~*~ Dil laga raha hai koi ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on May 13, 2011, 02:49:08 PM
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Ghum lakh sahi, khushion ko pehchan raha hai koi,
Aj zindagi jeene ki dobara koshish kar raha hai koi..

Dafan hue khwab tamam uske, kal ki baat lagti hai,
Aj ankhon main ashkon ki jagah sapne pal raha hai koi..

Chah kar bhi kal tak muskura nahin pate the ae dost,
Aur aj dekho, labon ko bin baat khila raha hai koi..

Likhne wale ne sach likha kay ‘dil toh bacha hai jee’,
Bewaffai paa kar bhi phir se dil laga raha hai koi..

‘Khamosh’ ne sada dard pe likha mager aj kya hua,
Kalam mohobat kay gunguna raha hai koi..

Kal tak kisi ki yaadon ka pehra tha saath,
Aj usse haste haste bhoola raha hai koi..

Aj likhte hue paya kay mohobat hai dil main, udaasi nahin,
‘Khamosh’ kay dil pe shayad, dobara dastaak de raha hai koi..

Aj zindagi jeene ki dobara koshish kar raha hai koi,
Bewaffai paa kar bhi kisi kay dil se dil laga raha hai koi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2011, 03:17:22 PM »
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wah dost bht khub nagma……
kamaal hai ji mast post… Usual SmileUsual Smile

ek baat kahunga dnt mind mat karna dost…
aap “Dobaara” shabd ke bad ek ‘coma’ lagaiye aur…
khamosh ke dil pe shayd ‘dobaara’ , dastak de rha hai koi
……yaha b ek dobara laga dete to acha lgta…coz thm me dobara jaruri h…

neway rahim dost…
kuch bura lge to muafi chahunga…

is zindadil post ko hazaro daad ……

be happy Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2011, 03:21:40 PM »
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wah dost bht khub nagma……
kamaal hai ji mast post… Usual SmileUsual Smile

ek baat kahunga dnt mind mat karna dost…
aap “Dobaara” shabd ke bad ek ‘coma’ lagaiye aur…
khamosh ke dil pe shayd ‘dobaara’ , dastak de rha hai koi
……yaha b ek dobara laga dete to acha lgta…coz thm me dobara jaruri h…

neway rahim dost…
kuch bura lge to muafi chahunga…

is zindadil post ko hazaro daad ……

be happy Usual Smile

thanx
Maine edit kar diya hai dost..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Bura kis baat ka lagana dost..
Apka shukriya kay ek correction main madad ki apne..
yunhi toh hum seekte hai..
Apka yunhi hamesha saath dena, dil ko khushi deta hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2011, 03:45:01 PM »
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thanx ki aapko bura nai laga…
lekin aap edit wale dubara ke baad ‘comma’ lagao ji………

jo na hua haasil use bhul jao
jo karna ho haasil bas usi se dil lagao !!!!

khus rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2011, 03:56:01 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Bhai Rahim!! .

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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2011, 06:11:19 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Bhai Rahim!! .

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2011, 07:06:18 AM »
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as salam alekum.............waooooooo apne keya likha hai yani itni sachchai waooooooo............. Applause Applause Applause bohot achcha laga padh
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2011, 03:31:15 PM »
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as salam alekum.............waooooooo apne keya likha hai yani itni sachchai waooooooo............. Applause Applause Applause bohot achcha laga padh
Walaikum-Asalaam..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Bushra jee..
Yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2011, 06:41:08 PM »
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Good Job Rahim Bhai...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2011, 05:43:11 PM »
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Haha. I woke up down today. You’ve chereed me up!
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2011, 05:48:59 PM »
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Rahiim bahut acha laga dear..gud..khush raho bus yahi dua hai..take care..
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2011, 09:11:59 AM »
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Haha. I woke up down today. You’ve chereed me up!
Aww I am so so glad about that..
Thank you..
Stay Happpy..!
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«Reply #12 on: May 23, 2011, 09:14:10 AM »
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Rahiim bahut acha laga dear..gud..khush raho bus yahi dua hai..take care..
Aww bahaut bahaut shukriya di..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye.!
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