BETI KI MANSHA ...sheba

by Sheba on February 03, 2011, 09:54:33 AM
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                             hai majbur tu to bataa mujhe,
                             mile khushi gar to sataa mujhe,

                             na tadap apni pahchan ke liye,
                             bachtaa hai wajood to mitaa mujhe,

                             hoon tere chaman ki ek phool main bhi,
                             unn jaisi nahin to hataa mujhe,

                             karuon guzarish main teri khawahish se,
                             manzil ka apne zara de pataa mujhe,

                             muskura le sheba kuch dair ke liye...!
                             rah kar udaas na de sazaa mujhe......!!
                            

                            
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 10:03:14 AM »
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behtreeeen............tareef ke shabdon ki seema se pare......bahoot marmik.....daad kabool karen...sheba ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 10:19:59 AM »
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Bahut he maarmik kavita....ek beti k mann ka dard....
majboor maata-pitaa se shikaayat bhari baat-cheet....
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Mein kheelee tumhare chaman mai
Kya isme Meri khata Bataa mujhe

Samaaj k reeti-reewaaj tumhare
Phir inki hai kyu sajjaa mujhe

Lagti hoon bojh tou beshaq mita mujhe
Anchahee hu mein ehsaas na dila mujhe









Quote from: Sheba on February 03, 2011, 09:54:33 AM
                            hai majbur tu to bataa mujhe,
                             mile khushi gar to sataa mujhe,

                             na tadap apni pahchan ke liye,
                             bachtaa hai wajood to mitaa mujhe,

                             hoon tere chaman ki ek phool main bhi,
                             unn jaisi nahin to hataa mujhe,

                             karuon guzarish main teri khawahish se,
                             manzil ka apne zara de pataa mujhe,

                             muskura le sheba kuch dair ke liye...!
                             udaas rah kar na de sazaa mujhe......!!
                            

                            
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 10:33:39 AM »
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hun mai bhi tere hi lahoo ka ik karta
isme hai kaun sa--
koosur mera bata mujhe

muraad anchahee hun mai gar
kar shikayat iska ab ---
yun bekaqdri ka ehsaas na jata mujhe

parayadhan samjh kar
aaj hi
wajood mera---
mita de aur apne siskte dil se hata mujhe
""
aapko salaam Sheba jee--
aisi rachna likhna har kisi ke bas ki nahi.
aaj bhi betiyon ko anchahee maana jaata hai wo bhi achhe se achhe logo ke ghar me.
"
thanx
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 12:21:33 PM »
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hmmmmm..... as usual...
mindblowing creation sheba ji....
bht bht khoob....
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 01:32:35 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 03, 2011, 09:54:33 AM
                            hai majbur tu to bataa mujhe,
                             mile khushi gar to sataa mujhe,

                             na tadap apni pahchan ke liye,
                             bachtaa hai wajood to mitaa mujhe,

                             hoon tere chaman ki ek phool main bhi,
                             unn jaisi nahin to hataa mujhe,

                             karuon guzarish main teri khawahish se,
                             manzil ka apne zara de pataa mujhe,

                             muskura le sheba kuch dair ke liye...!
                             udaas rah kar na de sazaa mujhe......!!
                            

                            

Bahut Zabardast ... bahut sacchaai ke saath .... sach ko dikhaaya hai ... aapne .... Sheba Ji ! taareef ke liye jahaaN shabd kam padh jaate hai ... aisa likha hai aapne ... bahut khoob !!!

dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2011, 08:25:37 AM »
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really bahut khoob achha likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2011, 02:11:40 PM »
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BAhut Khub Sheba Ji ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2011, 09:05:42 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 03, 2011, 09:54:33 AM
                             hai majbur tu to bataa mujhe,
                             mile khushi gar to sataa mujhe,

                             na tadap apni pahchan ke liye,
                             bachtaa hai wajood to mitaa mujhe,

                             hoon tere chaman ki ek phool main bhi,
                             unn jaisi nahin to hataa mujhe,

                             karuon guzarish main teri khawahish se,
                             manzil ka apne zara de pataa mujhe,

                             muskura le sheba kuch dair ke liye...!
                             udaas rah kar na de sazaa mujhe......!!
                             

                             

Sheba Ji kya kahoon tareef mein!!!!

Itna Kehs akta Hoon Ke Aap Mere Sabse pasandida Shayara mein Ek Ho..

Kitni Asaani Se Aapne Woh Baatein Keh di Jo Dil Mein Qaid Hi reh Jaati hai..


bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Shebaji...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2011, 10:08:03 AM »
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Bohout hi khob sheba.. Ji.. aeisa lagta hai k aap ne Dard se dubi Betiyon ki dil ki baat keh li.. Gud Work..  Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

-SKY-
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2011, 10:19:23 AM »
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Wah Wah Bohat Badhiya Sheba Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2011, 10:25:42 AM »
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Quote from: Niha Khan on May 03, 2011, 10:19:23 AM
Wah Wah Bohat Badhiya Sheba Ji Applause Applause Applause

thank u nisha khan
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2011, 10:27:03 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 03, 2011, 10:03:14 AM
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behtreeeen............tareef ke shabdon ki seema se pare......bahoot marmik.....daad kabool karen...sheba ji

thanks bekaraar ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2011, 10:27:53 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 03, 2011, 10:19:59 AM
Bahut he maarmik kavita....ek beti k mann ka dard....
majboor maata-pitaa se shikaayat bhari baat-cheet....
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Mein kheelee tumhare chaman mai
Kya isme Meri khata Bataa mujhe

Samaaj k reeti-reewaaj tumhare
Phir inki hai kyu sajjaa mujhe

Lagti hoon bojh tou beshaq mita mujhe
Anchahee hu mein ehsaas na dila mujhe










thank u koyal ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2011, 10:31:14 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 03, 2011, 10:33:39 AM
hun mai bhi tere hi lahoo ka ik karta
isme hai kaun sa--
koosur mera bata mujhe

muraad anchahee hun mai gar
kar shikayat iska ab ---
yun bekaqdri ka ehsaas na jata mujhe

parayadhan samjh kar
aaj hi
wajood mera---
mita de aur apne siskte dil se hata mujhe
""
aapko salaam Sheba jee--
aisi rachna likhna har kisi ke bas ki nahi.
aaj bhi betiyon ko anchahee maana jaata hai wo bhi achhe se achhe logo ke ghar me.
"
thanx
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thank u nirala ji
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