Aaj phir tum bohot yaad aaye !!!!!!

by Talat on June 15, 2005, 05:45:44 PM
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Teri yaadon ne bohot aaj hum ko sataya hai
Aaj phir se humne in askhon ko bahaya hai

Guzre hue lamhe angaare ban ke hain barse
Humare wajood ko aaj phir inhone jalaya hai

Waqt bujha jaata hai har roz ummedain apni
Bujhe hue chiraaghon ko phir humne jalaya hai

Kaise samjhaayen hum bhala is paagal dil ko
Tune to thukraane ka sabab bhi nahi bataya hai

Humne to bas ek hi khushi maangi thi zindagi se
Aur zindagi ne hume ek zindaa laash banaya hai

Khudaya yeh dard ab aur nahin saha jata humse
Tune hume yahan se ab tak kyun nahin bulaya hai !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2005, 05:52:16 PM »
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very nice sis..............its too sad....

humein maloom hai tere dil mein dard ka baseera hai
magar woh konse halaat hain jinhone tujhe ghera hai
 
sad5  sad5  sad5

aap akele nahi sawaar is kashti mein hum bhi hain
haste rehtein hain har waqt magar humein gum bhi hain
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2005, 06:00:35 PM »
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Teri yaadon ne bohot aaj hum ko sataya hai
Aaj phir se humne in askhon ko bahaya hai

Guzre hue lamhe angaare ban ke hain barse
Humare wajood ko aaj phir inhone jalaya hai

Waqt bujha jaata hai har roz ummedain apni
Bujhe hue chiraaghon ko phir humne jalaya hai

Kaise samjhaayen hum bhala is paagal dil ko
Tune to thukraane ka sabab bhi nahi bataya hai

Humne to bas ek hi khushi maangi thi zindagi se
Aur zindagi ne hume ek zindaa laash banaya hai

Khudaya yeh dard ab aur nahin saha jata humse
Tune hume yahan se ab tak kyun nahin bulaya hai !!!!!!!!!


wah Talat,kya kahoon,its so nice....misc. me jitni bhi poems post karti ho sab ek se badhkar ek hoti hain Winking ,excellent ,and very nice nikki sis
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2005, 06:48:46 PM »
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Thanks a lot Nikki ...... n Nidhi........!!!!!!

Bas aise hi likh deti hoon :-( :-(

N very Nice Nikki....... !!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2005, 08:59:41 AM »
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wah talat!!!

"Waqt bujha jaata hai har roz ummedain apni
Bujhe hue chiraaghon ko phir humne jalaya hai "


beautiful lines!!!!


wowwwww nikki!!

bohot bohot acha likha tumne, apni fan list me zara mera bhi nam likh dena!!! really too gud!!!!

kade hai kinare pe gumon ke samundar ke,
door tak kitni kashiryan doob rahi hai,
yaad aa jati hai tab hume apni bhi maut ki,
aur ankhon me kuch boonde chub rahi hai!
jane kyuhume apni maut bhi yaad aa gayi
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2005, 12:56:40 PM »
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Thanks a lot Meena........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2005, 06:54:31 PM »
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Teri yaadon ne bohot aaj hum ko sataya hai
Aaj phir se humne in askhon ko bahaya hai

Guzre hue lamhe angaare ban ke hain barse
Humare wajood ko aaj phir inhone jalaya hai

Waqt bujha jaata hai har roz ummedain apni
Bujhe hue chiraaghon ko phir humne jalaya hai

Kaise samjhaayen hum bhala is paagal dil ko
Tune to thukraane ka sabab bhi nahi bataya hai

Humne to bas ek hi khushi maangi thi zindagi se
Aur zindagi ne hume ek zindaa laash banaya hai

Khudaya yeh dard ab aur nahin saha jata humse
Tune hume yahan se ab tak kyun nahin bulaya hai !!!!!!!!!


wow  wonderfullllllllllllll   talat............kya  khoob  likhi ho.........  aur meenu  ka  utna hi  accha   rely  diya...............

mujhe jindagi  ne  kabhi  waqt  nahi diya muskurane ko
itna  ghum mila  ki aansoon hi nahi  bacha  bahaane  ko
aisi  kya  maine  khata  ki ai  Khudaya
hum  roj  taraste hain  apna  aashiyana banane  ko................
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2005, 08:21:55 PM »
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thanx a lot Nidhi, Talat, n Meena sis........aap logon se hi sikha hai..

Meena sis aap aftaab hain to main zarra hun...............bahut shukriya ...aapko mera likha pasand aya.
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2005, 08:49:43 AM »
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You are welcome Nikki.... n thanks Waheed...n its very nice....
itna hi kahungi...

Aaaj phir jab humne shikwa kiya waqt se
Poocha usne bata tujhe bhala kya ghum hai !!

Jab sochne baithi to main ho gayi sharmsaar
Zindagi ne meri sada hi navaaza hai mujhe !!

Choti choti khushion ko taraste hain kuch log
Yunhi ghumon ka ambaar liye baithi hoon main !!

Khud hoti hoon dukhi, dukhi kar deti hoon dost ko
Par ab is naadan dil ko samjha diya hai maine !!

Honto pe mere ab rahegi muskurahat humesha
Waada wo nibhaungi jo kiya tha kisi se maine !!!

Kuch waqt tak bohot shikwa shikayat kiya tha lekin
Khuda ke saamne sajd-e-shukr ada kiya hai ab maine !!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2005, 09:08:52 AM »
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You are welcome Nikki.... n thanks Waheed...n its very nice....
itna hi kahungi...

Aaaj phir jab humne shikwa kiya waqt se
Poocha usne bata tujhe bhala kya ghum hai !!

Jab sochne baithi to main ho gayi sharmsaar
Zindagi ne meri sada hi navaaza hai mujhe !!

Choti choti khushion ko taraste hain kuch log
Yunhi ghumon ka ambaar liye baithi hoon main !!

Khud hoti hoon dukhi, dukhi kar deti hoon dost ko
Par ab is naadan dil ko samjha diya hai maine !!

Honto pe mere ab rahegi muskurahat humesha
Waada wo nibhaungi jo kiya tha kisi se maine !!!

Kuch waqt tak bohot shikwa shikayat kiya tha lekin
Khuda ke saamne sajd-e-shukr ada kiya hai ab maine !!!
wah Talat,again very nice.

"Yun hi tu sadaa muskuraati rahe,
  pyar aur wafa ko nibhaati rahe,

  gam to milte rehte hain jeevan me.....,
  insaan wahi jo gamon me muskuraata rahe,

  na ruswa ho kabhi tere zindagi ki chahat,
  khushiyan karti rahein teri zindagi ki ibaadat."
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2005, 11:18:28 AM »
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You are welcome Nikki.... n thanks Waheed...n its very nice....
itna hi kahungi...

Aaaj phir jab humne shikwa kiya waqt se
Poocha usne bata tujhe bhala kya ghum hai !!

Jab sochne baithi to main ho gayi sharmsaar
Zindagi ne meri sada hi navaaza hai mujhe !!

Choti choti khushion ko taraste hain kuch log
Yunhi ghumon ka ambaar liye baithi hoon main !!

Khud hoti hoon dukhi, dukhi kar deti hoon dost ko
Par ab is naadan dil ko samjha diya hai maine !!

Honto pe mere ab rahegi muskurahat humesha
Waada wo nibhaungi jo kiya tha kisi se maine !!!

Kuch waqt tak bohot shikwa shikayat kiya tha lekin
Khuda ke saamne sajd-e-shukr ada kiya hai ab maine !!!
wah Talat,again very nice.

"Yun hi tu sadaa muskuraati rahe,
  pyar aur wafa ko nibhaati rahe,

  gam to milte rehte hain jeevan me.....,
  insaan wahi jo gamon me muskuraata rahe,

  na ruswa ho kabhi tere zindagi ki chahat,
  khushiyan karti rahein teri zindagi ki ibaadat."


Thanks a lot Nidhi.... aur bohot hi achcha likha... very encouraging !!!!!! happy9
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2005, 04:37:29 PM »
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very nice sis..............its too sad....

humein maloom hai tere dil mein dard ka baseera hai
magar woh konse halaat hain jinhone tujhe ghera hai
 
sad5  sad5  sad5

aap akele nahi sawaar is kashti mein hum bhi hain
haste rehtein hain har waqt magar humein gum bhi hain


wow  nikki............. kab  likha  tumne...........aaj  main  dekh  raha  hoon......  superbbbbb   nikki     just  two  line mein  bahot kuch  kah diya....

unhi  se  paon  mera  umar bhar  rahe jakhmi
bikhar  gaye jo mere  kayee khawaab toot kar...............
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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2005, 05:16:11 PM »
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You are welcome Nikki.... n thanks Waheed...n its very nice....
itna hi kahungi...

Aaaj phir jab humne shikwa kiya waqt se
Poocha usne bata tujhe bhala kya ghum hai !!

Jab sochne baithi to main ho gayi sharmsaar
Zindagi ne meri sada hi navaaza hai mujhe !!

Choti choti khushion ko taraste hain kuch log
Yunhi ghumon ka ambaar liye baithi hoon main !!

Khud hoti hoon dukhi, dukhi kar deti hoon dost ko
Par ab is naadan dil ko samjha diya hai maine !!

Honto pe mere ab rahegi muskurahat humesha
Waada wo nibhaungi jo kiya tha kisi se maine !!!

Kuch waqt tak bohot shikwa shikayat kiya tha lekin
Khuda ke saamne sajd-e-shukr ada kiya hai ab maine !!!
wah Talat,again very nice.

"Yun hi tu sadaa muskuraati rahe,
  pyar aur wafa ko nibhaati rahe,

  gam to milte rehte hain jeevan me.....,
  insaan wahi jo gamon me muskuraata rahe,

  na ruswa ho kabhi tere zindagi ki chahat,
  khushiyan karti rahein teri zindagi ki ibaadat."


Thanks a lot Nidhi.... aur bohot hi achcha likha... very encouraging !!!!!! happy9


U r most welcome Talat and thanx a lot Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2005, 11:10:22 PM »
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Ae dost itna to yaad kiya hota,
Ek pyaar bhara paigaam hi bhej diya hota,
Kaise jeete hein teri yaad mein,
Ek baar haal to pooch liya hota.
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2005, 01:08:50 PM »
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Teri yaadon ne bohot aaj hum ko sataya hai
Aaj phir se humne in askhon ko bahaya hai

Guzre hue lamhe angaare ban ke hain barse
Humare wajood ko aaj phir inhone jalaya hai

Waqt bujha jaata hai har roz ummedain apni
Bujhe hue chiraaghon ko phir humne jalaya hai

Kaise samjhaayen hum bhala is paagal dil ko
Tune to thukraane ka sabab bhi nahi bataya hai

Humne to bas ek hi khushi maangi thi zindagi se
Aur zindagi ne hume ek zindaa laash banaya hai

Khudaya yeh dard ab aur nahin saha jata humse
Tune hume yahan se ab tak kyun nahin bulaya hai !!!!!!!!!


bahut ache talat
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