**Bhool gaye**by Rahim

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Meri tanhai ka andaza woh kya lagaenge Rahim,
Jo bhool gaye mujhe chaar kadam dhoor chalte hi...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2009, 05:02:13 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2009, 10:42:20 PM »
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Very touching Lines Rahim bhai.bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2009, 04:58:52 AM »
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bahut khoob Rahim Bhai Applause Applause Applause
nice lines....

Kyun mere humraaz tune dil ki haalt poonch li
tujhko bhi rona pada mujhe bhula dene ke baad...{NM}
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2009, 05:01:31 AM »
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Meri tanhai ka andaza woh kya lagaenge Rahim,
Jo bhool gaye mujhe chaar kadam dhoor chalte hi...

~Rahim~
KYA BAAT HAI   RAHIM JI....

MERI TANHAI KA ANDAZA WO KYA LAGAENGE "RAHIM"
USNE TO HAMSE PYAAR KIYA HI NAHIN,
TANHAI KYA HOTI HAI WO KYA JAANE.
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2009, 05:07:54 AM »
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Excellent lines Cara ji,really touched.marvelous creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2009, 10:00:01 AM »
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Shukriya Sabhi ka...

Nice lines Cara jee aur Kashish di...
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2009, 04:46:21 AM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2009, 09:52:34 AM »
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Shukriya Rishi bhaijan..
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2009, 10:29:45 AM »
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wah Rahim Bhai.. bahut Khoooooooob dost.. 2 Line Me Bahut Kuch kaha diya aapne.. Nice one.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2009, 12:25:13 PM »
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Shukriya Vikas bhaijan... Wakei bahaut kuch kehdia maine...Kabhi kabhi sochta hun ager hum shayar na hote aur yeh dard lavzon main utar na sakte toh ab tak ussi dard ke angaan main mar chuke hote...
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