dhai akshar prem ka unko samjh mein aaye nahii

by ripan dev on November 03, 2012, 02:41:38 AM
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neend hui hai qurban,teri fikr , tera adaab liye
jagta hun main raatbhar,aakhon mein tera khwaab liye

yeh tishangi phir kyun n baqi reh jaya kare meri
wo milta hi nahi ab aakhon mein waisi sharab liye.

shaam-e-wasl wo binaa sawal kiye hee chal diyaa,
main ruka rahaa honthon par hazaron jawab liye

dhai akshar prem ka unko samjh mein aaye nahee
jhagdate hai ab donoo apni apni kitaab liye
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 02:53:04 AM »
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neend hui hai qurban,teri fikr , tera adaab liye
jagta hun main raatbhar,aakhon mein tera khwaab liye

yeh tishangi phir kyun n baqi reh jaya kare meri
wo milta hi nahi ab aakhon mein waisi sharab liye.

shaam-e-wasl wo binaa sawal kiye hee chal diyaa,
main ruka rahaa honthon par hazaron jawab liye

dhai akshar prem ka unko samjh mein aaye nahee
jhagdate hai ab donoo apni apni kitaab liye

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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 03:07:21 AM »
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neend hui hai qurban,teri fikr , tera adaab liye
jagta hun main raatbhar,aakhon mein tera khwaab liye

yeh tishangi phir kyun n baqi reh jaya kare meri
wo milta hi nahi ab aakhon mein waisi sharab liye.

shaam-e-wasl wo binaa sawal kiye hee chal diyaa,
main ruka rahaa honthon par hazaron jawab liye

dhai akshar prem ka unko samjh mein aaye nahee
jhagdate hai ab donoo apni apni kitaab liye

bohut khoob ripan jee . umada ghazal hai , last shair ka jawab nahi , mubarakbaad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2012, 03:55:42 AM »
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bahut khoob ripan ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2012, 04:11:58 AM »
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beautiful creation
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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2012, 04:34:07 AM »
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bahut bahut hi achche
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thanx to all
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