Unko jabse bhula ke aaye hain

by drpandey on February 18, 2010, 07:09:10 PM
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Unko jabse bhula ke aaye hain
Sar pe tohmat saja ke laye hain,
Haal puchho hamare chhalon se
Garm patthar pe chal ke aaye hain.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2010, 09:06:11 PM »
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Behad Khoobsurat.....bahut umda likha hai apne....



Bhool Pana unhe , yu asaan naa tha
Dil diwaana tha magar , nadaan naa tha
Kambaqt dil hi tha ,bebasi ki zad per
Warna bhoolne ka mera , koi armaan naa tha
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2010, 09:54:10 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Pandey ji and Sshiv ji.beautiful lines.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2010, 05:50:45 AM »
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Wah wah pandey bahut achhe sher likhe hain aapne. Nice creation.

Mujhko pahchanta nahi wo ab
Usne waade sabhi bhulaye hain
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Unko jabse bhula ke aaye hain
Sar pe tohmat saja ke laye hain,
Haal puchho hamare chhalon se
Garm patthar pe chal ke aaye hain.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad

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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 01:16:26 PM »
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Unko jabse bhula ke aaye hain
Sar pe tohmat saja ke laye hain,
Haal puchho hamare chhalon se
Garm patthar pe chal ke aaye hain.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad


Bohot Khoob Dr Pandey
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Fakhar e Naveed
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2010, 12:12:26 PM »
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Nice lines from Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2010, 01:44:35 PM »
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Unko jabse bhula ke aaye hain
Sar pe tohmat saja ke laye hain,
Haal puchho hamare chhalon se
Garm patthar pe chal ke aaye hain.
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Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad


bahut khoob dr sb..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2010, 03:39:04 AM »
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Very Nice Pandey Ji.Ek Aashiq Ke Jazbaaton Ko
Bahut Achhey Se Lafzon Men Piroya Hai Aapne
Bahut Khub Janab....

Khush Rahiye....

~Shihab~

Bahot bahot shukriya Sihab Ji pasand farmaney aur aapki duavon ke liye..
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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2010, 03:43:01 AM »
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Behad Khoobsurat.....bahut umda likha hai apne....



Bhool Pana unhe , yu asaan naa tha
Dil diwaana tha magar , nadaan naa tha
Kambaqt dil hi tha ,bebasi ki zad per
Warna bhoolne ka mera , koi armaan naa tha
Bahot khubshurat likha hai aapne, excellent...shukriya S shiv ji...
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2010, 03:47:35 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Pandey ji and Sshiv ji.beautiful lines.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahot bahot inayat aur shukriya Madhu Ji..
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2010, 03:56:04 AM »
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Wah wah pandey bahut achhe sher likhe hain aapne. Nice creation.

Mujhko pahchanta nahi wo ab
Usne waade sabhi bhulaye hain
Lajabab reply Riyaz Sahab, hausla afzai ka behad shukriya..
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2010, 03:57:34 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Dr Pandey
Hausla afzai ke liye azhad shukriya Celmira Ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2010, 04:24:55 PM »
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Bohat khoob Dr sahab..bohat hi umda..
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2010, 04:33:35 PM »
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bahut khoob dr sb..  Thumbs UP
Pasand farmaney ke liye Shukriya malli ji..
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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2010, 04:49:28 PM »
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Nice lines from Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
Bohat khoob Dr sahab..bohat hi umda..
Hausla afzai ke liye Fakhar Naveed Ji aur Ali Nadan Sahab aap dono hazrat ka behad Shukriya..
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