Ek Baraq (Adab)

by drpandey on December 16, 2010, 09:03:04 PM
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                GHAZAL
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Ek baraq likhte hain aur likhke mita dete hain.
Apni tahreer ko ham aisi saja dete hain.

Koi patthar hi sahi laao ibadat ke liye,
Raah mein lagke jo manzil ka pata dete hain.

Kisne maathe pe likha rakkhi hai kismat apni,
Haath ruk jaayen to taqdeer mita dete hain.

Waqt kahta hai chalo koi thikana dhoodhen,
Loog mahtaab par ilzaam laga dete hain.

Ab kahaan raqs hai khwabon ka 'Adab' aankhon mein,
Neend ke pairon mein janzeer pinha dete hain.

Dr HP Pandey 'Adab'

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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2010, 09:46:17 PM »
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Bahut Khoob DR Pande Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2010, 03:46:32 AM »
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waahh Dr Pandey ji kyaa baat kahi hai behad khubsurat ji...
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2010, 06:39:42 AM »
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bahut khoob adab ji...
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2010, 08:24:48 AM »
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badi sunder rachna hai ji aapki Dr. Pandey ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2010, 04:49:10 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 17, 2010, 03:46:32 AM
waahh Dr Pandey ji kyaa baat kahi hai behad khubsurat ji...

Aapka bahot bahot shukriya Kasak Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2010, 01:51:36 AM »
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bahut khoob......
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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2010, 02:43:32 AM »
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waaah waaaaaaaaaaaah bahoot hi behtreen likha hai pandey ji..sirf pahla sher suna suna sa laga  baaqi har sher behad arthpoorn aur baar baar padhne jaisa laga..daad kabool karen.....
kabhi phone bhi utha liya kijiye janab... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2010, 03:18:07 AM »
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kisne maathe par likha rakhi hai kismat apni
      haath ruk jaye to taqdeer mita dete hain
....bahut hi khubsurat aur umda Ghazal 'Adab ji--
bahut meaningfull .....behtareen.
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kis kis ka biswaas karen yahan par 'Adab '
           mauke par jab apne hi daga de jaate hain
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«Reply #9 on: December 18, 2010, 07:53:05 AM »
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buhat khoob! suljhi huvi, jaandaar aur khoobsurat ghazal!
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2010, 07:39:01 AM »
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Haushla afzai ka bahot shukriya Janaab..


Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 17, 2010, 06:39:42 AM
bahut khoob adab ji...
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2010, 07:40:17 AM »
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Bahot bahot Shukriya Koyal Ji..


Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 17, 2010, 08:24:48 AM
badi sunder rachna hai ji aapki Dr. Pandey ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2010, 02:03:35 PM »
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Dr Saheb! ek lambe arse baad aap kaa koi kalaam nazar nawaaz huaa.Bahut hee umda....gazal kaa har shair aap kee zehaniyat kaa dastkhat maaloom hotaa hai....bas ek shair ko samajhne se  qaasir rahee...shayad kisi gahare soch kaa muzaahira ho aap kaa ye shair...


Waqt kahta hai chalo koi thikana dhoodhen,
Loog mahtaab par ilzaam laga dete hain.
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2010, 08:16:32 AM »
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Mamta ji bahot bahot Shukriya, Nawazish, Karam ki aapko ye ghazal pasand aai aur aapne hausla afzai ki..aapka behad shukriya.

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 20, 2010, 02:03:35 PM
Dr Saheb! ek lambe arse baad aap kaa koi kalaam nazar nawaaz huaa.Bahut hee umda....gazal kaa har shair aap kee zehaniyat kaa dastkhat maaloom hotaa hai....bas ek shair ko samajhne se  qaasir rahee...shayad kisi gahare soch kaa muzaahira ho aap kaa ye shair...


Waqt kahta hai chalo koi thikana dhoodhen,
Loog mahtaab par ilzaam laga dete hain.
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