bhala main kon hota hoon (by vb)

by vb on September 19, 2012, 04:10:17 PM
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Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye tum say poochhnay wala

K tum khamoshe si ku ho?
Tumhen kis ne sataya hay?
Tumhari dil ki duniya ko
Kisi ne aazmaaya hay?

Puraanay geet furqat kay
Tum akser gungunaati ho
Kahin chaahat ki baaten hon
To tum kuchh kho si jaati ho

Wo bachpan k haseen sapnay
Kya ab bhe yaad aatay hen?
Wo jo beetay thay college men
Wo din ab bhe bulaatay hen?

Wahan pardase men kunkar
Tumhaaray din guzartay hen?
Falak say toot kar taaray
Tumhaari maang bhartay hen?

Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye tum say poochhnay wala

Meri yaadon ki aahat ne
Rulaya tu nahi tum ko?
Meray baykaar geeton ne
Dukhaaya tu nahi tum ko?

Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye sub kuchh poochhnay wala

Magar kuchh roze jo meray
Tumharay saath beetay hen
Nishaan chhoray hen jo tum ne
Wo tum say pooch saktay hen
K tum say poochhnay wala
Main aakhir kon hota hoon
Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye tum say poochhnay wala


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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2012, 04:16:33 PM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:Tumhai muskuratay dekhu yeh tamana hai mayre
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2012, 04:18:34 PM »
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bahut bahut  acha likha hai...
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2012, 04:22:42 PM »
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bahut khub bahut badhiya bahut lambe samay  baad aapka likha padhne ko mil raha hai vb ji

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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2012, 05:01:53 PM »
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Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye tum say poochhnay wala

K tum khamoshe si ku ho?
Tumhen kis ne sataya hay?
Tumhari dil ki duniya ko
Kisi ne aazmaaya hay?

Puraanay geet furqat kay
Tum akser gungunaati ho
Kahin chaahat ki baaten hon
To tum kuchh kho si jaati ho

Wo bachpan k haseen sapnay
Kya ab bhe yaad aatay hen?
Wo jo beetay thay college men
Wo din ab bhe bulaatay hen?

Wahan pardase men kunkar
Tumhaaray din guzartay hen?
Falak say toot kar taaray
Tumhaari maang bhartay hen?

Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye tum say poochhnay wala

Meri yaadon ki aahat ne
Rulaya tu nahi tum ko?
Meray baykaar geeton ne
Dukhaaya tu nahi tum ko?

Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye sub kuchh poochhnay wala

Magar kuchh roze jo meray
Tumharay saath beetay hen
Nishaan chhoray hen jo tum ne
Wo tum say pooch saktay hen
K tum say poochhnay wala
Main aakhir kon hota hoon
Bhala main kon hota hoon
Ye tum say poochhnay wala


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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2012, 01:00:49 AM »
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bahut umda, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2012, 04:49:40 AM »
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shukriya aap sub ka...
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2012, 05:44:26 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2012, 11:01:40 AM »
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wowwwwww ek aur masta mast mastam post....... Vb ji u r just awesome........
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 11:21:13 AM »
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Wah wah bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash Bv ji.great work. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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shukriya *KasaK*....Dil Ki jee and madhuwesh jee...
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2012, 11:46:44 AM »
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aap likhen wo purane kaise ho sakte hain VB ji.......
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