Adab Arz Hai.....My First One

by sumit on September 20, 2004, 02:57:49 PM
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Mehfil hain Shahirana, naam hamara bhi dharz hain,
Achi si ek shayri sunana ab hamara bhi farz hain,
Agar aaj na sunaai to hum pe tumhara karz hain,
par shru karney seh pehlay ek baar ADAB ARZ HAIN, "  


Pehli baar likh raha hoon....aap sabkey Views chahiye...
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2004, 03:16:42 PM »
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Hum shayer to na the jaane kya soch kar naam darj kara diya
Kuch aisa hua asar doston ka ki hum ko bhi shayer bana diya!!!

Khushaamadeed!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2004, 12:40:28 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Hum shayer to na the jaane kya soch kar naam darj kara diya
Kuch aisa hua asar doston ka ki hum ko bhi shayer bana diya!!!

Khushaamadeed!!!!



Wah Wah Talat sahab..Kya khoob likha hai...

Subhaan Allah... Usual Smile [/quote]
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2004, 01:30:34 PM »
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Bhai Sumit Iam not sahab...haan Saahiba keh sakte hain.. par yaar itni formality ki zaroorat nahin hai!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2004, 04:23:27 PM »
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Most Welcome Sumit..............
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2004, 04:54:57 PM »
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Aray Tum Shan Say Aaye Ho Inki Mehfil Main
Khudah Gawah Hay Tum Ko Nah Koi Rokay Ga
Magar Yeh Jaan Lo Hum Sab Hain Pyaar Keh Rahi
Yahan Peh Koi Nahi Qad-r-Daan Dhokay Ka...........
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2004, 01:21:29 AM »
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nice Sumit
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2004, 11:55:54 AM »
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nice sumit, talat & waheed
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2004, 01:25:41 PM »
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Thanx Amit
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2004, 02:46:04 PM »
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thanx amit....
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2004, 03:13:28 PM »
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aati hai baat baat mujhe baar baar yaad
kahta hun daud daud ke qaasid se raah mein.....

qaasid= khabar le jaane waala
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«Reply #11 on: September 22, 2004, 03:27:54 PM »
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Qaasid ke aate aate khat ek aur likh rakhoon
Main jaanta hoon jo wo likhenge jawab main!!

(Mirza Ghalib)
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«Reply #12 on: September 22, 2004, 06:20:13 PM »
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apni juban ki larjis pe kaabo rakho jara
pyar ke bol to hoton se nikal jate hain
apne teawar to sambhalo jara
phir ye na kehena ki chehere badalte hain
to log bhi badal jatein hain
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2004, 06:51:55 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Talat AND  Sonik.
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«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2004, 03:39:02 AM »
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Thanx Pooja...

Ye dastoore zubaa(n) bandi hai kaisa reti mehfil main
Yahan to baat karne ko tarasti hai zubaa(n) meri

(Allama Iqbaal)
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