~Bewaffa kehne laga hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on July 16, 2010, 09:42:13 PM
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Kisi ko pake na paya aisa bhi kabhi kabhi hota hai...Jab woh shaks dhoor hai, toh bahaut asani hoti hai kyun ki pata hai kay woh shaks apke paas nahin...Mager jab woh shaks paas ho, saath ho phir bhi milon dhoor ho, toh dard hota hai...Kisi ne bahaut shikayat karne ki wajah di hai...Yeh uss behad khaas shaks kay liye likha hai...Najane kaisa likh paya hoon mager sirf dil se likha hai...dil se...

Mera dil tujse mohobat ki bheek mangne laga hai,
Tujse ae-Zalim yeh dil bahaut shikayat karne laga hai…

Haste haste maine apne apko tere naam kardia,
Shayad tu ab meri ehmiat bhoolne laga hai…

Tune mujse moke mange jo maine tujhe har baar diye,
Shayad tu ab meri tanhai ko meri kamzori samajne laga hai…

Tujhe pake na pane ka dard tune khoob chakhaya hai mujhe,
Shayad tu ab ‘Khamosh’ kay dil ko khilona man’ne laga hai…

Aj jo choot raha hai ‘Khamosh’ ka haath uss haath se,
Toh dekh ae-Khuda zamana mujhe hi bewaffa kehne laga hai…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2010, 05:46:44 AM »
Kisi ko pake na paya aisa bhi kabhi kabhi hota hai...Jab woh shaks dhoor hai, toh bahaut asani hoti hai kyun ki pata hai kay woh shaks apke paas nahin...Mager jab woh shaks paas ho, saath ho phir bhi milon dhoor ho, toh dard hota hai...Kisi ne bahaut shikayat karne ki wajah di hai...Yeh uss behad khaas shaks kay liye likha hai...Najane kaisa likh paya hoon mager sirf dil se likha hai...dil se...

Mera dil tujse mohobat ki bheek mangne laga hai,
Tujse ae-Zalim yeh dil bahaut shikayat karne laga hai…

Haste haste maine apne apko tere naam kardia,
Shayad tu ab meri ehmiat bhoolne laga hai…

Tune mujse moke mange jo maine tujhe har baar diye,
Shayad tu ab meri tanhai ko meri kamzori samajne laga hai…

Tujhe pake na pane ka dard tune khoob chakhaya hai mujhe,
Shayad tu ab ‘Khamosh’ kay dil ko khilona man’ne laga hai…

Aj jo choot raha hai ‘Khamosh’ ka haath uss haath se,
Toh dekh ae-Khuda zamana mujhe hi bewaffa kehne laga hai…


~Rahim~

Its Too Good ........ Rahim Ji ! very Nice creation....dil se daad !
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2010, 03:48:22 PM »
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Anshumali jee..
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2010, 06:20:47 PM »
Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ke Rahim Ji
Ek sundar motiyon ki mala ki tarah sabdon ko gutha hai aap ne
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2010, 07:11:18 PM »
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Rajesh jee...Teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon!
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2010, 04:28:17 AM »
Rahim Bhaiiiiiiiiii... Kya Baat hai Yaaaaar.. Maza aa Gaya Padh Kar.. Waqai Jab Koi Apna Paas Ho Ke Bhi Door Hota Hai to Taqleef Hoti hai.. Aur Yehi Dard Aapne Lafzon Me Bahut Khubsoorati Se Utara hai.. Bahut Khooooob...  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2010, 05:16:37 AM »
Rahim ji......kya kahun inn alfazon k liye....
sach hai kisise mahobbat karke insan ki halat yehi ho jati hai....

dil ki bechaini kya khub likhi hai aapne
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2010, 11:38:13 AM »
Teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon Kasak dil ki apka aur Vikas bhaijan apka! Shukriya..!
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2010, 11:45:38 AM »
kya baat hai Rahim ji........kya andaz hai shikayat ka.....bahut khoob..
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2010, 11:47:00 AM »
Shukriya Nikhaar di...
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