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<>*Teri yaadon ka marhum laga liya*<> @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Baahon me teri humne har jannat ka sukh paa liya
Tamannaon k daaman me aaj fir humne ghar basa liya
Oas ki boondon si khilti taazgi ko chehre pe odhe hue
Humne apni tanha raat ka shok o maatam bhula liya
Khilkhilake milte rahe hum roz apne azeezon se
Tum nahin ho sath ye dard ko seene me apne daba liya
Ankahi reh gai mere pyaar ki adhuri ek daastaan
Apne bhavishya se maine apne ateet ko aise chhupa liya
Maut ki manzil ki taraf badhte hi chale mere kadam
Jab jab bhi tumne meri saut ko apne gale laga liya
Andhere ko chheer kar niklegi ek din to roshan kiran
Apne mayuus dil ko iss baat se aaj humne mana liya
Dard se tadap uthti rahi KASAK har baar dil me magar
Iss dard par humne teri yaadon ka marhum laga liya...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 07:55:46 PM » |
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beshak bahut khubsurat jawaab kasak ji aapka... bahut khub...
Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 08:55:46 PM » |
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot khoob !!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 09:23:17 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Anamika Ji
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 03:37:28 AM » |
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beshak bahut khubsurat jawaab kasak ji aapka... bahut khub...
Intezar !
shukriya intezar ji aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya..par reply to apne andaaz me dete to maza aajata.....kai din ho gaye aapke sath likhe hue....missing the fun |
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 03:38:16 AM » |
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot khoob !!!
thnx sophi ji aapne meri koshish ko waqt diya aur saraha yunhi sath dete rahiyega |
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 03:38:48 AM » |
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Bahut Khub Anamika Ji
thnku rishi ji for ur time and appreciation ji |
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 03:40:07 AM » |
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Khil Khilake Milte Rahe Hum Roz Apne Azeezon Se
Tum Nahi Ho Sath Ye Dard Ko Seene Me Apne Daba Liya.
Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Bahut Khub Behna...
Humesha Shad o Aabad Rahiye...
~Shihab~
shihab...aapko yahan dekhkar sukun mila aaj....thnx alot re...meri koshish ko sarah k tumne khush khush kar diya re....thnku bhai |
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 05:24:10 AM » |
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anamika ji........ ek baar fir dil dhadkane wali post ki he apne...it is just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...........superb thought anf toucy feelings...... few lines in reply of ur thought In Gajlo Ki Tum Hifajat Rakhna
Laut Aaunga Tum Khud Ko Salamat Rakhna
Dur Sahi Lekin Dil Se Juda Nahi Hu
Tum Khud Ko Hi Meri Ibadat Rakhna
Na Samje Log Tumhe Koi Lawaris
Tum Khud Ko Meri Virasat Rakhna
Jo Aye Bura Waqt kabhi To Tum
Mujse Hausla Lekar Khud Ko Salamat Rakhna
mahakti rahna chahakti rahna
tum in ankho me ese hi shararat rakhna
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 05:24:29 AM » |
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<>*Teri yaadon ka marhum laga liya*<> @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Baahon me teri humne har jannat ka sukh paa liya
Tamannaon k daaman me aaj fir humne ghar basa liya
Oas ki boondon si khilti taazgi ko chehre pe odhe hue
Humne apni tanha raat ka shok o maatam bhula liya
Khilkhilake milte rahe hum roz apne azeezon se
Tum nahin ho sath ye dard ko seene me apne daba liya
Ankahi reh gai mere pyaar ki adhuri ek daastaan
Apne bhavishya se maine apne ateet ko aise chhupa liya
Maut ki manzil ki taraf badhte hi chale mere kadam
Jab jab bhi tumne meri saut ko apne gale laga liya
Andhere ko chheer kar niklegi ek din to roshan kiran
Apne mayuus dil ko iss baat se aaj humne mana liya
Dard se tadap uthti rahi KASAK har baar dil me magar
Iss dard par humne teri yaadon ka marhum laga liya...!!!
bhaut umda bahut behtreen dard ka bayaan kia hai |
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 05:26:08 AM » |
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anamika ji........ ek baar fir dil dhadkane wali post ki he apne...it is just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...........superb thought anf toucy feelings...... few lines in reply of ur thought In Gajlo Ki Tum Hifajat Rakhna
Laut Aaunga Tum Khud Ko Salamat Rakhna
Dur Sahi Lekin Dil Se Juda Nahi Hu
Tum Khud Ko Hi Meri Ibadat Rakhna
Na Samje Log Tumhe Koi Lawaris
Tum Khud Ko Meri Virasat Rakhna
Jo Aye Bura Waqt kabhi To Tum
Mujse Hausla Lekar Khud Ko Salamat Rakhna
mahakti rahna chahakti rahna
tum in ankho me ese hi shararat rakhna
[/b] waah waah kya khoob hai jawaab ka janab aapka...!!! |
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2011, 06:07:27 AM » |
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kamaal par kamaal hai ye bemishaal
laga dia aag paani me,bin chaaku churiyon ke hua kaleza bhi lahukuhaan !
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superb post -- dhamakedaar reply aur ---
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na jaga unn soye armano ko yun fir ek baar
tadpan ek jaati nahi kia na karo waar fir,yun baar baar !
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lajawaab poetry re
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2011, 07:07:50 AM » |
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Kya baat hai jab bhi karti hai aap to bas kamaal hi karti hai...........  |
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2011, 06:28:26 AM » |
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bahut badhiya ..
dher sari daad~
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