chand.hwa aor phool sabi

by aankhain on August 31, 2007, 07:38:10 PM
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ik khwab sjaya tha main ny
ik bagh bnaya tha main ny
khwab main bagh main tenha khra
bohat hi khush , bohat hi khush tha main
chand,hwa aor phool sabhi
mary thy sangi saathi
khushi main hum sub gaaty thy
baatain bohat bnaty thy


ik din ik ajnabi tha aaya
qisa us ny ajeb sunaya
kehny laga bta to zra ?
kon ha tery jesa yaha
main ny kaha k dakh zra
chand,hwa aor phool sabi
mary hain sangi sathi

sun k ye wo husny laga
chand,hwa aor phool sabi ko
ajeb nazer sy takny laga
sub sy yahi kehny laga k
bolo tum b mari tara
chand,hwa oar phool sabi
khamosh khry usy takny lagy
kasy bolty us ki tara
wo to tha pather dill insaa.n
kasy samjhta un ki zubaa.n

phir wo mjh se kehny laga
dakh tera koi nahi yaha
chand,hwa aor phool sabi
koi nahi teri tara

uljha k mjhy wo chala gaya
chand,hwa aor phool sabi ny
chaha bohat samjhana mjhy
lakin main na samjh saka
door sub sy rehny laga
chand.hwa oar phool sabi
phir khamoshi sy rehny lagy

ik din door kahi sy sada thi aai
mjh ko wo bohat hi bhai
phir rozana sada wo aany lagi
bagh se baher bulany lagi

bagh se baher jany ka
koi mjhy resta na mila
chand,hwa aor phool sabi ka
pyar main bhula na saka
phir sada ko main samjhata raha
lakin wo na samjh saki
dhongi mjhy wo kehny lagi
phir rula k mjh ko,wo chali gai

baat mjhy ye samjha gai k
chand,hwa aor phool sabi
mary hain sangi saathi
hoty na ger mary jesy
to kasy mjh ko samjh paaty
chand,hwa aor phool sabi
dikhty to juda hi hain
lakin! sub ik jasy hain
haan! sub mary jesy hain

ab khwab ko thora bedla ha
ab bagh ko thora bedla ha
ab ajnabi na koi aay ga
na hi mjhy uljha paay ga
koi  sada na aay gi
mjhko rula na paay gi

kyo ki

chand,hwa aor phool sabi
mary hain sangi saathi
dikhta hoon main tenha khra
lakin tenhai mary pass nahi
chand ,hwa aor phool sabi
mary hain sangi saathi
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2007, 07:59:22 PM »
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wah wah wah.. bahoot khoob aankhain ji... ek ek line apke dil se sidhi yaha aa gai hai...

Jeevan ki bahoot badi suchaai kahin hai apne... yah waqat her insaan ek baar jaroor aphi life mai dekhta hai..

kuch app jiase samjhdaar waqat per sambhal jaate hai aor kuch ajnabi ki baato mai akar tamam umar ke liye apno ko chord kar sari zindagi dukh uthate hai,....


Too good!!
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2007, 11:51:16 PM »
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Bahut khoob ... jaise pooja di ne kaha..dil se likha hai aapne...
wonderful creation... keep up..Aankhain ji
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aankhain
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2007, 12:01:16 PM »
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hm poja g aor roja g .... main kya kaho ap sy.....ap ny jo main ny likha ...usy perha... mjhy bohat acha laga... aor pooja g jasy mari 1 1 line mary dil sy ap tak aagai... ap ki her line mary dill tak aati ha..

hmm . mjhy umeed nai thi k ap  perho gi ....bus zeyda nahi bolna mjhy ...
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2007, 05:08:35 AM »
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wonder ful  aankein its realyy beauting & heart touching poetry by u.. good keep it up.

keep writing too.....

Divya
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2007, 06:52:15 PM »
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hm poja g aor roja g .... main kya kaho ap sy.....ap ny jo main ny likha ...usy perha... mjhy bohat acha laga... aor pooja g jasy mari 1 1 line mary dil sy ap tak aagai... ap ki her line mary dill tak aati ha..

hmm . mjhy umeed nai thi k ap  perho gi ....bus zeyda nahi bolna mjhy ...


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Umeend hai app issi tarah Yoindia per likhte rahege aor hume padne ka avsar dete rahege.
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