***bandish***

by kaushikbhawna008 on August 27, 2008, 09:08:03 AM
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Uljhano ki hai bandish bekarar bohut hain
Saamne hai manzil par laachar bohut hain
Bekhudi ne hamko sataya hai itna
Ham khud ab dard k talabgar khud hain

Bhukh se tadpe hote to koi khila deta khana
Par kya karein ki bhuke pyaar k ham hain
Pyaas lagi to aankhon ko bhigo pyaas bhuja li
Kaun kehta hai ki mujhmei aag kam hai

Sochti hoon bohut magar kar kuch nahi pati
Kya karein meri aankhon mei khwaab anek hain
Dosh kisko du kisko batau gunahgaar mein
Kya karein yahan  apne armaano k khud qatil ham hain

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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 09:12:41 AM »
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 Applause Applausebahoot umda peshkash bhawna ji.....pahli chaar line to itni dhamakedaar hain ki goonj ab tak kaano me hai........likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 09:14:51 AM »
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NICE CREATION,
KAUSHIK,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 09:25:28 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya bekarar ji
shukriya shally ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 09:35:35 AM »
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AAPKE KHAYAL KI MAIN KADR KARTA HU BHAVNA PAR KAHI KAHI ALFAZ GADBADA SE GAYE. SORRY MAZA NAHI AAYA HOPE U DONT MIND PAR MERI IS AADAT SE BOHAT LOGH PARESHAN HAIN BAS MAIN BINA KAHE REH NAHI SAKTA.
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2008, 10:39:53 AM »
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Nice One Kaushik Ji,.
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2008, 05:22:10 PM »
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Very nice lines bhawana dear.. Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2008, 07:52:43 AM »
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shukriya honey ji
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