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Dard seene me uthaa rog puraanaa nikalaa
mere humdam ye naheeN jhoothaa fasaanaa nikalaa
door maNzil hai bahut saaNs bhee bojhil hai meree
teraa koochaa hee sahee kuchh to thikaanaa nikalaa
soonee soonee hai dagar aaNkheN meri tarsee haiN
teraa deedaar kiye mujhko zamaanaa nikalaa
yuN to aate naheeN khwaaboN me rulaa jaate ho
ye sanam kaisaa teraa mujhko sataanaa nikalaa
soonee aaNkhoN me diye lab pe teraa naam liye
woh koi or naheeN teraa deevaanaa nikalaa
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 02:47:51 PM » |
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ye dard seene me hi ku uthta hai..
ye mohabbat dil me hi ku pal ta hai..
dard ko kahin aur uthna tha..
mohabbat ko kahin or pal na tha..
****Mamta ji nice work****
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2010, 11:26:41 AM » |
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Dard seene me uthaa rog puraanaa nikalaa
mere humdam ye naheeN jhoothaa fasaanaa nikalaa
door maNzil hai bahut saaNs bhee bojhil hai meree
teraa koochaa hee sahee kuchh to thikaanaa nikalaa
soonee soonee hai dagar aaNkheN meri tarsee haiN
teraa deedaar kiye mujhko zamaanaa nikalaa
yuN to aate naheeN khwaaboN me rulaa jaate ho
ye sanam kaisaa teraa mujhko sataanaa nikalaa
soonee aaNkhoN me diye lab pe teraa naam liye
woh koi or naheeN teraa deevaanaa nikalaa
Mamta Bajpaitere is dard vary shyere bahut khub surat hai aye dile nadan tujhe hua kya hai akher is dard ke dawa kya hai  |
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2010, 11:36:26 AM » |
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hahahah ky baat kyaa baatt hai...
woh koi or nahi tera deewana niklaaaaa..
ahaaa maza aa gayaaa...
Mamta di...bahut khoob..
Har bar unke labzo ne meri tehreer ko hila diya,
dil se nikla jo bhi mere dost maine kagaZ ko thama diya~
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2010, 04:29:35 PM » |
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Bahut bahut dhanywaad Subhash jee!
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2010, 04:43:58 PM » |
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Mamta jee..kuch ekaadh tips mujhe bhi dijiye taaki mai kuch likhne ka sahas kar saku.
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chahat to likhne ki bahut hai mujhme bhi,
lekin darrta hu koi gustakhi na ho jaye ...
alfazon ki ladiyan jis tarah pirote hai log yahan,
mere alfazon se kahin wo ladiyan toot naa jaye..
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«Reply #6 on: November 16, 2010, 05:04:34 PM » |
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Subhaash jee kisne kahaa ki aap likh naheeN sakte?bas koshish karte rahiye .......
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«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2010, 05:35:35 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2010, 04:07:51 AM » |
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kuch kuch kabi kabi kosis kar lunga...Mamta jee ..Aap hosla badhate rahiyega bas:)
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2010, 06:05:38 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Ashfaque jee!
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2010, 06:06:53 AM » |
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Anaam jee....
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2010, 06:08:55 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Abhi! taareef ka ye andaaz bhee kya khoob hai!likhte raho ...paRh kar achchha lagaa...
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«Reply #12 on: November 17, 2010, 12:17:50 PM » |
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Subhash humari shubh-kaamnaayeN tumhare saath haiN.......
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2010, 07:22:33 AM » |
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bahaut hi khoob mamata ji. dher saaree pathos aur irony ko elegance ka libaas pehna kar ek khoosurat peshkash.
ghalib ka ek sher yaad aataa hai ....
chand tasveere e butaaN chand haseenoN ke khatoot
baad marne ke mere ghar se ye saamaaN nikla
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