~*~ Iss qadar kyun dil laga liya sahib ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 08, 2011, 08:48:29 PM
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Jiss shaks ka zikr aksar iss nadan ki nazmon main hota hai, ussi shaks ne ek baar mujhe ek drawing di thi..Ek angel ki drawing..Woh drawing meri fav hai aj tak aur usse zada khubsoorat painting kuch nahin lagti..
uss painting main woh angel udaas hai, ankhein nam hai aur haathon main ek gulab hai..
Doston woh painting jab kabhi bhi dekhta hoon, toh aisa lagta hai kay usne yeh kehte hue diya tha kay jab kabhi bhi dekhoge, yehi awaz ayegi 'Main bewaffa na thi'.. Sochta tha kay uspe kuch likhunga mager kabhi kalam ne saath na diya..Aj kuch likha hai uss par..

Kabhi kabhi kuch lavz aise hote hai kay ap chahte hai kay ap usse har nazm main use karein..I am in love with the word 'Sahib'..So I am using it again..

Hum bewaffa hargiz na the mager,
Ek wafa hi thi jo hum kar na sake sahib..

Kaun kehta hai tumhe bhoola diya hai maine,
Tumhara diya gulab aj bhi tham rakha hai sahib..

Meri ankhon main ek baar jhank kar dekh liya hota,
Tumhe apni hi tasveer dikh jati sahib..

Mana teri yaadon ka janaza utha hai zindagi se,
Kabrastan mager mere dil main hi bana hai sahib..

Galti humari nahin tumhari hi thi mere dost,
Ek insaan se kyun iss qadar dil laga liya sahib..

Har baar ek hi ek cheez likhte rehte ho nazmon main ‘Khamosh’,
Apne apko shayar bulane se pehle likhna toh seekh liya hota sahib..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2011, 10:19:02 PM »
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nice one
Jiss shaks ka zikr aksar iss nadan ki nazmon main hota hai, ussi shaks ne ek baar mujhe ek drawing di thi..Ek angel ki drawing..Woh drawing meri fav hai aj tak aur usse zada khubsoorat painting kuch nahin lagti..
uss painting main woh angel udaas hai, ankhein nam hai aur haathon main ek gulab hai..
Doston woh painting jab kabhi bhi dekhta hoon, toh aisa lagta hai kay usne yeh kehte hue diya tha kay jab kabhi bhi dekhoge, yehi awaz ayegi 'Main bewaffa na thi'.. Sochta tha kay uspe kuch likhunga mager kabhi kalam ne saath na diya..Aj kuch likha hai uss par..

Kabhi kabhi kuch lavz aise hote hai kay ap chahte hai kay ap usse har nazm main use karein..I am in love with the word 'Sahib'..So I am using it again..

Hum bewaffa hargiz na the mager,
Ek wafa hi thi jo hum kar na sake sahib..

Kaun kehta hai tumhe bhoola diya hai maine,
Tumhara diya gulab aj bhi tham rakha hai sahib..

Meri ankhon main ek baar jhank kar dekh liya hota,
Tumhe apni hi tasveer dikh jati sahib..

Mana teri yaadon ka janaza utha hai zindagi se,
Kabrastan mager mere dil main hi bana hai sahib..

Galti humari nahin tumhari hi thi mere dost,
Ek insaan se kyun iss qadar dil laga liya sahib..

Har baar ek hi ek cheez likhte rehte ho nazmon main ‘Khamosh’,
Apne apko shayar bulane se pehle likhna toh seekh liya hota sahib..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2011, 10:51:18 PM »
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"mana teri yaadon ka janazaa----
behtareen line Rahim bhai.
har baar ki tarah ek aur dil ko chu ti hui peshkash.
bahut rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2011, 12:32:14 AM »
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Shukriya Manoj jee aur KillBill jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2011, 01:06:39 AM »
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Rahim Sahib Aadaab!

Janab ahsaas o khayaal achche hai..
AshaaroN meiN dhale bhi bus aur thodi mehnat karte
to behad khoob kalaam ban jaati...

Khair aapki is kalaam per daad..



Kisi ko naa koi raaz bataana sahib
Be yakeeni ka hai ye zamaana sahib

Bebas na karde you humara paas aana sahib
Achcha nahi hota dil ka lagaana sahib         




Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2011, 02:48:07 AM »
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Jee shukriya Parwaaz jee..
Khoob lines..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2011, 08:42:48 AM »
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kya baat hai rahim bhai... Good one hai ji...

Intezar!
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2011, 12:03:05 PM »
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Shukriya Intezar bhai..!
Khush rahiye..!
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