~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: September 02, 2010, 11:18:11 AM »

Thanks Once again Yaar Dil se ........... Rahim bhut hi achi poem likhi hai tumne .......... Aree yeh saab karne ki jarorat nahi thi .............. Fir bi App saab ka tehe dil se har ek insaan ka jisne bi is thread pe comnt kiya hai uska shukriya karti hoon ............

Muze ek PM ayya hai kissi ka shyd unko yeh saab acha nahi laga ....... main itna batna choongi unko ki >...

I am really blessed ki muze aise log mile hai jo muze yaad kar rehe hai jaisa unno bola koi kisi ko yaad nahi karta ......... so im really really happy ki muze aise dost mile & i respect you all by heart...........................

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH .........................

Parvez ji apse mafi chati hoon agar aap ko koi bi taqleef ho meri vajh se . really sorry & thanx bi .........


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #16 on: September 02, 2010, 06:44:50 PM »

Shukriya Neel jee..!


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #17 on: September 02, 2010, 09:50:58 PM »

Quote from: neelgold on September 02, 2010, 11:18:11 AM

Parvez ji apse mafi chati hoon agar aap ko koi bi taqleef ho meri vajh se . really sorry & thanx bi .........

Neel Jee aadaab!

Jee aisi koi baat nahi hume koi taklif nahi huyi aap shayad thik se samjhi nahi humari baateN.. Muafi to hume mangni chahiye... ke humare alfaazoN ne humari feelings bayaaN nahi kii...

Khair aap yahaaN wapas aayi iske liye hume bhi bahut khushi hai.... Aati rahiye..... Aur koi bhi baat dil per na lijiye.....

Likhti rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda hafez.......


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #18 on: September 03, 2010, 10:09:27 AM »

Sahi hai Parwaaz ji....hum sab naye hain hume ilm he nahi k yahaan aala darze k shayar kaun hain....Yahaan tou ye bhi pata nahi chalta k kaun bujurg hain aur kitne tajoorbe kaar hain....Agar aap jaante hain tou bataaiyega....kahin hum naye log unhain itna sammaan nahi de rahe ho.....
YO PAR sab seekhne ko aate hain....hum unke kalaam ko naa tolte huye...jaisa bhi hai...usse badhava dete hain taaki wo aur likhe aur sudhaar karta rahe....hume aapki analysis karne ki koshish achhi lagi....aage bhi keejiye...

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 01, 2010, 06:19:17 PM

Ahel e Bazm ko Aadaab!

Hum yahaaN naye hai, aur aate hi aise bahas ka hissa ban gaye jahaaN humara ilm kuch bhi nahi..... Nazar Sahab Jee ...... Aap apne zahan se yeh galat fahmi nikal lijiye ke hum shayari ke bade jankaar hai...... Humari akal shayari ke mutalbe se aapse bhi bahut kam hai..... Humara bhi wazan aur bher se door door tak ka koi rishta nahi hai... aur nahi shayari se .... Hum jitna shayari ko pichle ek saal meiN samjhe yehi humari shayari hai uske pahele hum kuch bhi nahi the... aur aaj tak bhi humne koi mukammal Gazal nahi kahi hai..... bus dil karta hai to chand misare likha kar tehreer saja lete hai..... Isse jayda humara koyiN Ilm nahi hai .... Haan hum sher samjhne ki jyadaa justaju rakhte hai isliye shayad hume achche kalaam ka tafsira karne ki aadaat pad gayi.... Bus par aap gaur karenge to hum sirf tarif wala tafsira karte hai jise tafsira nahi kaha jata..... Tafsira tab hota hai jab sher ke khayaal se lekar lafzoN ke wazan aur bher ki mutabik baat kahi jaye...... Aur hum aisa nahi karte... KyuN ki hume ilm nahi hai .....

Yeh Husn e bahar ka naaz hota hoNga auroN ko
MaiN to likhane wale ke ahsaas o khayaal dekhta huN

Khair hum yahaaN aate hi bahas ka hissa ban gaye iska afsos ho raha hai...... Humari baat aise nahi thi, ke bahas ho hum bus kahne meiN thik se shayad kah nahi paaye.... Hum bus yehi kahe the ke Adeeb sahab ko aapki;' kii huyi Neel sahab ki tareef se taklif huyi! kyuN ke unke jaise shayari e fankaar yeh behtari se jante hai ke gazal kahne ke liye kitni mashakhat karni padhti hai... Woh thahare Aala darje ke shayar isliye unhe aapka tehreer ko gazal kahna munaseeb nahi laga ho aur aapse unhone bahas chedi ho...... KyuN ke humne bahut sare bade shayaroN ko dekha hai ke be-baher tehreer ko gazal kahne se beIntehaaN katraate hai....... YahaaN tak humare ustad bhi humari kisi kalaam ko kabhi Gazal nahi kahe..... Isliye hum itna jaante hai ke bina bher meiN kahi huyi tehreer tehreer hi hai Gazal nahi...... per hum bhi use Gazal hi kahte hai..... KyuN ke hume jab ilm hi nahi hai ke yeh tehreer bher meiN hai yaa nahi to usko Gazal kaise na kaheN jab woh puri tarha gazal ke kawayat meiN dhali huyi khushnumaa tehreer ho.......... :S Isliye aap aisa na socheN ke humne aapse aisa kuch kaha hai....... Hum khud shayari sikhane ke liye doude doude ghumte hai....... agar aapko aisa laga ho to dil se mazharrat khawa hai hum.....

Par Adeeb Sahab ki is baat se koi member khafa ho jata hai aur chala jata hai achchi baat nahi hai..... Woh zimmedaar bhi hai, humne yeh bhi kaha kyuN ke unhe aise aapse open thread per nahi kahna chahiye tha.........
Aur hum isliye unke side ki baat kiye KyuN ke baki member's ne unhe khasi tana khinchi kii hai..... Aur aisa humare saath ho raha hai aisa hum mehsus kiye isliye ..... Hum sach meiN kahte hai hume shayari ka jyadaa ilm nahi hai....... aur bher ka katai nahi hai......

Humne apna reply dene se pahele socha nahi tha ke kisi ko humari baat taklif de jayeNgi... Hum aap sab se mazarhat chahte hai....

Aur sabhi member's se Guzarish hai ke baraaye mehrbaani woh kisi se kuch aisa na kaheN ke unka dil dukh jaye........ Baat husn O Saluk se ho aur aisi baateN parde meiN ho to behtar hai...... Hum yahaaN naye hai per yahaaN ke aala shayaroN ko behad achche se jante hai...... Yeh baat aur hai ke hume koi nahi janta ...

Bus aur kya kaheN aap log galat na samjhe hume..... Hum aap sab se mazarat chahte hai janab ke agar kisi ko humari baat se thes pahunchi ho to dil se mazarrat khuwaa hai hum.......

Mujhe aapki in bahsoN se kyaa lena hai
MaiN shagaf e shayar to misaal dekhta huN

Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez.........


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #19 on: September 03, 2010, 10:09:19 PM »

Main yeh share karna chati thi... this vs Pm Sajid-Gyhel sent it to me ...
Ghyel ji phele to apko danyavaad dena choongi apne mere liye tym nikal ke itna likha ....

2nd apne apna tazruba share kiya bhut shukriya ... apko pata nhi kon sa dukha hai ya kya prob hai jo apne aisa itna hard words likhe ... shyd mere doston ka youn muze yaha bulana aapko acha nahi laga.. mera YO se rista purna nahi hai i vs jst 2-3 month old hre ... apne sach kaha yeh net ki duniya hai .. main manti hoon mera aise net ke logon se kabhi bi koi vasta nahi pada so i hv no idea ki kya yeh duniya hai ... bt i jst vana to say tht...

I M blessed tht i got such net YO family .... Jisnko mere jane se fark pada ... unne muze miss kiya aur vapis bulaya ...... main yeh manti hoon mera unse ya kissi se bi koi khoon ka risata ya koi sambnd nahi hai bt fir bi emotions , feelings.. inse to nata hai aur jud gaya hai ... mera un se b i utna hi nata hai jitna aap ya doosre logon se hai .. jitna maine aapki post ka reply kiya ya unka kiya ek jaisa nata tha kissi ne yaad rakha aur koi bhool gaya ........tht's it

I m nt seriuos bt i alwyz respect other feelings & tht's d most IMP thing in ur life... if u dont respect othrs thn u have no respect for urself also .. no respect for GOD also mera yeh manana hai ki

Khuda ko kaha doondta hai Mandir, Masjid aur Char diwar main
Agar dekhna hai usse to ek Pyar bhari nazar daal uske Har insaan pe
Voh tume mil jayega har pate phool aur dewaar main
Bus ek pyaar bhari nazar daal uske har ek Nishan pe

I really thnak ful to all of you jisne bi ksis bi trah se muze WC kiya discourge kar ke ya incourge kar ke ........ Main sab ke liye Apne raab se khusiyan mangti hoon khuda saab ko sakoon de .. shanti de .. sab ki murade puri ho ............

I jst vana to spread hapiness all aorund ...........
ONce again main saab se mafi choongi agar meri vakh se kissi ka bi toda sa bi dil dukha ho ................

LAst msg main yeh dena choongi ................

INSANYAT SE BAD KE IS DUNIYA MIAN KOI BI RISTA NAHI HAI AURHUM SAB SE PHELE INSAAN HAI AUR HAMRA YEH HI RISTA SAAB SE BADA HAI .........

GOD BLESS EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote from: klaskar on September 02, 2010, 09:30:15 PM

Neel ji wanted me to share this email from Sajid_Ghayal with you all:

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/tera-intajaar-hai-neelraahi-t58079.0.html

Yeh thread aapke liye banaye ja rahe hai kya, baat kya hai...............

Waise ek baat bata du zati tajruba hai kuch nahi hota yeh sab karne se......sage maa baap mar jate hai auladein bhool jati hai. Koi kisi ko yaad nahi rakhta aaj phir thode bohat logh pooch rahe hai kal woh bhi nahi poochege.

Zyda seriously na le kisi baat ko aaye apne kalam share kare auro ke kalam padhe, bas waqt katne ka ek bahana hai koi zindagi nahi hai yeh net ki duniya.

Khayaal rakhe apna.

Ghayel


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #20 on: September 03, 2010, 10:35:39 PM »

Neel jee aap jo bhi hai aapki baatein saaf zahir karti hai ke aap me tajrubein ki bohat kami hai, jo ek daur me mujhme bhi thi. Aapne jo PM yaha mera numaya kiya hai agar aap kehti to main khud yeh sari batein yaha post kar deta.

Khair Allah aapko baat samajhne ki salahiyat de, aap meri dushman nahi hai main to aapko janta tak nahi........waise agar meri in bato ko yaha post karne se aapko sukoon milta hai to mujhe koi aitraaz nahi.

Aur ek baat aapko bata du Neel jee achchi baat hai aapko Yoindia par 2 ya 3 mahine ho gaye hai aur aapko itne kam dino me hi itna pyaar mil gaya. Shayed aapki jaankari me na ho isi Yoindia par mujhe 3 saal se bhi zyda arsa ho gaya hai 30000 se bhi zyda meri post rahi hai ek waqt me. Yaha ka koi aisa purana member nahi hai jo mujhe nahi janta hai. Aap apne 540 post ko ek taraf rakhna aur mere 30000 post ko ek taraf rakh kar sochna.

Waise galti meri hi hai maine bina aapki shaksiyat ko jane aapko samjhane ki koshsih ki ke mehfil me laut aaye.........kisi ne sach hi kaha hai naadan ki dosti jee ka jhanjaal.

Agar meri batein aapki naarazgi ka sabab bani ho to aapse mafi ka talabgaar hu.

Khush rahe.


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #21 on: September 04, 2010, 01:07:21 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on September 04, 2010, 12:56:07 PM

Ahankaar sab khatam kar deta hai... kabhi kisi ko kisi baat ka guroor nahi hona chahiye ki main bada hoon... sabki apni apni importance hai... koi kisi ke liye important hai koi kisi k liye...

pasand na ho to baat na karna hi behtar hai.... ladai ko aur kitna aage le jaana hai.... Huh?

baaki sab chhod ke kyun na kavitaon ko enjoy karein is site pe...

kapil

Bura na maniye Klaskar jee par aapki bato me ek ajeeb dohglapan nazar aata hai maine jaisa aapke bare me socha tha aap uske bilkool khilaaf insaan nikle.

Sabse pehle aapko bata du ke maine Neelgold jee ko koi email nahi PM bheja tha, aur PM hamesha zati hote hai waise bhi woh hum dono ke beech ka mamla tha. Aapne beech me kudkar pehle to is AAG ko hawa di aur ab yeh statement de rahe hai ke "ladai ko aur kitna aage le jana hai"

Jab fasaad khada karwane wala khud aisi baat kare to hasee bhi aati hai aur gussa bhi. Khair jo hota hai achche ke liye hota hai is incident se aapke sochne ka sthar to pata chal gaya.


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #22 on: September 04, 2010, 01:38:34 PM »

Jahan par har baat Ka Pata ho,waha par insaan ko Apni raaye Yaa Apni baat kehni chahiye..

kapil Ji,Agar Baat Sirf yeh P.m ki hai To Aapko Iss P.m Ko Yuh post nahi karna Chahiya Tha..Agar Hum sab Ek Duje Ko Koi P.m Post karte hai AUr Kal dekhte hai ke woh P.m Open Thread mein Post Ho Jaaye To Woh galat Hoga..Main Umeed Karta Hoon,Yeh Baat Ko Aap Zaroor Samjhenge..

Baaki,Yeh baat bahut zaroori hai Apni raaye Waha Par Di Jaaye Jahan par Uss Raaye Ki Koi Ehmiyat ho..Dusra insaan Iss Baare mein Aapse Agar baat naa Karna Chaahe par phir bhi Aap usse P.m kare To Woh usse zaroor galat lagega..

Main Aap dono se Guzaarish karta hoon ke Iss Baat ko ab yaahi khatam Ki jaaye..


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«Reply #23 on: September 04, 2010, 02:09:36 PM »

Khwaish saheb aapka har lafz aapki aala soch ka saboot hai, main aapki har baat ko apne maathe se lagata hu.

Neelgold jee se to main pehle hi mafi mang chuka hu, aur ab Klskar jee se bhi mafi ka talabgaar hu.

Main nahi chahta main kisi ki naraazgi ka sabab banu.

Allah Hafiz


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #24 on: September 04, 2010, 03:06:41 PM »

Sajid ji dont worry. Yr pm sent to her is based on realities of life and not objectable. It is not understood why klaskar was interested to get that pm posted here. He is treating as her the only fast friend or a real brother. Khwaish ji yr opinion is appreciable. U R a good monitor.


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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #25 on: September 04, 2010, 05:45:30 PM »

Kwaish ji ...... apki haar baat sach hai agar samne vala raye mange taab ........ bt jaab main baat hi nahi karti thn why ?

Doosra yeh baat ek thread ko le ke ki ja rehi thi to saab apne opnion vaha de rehe the to jis ko bi is barain main kuch bi kehna hai voh openly saab ke samne bole ...... Y PM?

I vs really hurted vn i got dis pm aur maine kuch doston ko batya evryone shocked how sumone write tht hard .... Agr unne thread pasand nahi aaya to maat reply karian muze bolne ki jarrorat voh bi itne harsh words main ......... Poet to bhut senstive hote hai na ......... they always care for others feelings......... Then you tell me why he used that kinda of statements for me unne laga nahi tha main aise open kar doongi ........ if they are sharing thier experince with me to maine unka experience saab se share kiya to kya galt hua ........

i am not replying to his any commnt / PM or anything coz muze is sab main anhi padna main issi liye jaab in saaab ne kuch bola to kmoshi se bina kuch bi kissi ko bi bole chali gaye widout telling any reason to anyone

muze admin ki tarf se bi mail aah rehi thi bt i nvr came bak ...... kuch doston ne itne pyar se bulya aur main vapis YO pe aaye is se phele main unka thread padti yeh PM pada jo thread post hote saath hi kiya gaya tha ........

U tell me as a neutral person aap khud apne aap ko meri jagh pe rakh ke socho aap ko kaisa lagta .......

i still dnt mynd & i told him vry nicely & thnks bi bola ki unne apni raye muze di .......

I dnt vana all dis mess here ...... & i dnt vana to any body c in dis mess coz of me ......

APKA YO APP KO MUBARAK HO APP KHUSH REHIYE SHYED YEH SAAB YEH HI CHATHE THE ........

HUm yaha apne dukh bhulne aate hai aur khushiyan batne aate hai ....... yeh saba to kabhi nahi socha tha ......

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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #26 on: September 04, 2010, 06:18:52 PM »

Neelji, Sabse pehle To main yaa Baaki koi member yeh nahi chaahega ke aap inn baaton ko lekar Yoindia choddkar jaaye..plz pehle inn baaton ko zehan se Nikaale..

Aur neel ji shayad aapne meri pehli post ko gaur se nahi padha..aapne aur maine ek hi baat kahi hai ke Bin baat ke,Bina Kisi wajeh ke aap kisi ko P.m nahi kar sakte..aur yeh baat sajid ji ne Maani hai..ke yeh galat hua..

baaki jis baat ko maine galat kaha Hai, uss par plz aap gaur kariye, agar sajid ji ne galti ki ke unhone kisi anjaane shaks ko iss tarah p.m kiya to kya yeh zaroori hai ke hum uss P.m ka Numayna kare..Nahi Naa??

Aap Apni jageh bilkul sahi ho,aap galat nahi..par agar jo banda galat hai usse iss baat ka ehsaas bhi hai aur woh Muaafi bhi maangta hai,uske baad bhi hum Sirf usse sawaal kare,To hum Yakeenan galat hai...

Baat Ko Khatam karna Hi Samajhdaari Hai,Baat Ko badhaane se Aur bhi log Aayenge aur apni-apni baatein Kahenge..aapse itni si guzaarish hai ke Plz Bhool jayiye in baaton ko..main umeed karta hoon ke aap zaroor yeh sab baaton ko bhoolkar humein bhi apne doston mein shareek karoge.. Shukriya


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«Reply #27 on: September 04, 2010, 06:38:22 PM »

Thanks a lot!!!!!!!

For everything what you did !!!!!!!

Appko shyd meri galti aur meri sorry kahi nazar nahi aaye jo maine haar ek post main ki hai .......... Kher koi baat nahi......

Main ek baar fir se haath jod ke mafi choongi agr meri vajh se kissi ka 1% bi dil dukha ho i m hearty sorry for that aur main apne saab doston aur bi jo members hai yeh guzrish karongi ki koi bi is thread pe iske baad koi bi comnt ya post na karain.......

I agian vanted to say tht i m really thnakful to all of you evry single memeber here jis se main kuch bi sikha ya unki jitni rachnaye padi.........

Main to itne milo door ajnabi desh main hoon aap logon ka saath mila tha to laga main apne hi ghar main hoon ... yaha itni fast pace lyf mai kis ke pass itna tym hai fir bi hum tym nikal ke yaha aate hai ek doosre ke dard ko samzthe hai unne bantate hai .. meri hamsha se yeh khsosih reh hai ki agar main kissi ke chere pe bi ek paal ke liye hi sahi agar muskan la sako to us se badi baat aur koi nahi hai ....... kissi ke dukh ya dard ki vajh hargiz nahi banana choongi ..............

I again applogise for evry single person if he/ she hurted by me by any means ........

agar aap meri previous posts padege u can easliy figur it out hoe +ive person iam muze yeh saab nahi chiye ....... main sab ko khush bhut khsuh dekhna chathi hoon aur kuch nahi ............

Keep smiling alwyz ...........

God bless you all ...........

God bless YO ...............

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Re: ~Ek akhri baar main mehfil sajana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

«Reply #28 on: October 02, 2010, 08:08:42 PM »

hi.na kabhi kisise kuch chaha na kuch maanga,lekin jab bhi tujhe dekhta hoon to mere ander ki aawazein ruk jaati hai saansein tham jati hai,samajh mein nahi aata ki kya karu,kehna bahut kuch chahta hoon magar keh nahi paata,dil ke ander bahut se sawaal hai.jo saamne aane pe bhul jata hoon,kisi aur ko dekh kar mujhe aisa nahi hota,pata nahi kyun mera dil bus tujhe chahta hai.mere pyaar ko galat mat samajhna kyonki meri nazar mein pyar karne ka matlab haasil karna nahi hota.mein to sirf ye chahta hoon ki kabhi mujhse aisi baat na kehna jo mujhe hurt kare.mujhse bus ek baar kehna,mein tujhse itni doori kar loonga ki mujhe tere paas aane mein shayad saari zindgi bhi kam pade.paas rehekar bhi mein tujhse kitna door hoon........apno ko jab apne kho dete hai,tanhaiyon mein aksar wo ro dete hai,palko pe baethate hai log jinko.wo aksar in palko ko bhigo dete hai............good night...........


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