Bohot Yaad Aati Hai Maa.....!!

by Talat on March 01, 2010, 07:40:51 PM
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Aaj ammi ko gaye 2 months ho gaye..magar jaise do sadiyaan beet gayi hon...

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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2010, 08:06:44 PM »
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Celmira ji bahut dard bhari kavita aapne likhi apni maa ke yaad mein.dil ko chu gayi.meri yahi duaa hai aap ko allah tala shanti de.samajh mein nahi aati aur kya kanhu aapse.really touched.apna khayal rakhiyega.great creation.
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2010, 09:55:28 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   CELMIRA JI......

MUJHE BHOOT YAAD AATI HAI MAA
JAANTA HUN TU WAPAS NAHI AA SAKHTI HAI MAA
MEH APNE BACHHON KI TOH BAN SAKHTI HUN MAA
PAR APNI TOH NAHIN BAN SAKHTI HUN NA MAA
TERI BHOOT KAMI AAJ MEHSUS HOTI HAI MAA
PAR TERI JAGAH BHI TOH KOI NAHIN BAR SAKHTI MAA...
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2010, 12:27:25 AM »
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Main kya bolu meri kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha .. Aapka yea kalaam dil mea iss kadar utar gaya hai di ki shayad lafz kam pad gaye hai ....

Iss Nazm ki ak ak line Dil ke chupe ehsaaso ko bakoobi byaan kar rahi hai aur bata rahi hai ki ek Beiti ke seene mea sulagate dard ko....

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob . This creation touched my heart and made me cry @!

bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

GOd Bless U Talat di !
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2010, 01:23:48 AM »
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KYA KAHEN CELMIRA JI.
AANSU AA GAYE AANKHON MEIN.
LAFZON KO PIROYA HAI ZAZBAATON MEIN.
LAFZ AAPNE CHODE HI KAHAN.
HUM TAAREEF KAREN KIN ALFAZON MEIN. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2010, 02:13:40 AM »
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Celmira ji bahut dard bhari kavita aapne likhi apni maa ke yaad mein.dil ko chu gayi.meri yahi duaa hai aap ko allah tala shanti de.samajh mein nahi aati aur kya kanhu aapse.really touched.apna khayal rakhiyega.great creation.

Thank you Madhu Ji aapne mere dard ko mehsoos kiya...thanks for the prayers..
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2010, 03:18:54 AM »
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Jo Jazbaat Dil se Utre Ho,Unn Jazbaaton Ke Liye Hum Kya Keh Sakte hai..

Har lafz Sach Ka Aaena Hai..Ek tadap Si mehsoos Hui Iss Nazm mein..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Dost!!!
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2010, 07:15:26 AM »
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bahut hi umda likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2010, 07:18:22 AM »
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Sabar Karp Sis,.
Inshallah Allah Iska Aapko Ajar Dega,.

Allah Reham Kare,.

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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2010, 08:11:25 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   CELMIRA JI......


Shukriya Cara ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2010, 08:12:46 AM »
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Main kya bolu meri kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha .. Aapka yea kalaam dil mea iss kadar utar gaya hai di ki shayad lafz kam pad gaye hai ....

Iss Nazm ki ak ak line Dil ke chupe ehsaaso ko bakoobi byaan kar rahi hai aur bata rahi hai ki ek Beiti ke seene mea sulagate dard ko....

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob . This creation touched my heart and made me cry @!

bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !

GOd Bless U Talat di !


Thank you so much Divs..aaj unki yaad kuch ziyada sata rahi hai....Thanks dear for the comeforting words.....
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2010, 08:18:25 AM »
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Mere Paas Kuch Kahane Ke Liye Lafz Nahi Hai Talat Di.. Bassss Itna Kahunga Ki Dil Se Likha Aapka Yeh Qalaam Dil Tak Utar Gaya..!!  notworthy notworthy

Taareef Me Mere Paas Yeh Taaliyaan Hi Hain..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2010, 08:22:33 AM »
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Dear Talat, aapki ye dard mai samaj sakti hu. Aisa daur se hum guzarke aaye hai. bahut mushkil zarur hai.

Aapne ammi pe bahut bahut accha dil se likha hai. Hamari yahi dua hai k aap ko bhagwan shakti de k ye daur se aap nikal sake.

God bless you dear. Keep smiling always
 
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2010, 10:29:33 AM »
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KYA KAHEN CELMIRA JI.
AANSU AA GAYE AANKHON MEIN.
LAFZON KO PIROYA HAI ZAZBAATON MEIN.
LAFZ AAPNE CHODE HI KAHAN.
HUM TAAREEF KAREN KIN ALFAZON MEIN. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohot shukriya Suresh Ji, aapne in lafzon ki gehraayi mehsoos ki...Thanks a lot..
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2010, 11:45:24 AM »
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very touching.........talat.....dil ko choo liya is rachna ne.......
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