Dil-lagi na kar saka _________ROY

by roy on June 10, 2012, 07:17:46 PM
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zindagi k safar mai yun to mujhe loog hazar mile,
kuch DHOKHE-BAZ to kuch DIL-DAR MILE....

par dill-laagi na kar ska kisi se AAE ROY
kunki sab mai mujhe meri ANJAN MANZIL K sal-ah-kar mille


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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2012, 01:06:12 AM »
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acha hai roye sahab ,
last line mein salah kar dikhe ki jagah salah kar MILE HO JAYE TO AUR ACHA LAGEGA . WAISE POETRY IS GOOD
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2012, 03:00:41 AM »
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GOOD
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2012, 03:17:53 AM »
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Very nice.
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2012, 03:45:05 AM »
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waah waah dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2012, 06:26:56 AM »
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sahil g apke mashware k liye shukriya.... likhna vohi chahta tha shayad typing mistake ho gayi tongue3 abi thek keye deta hun Winking
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2012, 06:27:44 AM »
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ajmeer g or masoom g apka bohot boht shukriya .... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2012, 06:29:14 AM »
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saini sir dil se shukriya kehna chahuga ...
aab har post pe mujhe ek rau de dete hai ...

um really very  thankful to uh happy9 Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2012, 08:46:07 AM »
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waah janaab . keep writing .
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2012, 06:28:09 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2012, 06:29:19 PM »
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waahhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2012, 07:29:56 PM »
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shukriya hasan sahb Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2012, 07:30:30 PM »
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shukriya sarfira g oor kasak g Usual Smile
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