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                              girtey   hain  sambhal  jaate  hain!
                              aage  wahi  dar-asal  jaate   hain!!

                              waqt bhi thhaga-thhaga sa rahta hai!
                              pal  mein hum jo badal  jaate  hain!!

                              mashwera  muft mein dene wale aksar!
                              aaii   musibat to  nikal jaate hain!!

                              shahr-qazi ke fatwe pe dhyaan na do!
                              aaj  aate  hain  ye  kal jaate hain!!

                              khayaal andhero.n mein jo surzad hote!
                              ujaale  mein  ye  tal  jaate   hain!!

                              kisii ne  sach kaha aag ka dariya hai!
                              dekhiye parwaane kaise jal jaate hain!!


                              

                              
                              
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2013, 02:06:45 AM »
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                              girtey   hain  sambhal  jaate  hain!
                              aage  wahi  dar-asal  jaate   hain!!

                              waqt bhi thhaga-thhaga sa rahta hai!
                              pal  mein hum jo badal  jaate  hain!!

                              mashwera  muft mein dene wale aksar!
                              aaii   musibat to  nikal jaate hain!!

                              shahr-qazi ke fatwe pe dhyaan na do!
                              aaj  aate  hain  ye  kal jaate hain!!

                              ek waswasa  sa rahta hai zulmaat ka!
                              ujalaa  aate  hii  tal  jaate  hain!!

                              kisii ne  sach kaha aag ka dariya hai!
                              dekhiye parwaane kaise jal jaate hain!!


                             

                             
                             
Bahut Khoob.!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2013, 02:15:04 AM »
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K A jee Aadaab... !


Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne... kitne gerhe aur khoob khayaaloN ko umaa ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai janab...

Gazab ke ashaar kahe haiN aapne sabhi... behad umdaa kalaam huyi janab... is laajawaab kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...






                              girtey   hain  sambhal  jaate  hain!
                              aage  wahi  dar-asal  jaate   hain!!

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob achcha matla hua hai daad...


                              waqt bhi thhaga-thhaga sa rahta hai!
                              pal  mein hum jo badal  jaate  hain!!

WaaH waaH kia kahne bahut khoob...


                              mashwera  muft mein dene wale aksar!
                              aaii   musibat to  nikal jaate hain!!

YeH behad lajwaab kaha hai janab daad...


                              shahr-qazi ke fatwe pe dhyaan na do!
                              aaj  aate  hain  ye  kal jaate hain!!

Bahut sahiN janab kia kahne TaNziyaa hai par haqeekhat hai... daad daad...


                              ek waswasa  sa rahta hai zulmaat ka!
                              ujalaa  aate  hii  tal  jaate  hain!!

Janab yeH sher khul nahi paayaa hum par... icon_scratch


                              kisii ne  sach kaha aag ka dariya hai!
                              dekhiye parwaane kaise jal jaate hain!!


Bahut khoob janab daad...



                             

                             
                             
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2013, 02:59:07 AM »
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bahot achey - dheron daaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2013, 03:08:44 AM »
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Waah waah k.a ji ji bohut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2013, 03:14:29 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2013, 04:11:33 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2013, 05:04:04 AM »
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Waah .... Bahaut khoob ghazal kahi KA ji ....kaafee gehree fiqr dekhne ko milee .... Daad !
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2013, 07:17:04 AM »
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girtey hain sambhal jaate hain!
aage wahi dar-asal jaate hain!!

Is Sher Ki Jitni Tareef Karun Kam Hai


shahr-qazi ke fatwe pe dhyaan na do!
aaj aate hain ye kal jaate hain!!

Ispe Itna Hi Kahunga Nafs Ke Khilaf
Baat Aksar  Kadwi Hi Lagti Hai Janaab



Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 07:34:52 AM »
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mashwera  muft mein dene wale aksar!
aaii   musibat to  nikal jaate hain!!

bahut khooob  
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2013, 03:53:00 PM »
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girtey   hain  sambhal  jaate  hain!
aage  wahi  dar-asal  jaate   hain!!

mashwera  muft mein dene wale aksar!
aaii   musibat to  nikal jaate hain!!

bahut khoob KA jee
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2013, 07:36:20 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2013, 02:51:10 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaah aur sirf waaaaaaaaaaaaah is kalaam par.. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin.. dilse hazaron daad qubool kijiyega..
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«Reply #13 on: October 23, 2013, 10:21:13 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.!!


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«Reply #14 on: October 27, 2013, 01:16:26 AM »
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K A jee Aadaab... !


Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne... kitne gerhe aur khoob khayaaloN ko umaa ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai janab...

Gazab ke ashaar kahe haiN aapne sabhi... behad umdaa kalaam huyi janab... is laajawaab kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...




thanx uss sher ko main ne correct kiya hai main bhi confuse tha,
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