be-asar .............(K_A)

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                            lamhaa-lamhaa  aisii  wafaa  jaan   padtii  hai!
                            ke qaid-e-ba-moshaqqat kii sazaa jaan padtii hai!!

                            chundd kapdo.n mein hii liptaa husn aaj saraapaa!
                            zeenat-e-haseena -waa- hayaa  jaan  padtii   hai!

                            mizaaj-e-sukhnwar   pe  hai  asar  zamaane   kaa!
                            zindaa   ghazal   bhii  qazaa  jaan  padtii  hai!

                            rudaad-e-ishq  abb  kitaabo.n  kii  zeenat banii!
                            ke  mohabbat  zindagii se khafaa jaan padtii hai!

                            lailaa  ki  aah,  kahaan  majnoo  saa deewanapan!
                            aashiqii aaj saraa-sar bad-mazaa jaan padtii hai!

                            chot khaaye hue ko  sharaab  hii khaamosh jaanye!
                            azal se hii dard-e-dil kii dawaa jaan padtii hai!!


                   

                                                           

                           

                           

                           
                           

                           

                           
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2014, 09:47:43 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut hi khub khamoshji....
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2014, 11:25:56 AM »
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                            lamhaa-lamhaa  aisii  wafaa  jaan   padtii  hai!
                            ke qaid-e-ba-moshaqqat kii sazaa jaan padtii hai!!

                            chundd kapdo.n mein hii liptaa husn aaj saraapaa!
                            zeenat-e-haseena -waa- hayaa  jaan  padtii   hai!

                            mizaaj-e-sukhnwar   pe  hai  asar  zamaane   kaa!
                            zindaa   ghazal   bhii  qazaa  jaan  padtii  hai!

                            rudaad-e-ishq  abb  kitaabo.n  kii  zeenat banii!
                            ke  mohabbat  zindagii se khafaa jaan padtii hai!

                            lailaa  ki  aah,  kahaan  majnoo  saa deewanapan!
                            aashiqii aaj saraa-sar bad-mazaa jaan padtii hai!

                            chot khaaye hue ko  sharaab  hii khaamosh jaanye!
                            azal se hii dard-e-dil kii dawaa jaan padtii hai!!


                   

                                                           

                           

                           

                           
                           

                           

                           

I am less aware of urdu words but acha laga apki kavita padke
.......nice
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2014, 12:20:10 PM »
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Waah , bahut khoob khamosh Awa a saheb
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2014, 12:25:48 PM »
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वाह....वाह.....

बहुत ही खूब.....

ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.....

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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2014, 06:44:48 AM »
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                            lamhaa-lamhaa  aisii  wafaa  jaan   padtii  hai!
                            ke qaid-e-ba-moshaqqat kii sazaa jaan padtii hai!!

                            chundd kapdo.n mein hii liptaa husn aaj saraapaa!
                            zeenat-e-haseena -waa- hayaa  jaan  padtii   hai!

                            mizaaj-e-sukhnwar   pe  hai  asar  zamaane   kaa!
                            zindaa   ghazal   bhii  qazaa  jaan  padtii  hai!

                            rudaad-e-ishq  abb  kitaabo.n  kii  zeenat banii!
                            ke  mohabbat  zindagii se khafaa jaan padtii hai!

                            lailaa  ki  aah,  kahaan  majnoo  saa deewanapan!
                            aashiqii aaj saraa-sar bad-mazaa jaan padtii hai!

                            chot khaaye hue ko  sharaab  hii khaamosh jaanye!
                            azal se hii dard-e-dil kii dawaa jaan padtii hai!!


                   

                                                           

                           

                           

                           
                           

                           

                           



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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2014, 12:46:04 AM »
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bahut aalaa khamosh ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2015, 01:56:23 PM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut hi khub khamoshji....


thanx-MM
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2015, 01:47:27 PM »
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I am less aware of urdu words but acha laga apki kavita padke
.......nice

thanx
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