Faasle "Khwaish"

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Rishto Ki Ehmiyat Batate hai Faasle
Kabhi-kabhi Door Rehkar Bhi kareeb le Aate Hai faasle

Main Jahan Bhi Rehta Hoon Teri Hi Baatein karta Hoon
Dil Ke Jazbaaton Ko lafzon Mein Sunaate Hai Faasle

Har Koi Uljha Rehta Hai Apni Pareshaniyon Mein
Tanhaiyon  mein Bahut Rulaate Hai Faasle...

Kabhi Halaat Ka Shikaar To kabhi Kuch majbooriyon Ke sadke!!!
Insaan Ko Bahut Tadpaate Hai Faasle...

Kuch Yaadein Aisi hai jinhe Main Dil mein Mehfoos Rakhta Hoon
Hardum har Pal Teri yaad Dilaate Hai Faasle...

Dooriyon chaahe Lakh Ho par Koi Dil Se Door Naa Ho!!!
Kuch Palon ko Hardum Mehkaate Hai Faasle...

Des-Pardes mein Naa jaane Kitne Apne Bichde Hai!!!
Do Roti Ki Bhook Mein Naa Jaane Kya-Kya Karwaate Hai Faasle

"Khwaish" Ne Zindagi Ko Bahut Kareeb se Dekha Hai!!!
Kabhi kisi Ke Chehre Ki Muskaan bankar
To Kabhi Kisi Ke Palkon Par Ashko ke moti bankar
Jhilmilaate Hai Faasle......

Rishto Ki Ehmiyat Batate Hai Faasle............

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2010, 04:24:31 PM »
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kuch  likhungi is par aapki ijazat ho to khwaish ji......
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2010, 04:39:16 PM »
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Waah khwaish ji bahut hi badhiya kavita hai..zindgi k sach k kareeb apki ek aur rachna bahut pasand aayi...
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2010, 04:43:26 PM »
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kuch  likhungi is par aapki ijazat ho to khwaish ji......

De Di Aapko izzazat!!!!

Jaao jeelo Apni Zindagi-D.D.L.J  icon_geek
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2010, 05:08:00 PM »
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De Di Aapko izzazat!!!!

Jaao jeelo Apni Zindagi-D.D.L.J  icon_geek


bht bht shukriya ji ijaazat dene ka...

par aapne itna achcha likha tha k hum puche bina reh hina paye.......
ek bar khub sari taaliyan bajana chahte hain aapke liye ji...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aur ab hum jii bhar k apni zindagi jiyenge.....

ye lijiye dekhiye kaisi lagti hain aapko hamari koshish....

Sach kehte hain aaap k
Rishton ki ehmiyat batate hain faasle

Lekin jab hud se badh jate hain faasle
Kai bar dilon me dooriyan le aate hain faasle

Jab bhi jarurat  ho kisi ki aur sath na ho koi
Uss waqt dil  me tiis uthate hain faasle

Kuch yadon pe jum jaati hai dhool kai bar
Unko fir se saaf kar jate hain faasle

*Kasak* ban jati hai dil ki ye judaai
Aur uski wajah ban jate hain faasle…….
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2010, 06:12:21 PM »
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Kuch Yaadein Aisi hai jinhe Main Dil mein Mehfoos Rakhta Hoon
Hardum har Pal Teri yaad Dilaate Hai Faasle...


Des-Pardes mein Naa jaane Kitne Apne Bichde Hai!!!
Do Roti Ki Bhook Mein Naa Jaane Kya-Kya Karwaate Hai Faasl


Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Above line are too Good.... Bahut achche aur sahiN khayaal ko achcha bayaaN kiya hai aapne... Koshish achchi rahi daad janab....

And Kask jee aapke bhi last do sher achche hai.....
Jisme se pahele wala bahut jyada achcha hai so deep..

Keep writting....
Keep posting......
Keep smiling......          



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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2010, 06:29:23 PM »
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thnx parwaz ji...mujhe yo me sabse jyada aapke reply ka wait rehta hai....
thnx alottttt
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2010, 07:35:26 PM »
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Khwaish Dost, yeh kaisa topic cherr diya apne.,Faasle..
Faaslon ki ehmiat aur dard sirf woh jante hai jo kareeb bhi reh chuke aur dhooriyan bhi payi hai..
Apne bahaut acha likha hai..Dil se daad kyun ki Rahim ne dil se parra iss nazm ko..kuch yaadein yaad agayi, ankhein bheeg gayi kyun ki rulate bahaut hai Faasle..!

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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2010, 07:36:58 PM »
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Anamika di, bahaut zada khubsoorat likha hai apne bhi..dil se daad..dusra shaer choo gaya..! Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2010, 07:41:24 PM »
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Anamika di, bahaut zada khubsoorat likha hai apne bhi..dil se daad..dusra shaer choo gaya..! Applause Applause

shukriya bhai.....
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 08:36:15 PM »
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Waah khwaish ji bahut hi badhiya kavita hai..zindgi k sach k kareeb apki ek aur rachna bahut pasand aayi...

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much geetji.. icon_flower

bas Yuhi Huemsha Saath dete rahiyega..
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 09:28:49 PM »
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Bhut hi khoobsoorat likha hai .........

Wah Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2010, 04:15:22 PM »
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bht bht shukriya ji ijaazat dene ka...

par aapne itna achcha likha tha k hum puche bina reh hina paye.......
ek bar khub sari taaliyan bajana chahte hain aapke liye ji...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aur ab hum jii bhar k apni zindagi jiyenge.....

ye lijiye dekhiye kaisi lagti hain aapko hamari koshish....

Sach kehte hain aaap k
Rishton ki ehmiyat batate hain faasle

Lekin jab hud se badh jate hain faasle
Kai bar dilon me dooriyan le aate hain faasle

Jab bhi jarurat  ho kisi ki aur sath na ho koi
Uss waqt dil  me tiis uthate hain faasle

Kuch yadon pe jum jaati hai dhool kai bar
Unko fir se saaf kar jate hain faasle

*Kasak* ban jati hai dil ki ye judaai
Aur uski wajah ban jate hain faasle…….

Dher saari Taliyon ke Tehhhhhhhhhhh Dillllllllllll Se Shukriya Anuji..

Aapne itna pasand kiya yeh ajankar bahut khushi hui hai..

AAur Bahut Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..har topic par aapki kalam kuch keh deti hai..yeh bahut badi baat hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2010, 06:05:48 PM »
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Rishto Ki Ehmiyat Batate hai Faasle
Kabhi-kabhi Door Rehkar Bhi kareeb le Aate Hai faasle

Main Jahan Bhi Rehta Hoon Teri Hi Baatein karta Hoon
Dil Ke Jazbaaton Ko lafzon Mein Sunaate Hai Faasle

Har Koi Uljha Rehta Hai Apni Pareshaniyon Mein
Tanhaiyon  mein Bahut Rulaate Hai Faasle...

Kabhi Halaat Ka Shikaar To kabhi Kuch majbooriyon Ke sadke!!!
Insaan Ko Bahut Tadpaate Hai Faasle...

Kuch Yaadein Aisi hai jinhe Main Dil mein Mehfoos Rakhta Hoon
Hardum har Pal Teri yaad Dilaate Hai Faasle...

Dooriyon chaahe Lakh Ho par Koi Dil Se Door Naa Ho!!!
Kuch Palon ko Hardum Mehkaate Hai Faasle...

Des-Pardes mein Naa jaane Kitne Apne Bichde Hai!!!
Do Roti Ki Bhook Mein Naa Jaane Kya-Kya Karwaate Hai Faasle

"Khwaish" Ne Zindagi Ko Bahut Kareeb se Dekha Hai!!!
Kabhi kisi Ke Chehre Ki Muskaan bankar
To Kabhi Kisi Ke Palkon Par
Ashko ke moti bankar Jhilmilaate Hai Faasle......

Rishto Ki Ehmiyat Batate Hai Faasle............

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


wah wah wah wah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kaya baat hai, jitani tareef ki jaaye kam... ek ek line dard mai doobi ek ek shabd poori tarah se arth ko samjhata hua... bahoot khoob.. good work, wonderful creation!!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2010, 06:08:50 PM »
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Sach kehte hain aaap k
Rishton ki ehmiyat batate hain faasle

Lekin jab hud se badh jate hain faasle
Kai bar dilon me dooriyan le aate hain faasle

Jab bhi jarurat  ho kisi ki aur sath na ho koi
Uss waqt dil  me tiis uthate hain faasle

Kuch yadon pe jum jaati hai dhool kai bar
Unko fir se saaf kar jate hain faasle

*Kasak* ban jati hai dil ki ye judaai
Aur uski wajah ban jate hain faasle…….


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bahoot khoob Kasak ji... kamaal ka likha hai app ne.. dil khush ho gaya... good creation....
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