~Apni tasveer qaid karwana chahta hoon~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 15, 2010, 06:07:48 PM
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Tere ashkon ko apni palkon main qaid karna chahta hoon,
Ae janasheen, main teri panahon main marna chahta hoon..

Teri zulfon ki chanv mujhe har ghum se mehfooz rakhti hai,
Ae dilbaar, main tere sahare ki thandak main jeena chahta hoon..

Tu hoti hai dhoor mujse toh galiyon main chand bhi nikalne se inkaar kar deta hai,
Ae mehboob, main meri zindagi ki galiyon main phir se roshni pana chahta hoon..

Teri nazrein takrayi mujse toh qatl hogaya tha ‘Khamosh’,
Ae jaan, main teri ankhon main apni tasveer qaid karwana chahta hoon..

Suna hai mohobat main neend nahin ati raat raat bhar dilon ko,
Ae janam, main teri mohobat main uthi baichani ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon..

Waise toh kayi tamanaein hai mager aj yehi dil se khwaish uthi hai ‘Khamosh’,
Kay tere dil main, main apna ek ghar bana’na chahta hoon,
Ae janasheen, main teri ankhon main apni tasveer qaid karwana chahta hoon..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2010, 07:36:07 PM »
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Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab...... Khubsurat ahsaas daad hazir hai..
Likhate rahiye..

Khush o Aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2010, 08:40:53 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2010, 04:34:30 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2010, 03:39:13 PM »
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Shukriya Parwaaz jee, Kapil Dost aur Khwaish Dost.!
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