Chhodiye...........mann

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Ahade wafa nibhane ki ye baat chhodiye.
Jhuthe dikhawon wale sab jazbaat chhodiye.

Ek had tak sahan kijiye diniyan ke zor-o-zulm,
Fir mauqa pake khud bhi apna hath chhodiye.

Kuchh din to jeeke dekhiye insan ki tarah,
Ab bandaron wali ye karamat chhodiye.

Ladne lage aapas main bhai se bhai bhi,
Sudharenge kaise aise main haalat chhodiye.

Rasta tumhara aur hamara kuch aur hai,
Nibhna sakega aise to ab sath chhodiye.

Mahfil main apni hamko bulaye wo ek baar,
”Mann” ki nahin hai aisi auqaat chhodiye.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2012, 11:21:10 PM »
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waah mann sahab bohut achi lines hai
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2012, 11:27:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya janab saahillji
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2012, 11:29:31 PM »
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bahot khoob Mann ji--
nice post
daad daad

wo bandaron wali karamaat--ye ashaar mujh par fit h boss tongue3

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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2012, 11:51:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya janab sarfiraji
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2012, 12:27:14 AM »
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jazbaat chhodiye waah waah kyaa khoob kalaa pesh kiya dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2012, 12:54:40 AM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut dhanyawad janab sainiji
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2012, 01:00:23 AM »
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Ahade wafa nibhane ki ye baat chhodiye.
Jhuthe dikhawon wale sab jazwat chhodiye.

Ek had tak sahan kijiye diniyan ke zor-o-zulm,
Fir mauqa pake khud bhi apna hath chhodiye.

Kuchh din to jeeke dekhiye insan ki tarah,
Ab bandaron wali ye karamat chhodiye.

Ladne lage aapas main bhai se bhai bhi,
Sudharenge kaise aise main haalat chhodiye.

Rasta tumhara aur hamara kuch aur hai,
Nibhna sakega aise to ab sath chhodiye.

Mahfil main apni hamko bulaye wo ek baar,
”Mann” ki nahin hai aisi auqaat chhodiye.

Mann
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2012, 01:09:49 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyawad pankajji... yun hi sath dete rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2012, 05:27:25 AM »
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mann Jee Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2012, 06:14:35 AM »
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anahitaji aapka bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2012, 03:47:14 PM »
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Mann Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... bade gehre aur khoob khayaal
rahe janab... kafi achchi kalaam rahi... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashar khoob rahe... Usual Smile
humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rhaiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2012, 04:23:12 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyawad hridayji
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2012, 04:23:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihabji
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