009, 07:24:00 AM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah kya kahene is ghazal ke roja bahen “aaj mujhe kahena padega ke tumhari ghazalon me “ Shrimati Lata Hayat , aur Shrimati “Dipti Mishra” Jaise umda shayaron ki shayari ko mahesoos kiya ja sakta hai !! Qaas taur pe apki ghazal ka ye sher zabardast tamacha hai watan ke har na qabil rahenuma ke liye !! kya wazan diya hai is sher ne puri ghazal ko !! Allah tumhare kalam ko izzath de roja kya likha hai lajawab koi jawab nahi mere paas likhne ko !!

Paheli hi barish khul jate hain jod makano ke !!
Tum baten karte ho jane kiss jawan ke bare me !!

………….. ……..Roja…………………….

Qadeer Toopchi

Aap ke tareef ko padkar........oh my god, you made me speechless.
Thank you ..thank you..very much for your appreciations..
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