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Rishto Ki Ehmiyat Batate hai Faasle
Kabhi-kabhi Door Rehkar Bhi kareeb le Aate Hai faasle
Main Jahan Bhi Rehta Hoon Teri Hi Baatein karta Hoon
Dil Ke Jazbaaton Ko lafzon Mein Sunaate Hai Faasle
Har Koi Uljha Rehta Hai Apni Pareshaniyon Mein
Tanhaiyon mein Bahut Rulaate Hai Faasle...
Kabhi Halaat Ka Shikaar To kabhi Kuch majbooriyon Ke sadke!!!
Insaan Ko Bahut Tadpaate Hai Faasle...
Kuch Yaadein Aisi hai jinhe Main Dil mein Mehfoos Rakhta Hoon
Hardum har Pal Teri yaad Dilaate Hai Faasle...
Dooriyon chaahe Lakh Ho par Koi Dil Se Door Naa Ho!!!
Kuch Palon ko Hardum Mehkaate Hai Faasle...
Des-Pardes mein Naa jaane Kitne Apne Bichde Hai!!!
Do Roti Ki Bhook Mein Naa Jaane Kya-Kya Karwaate Hai Faasle
"Khwaish" Ne Zindagi Ko Bahut Kareeb se Dekha Hai!!!
Kabhi kisi Ke Chehre Ki Muskaan bankar
To Kabhi Kisi Ke Palkon Par Ashko ke moti bankar
Jhilmilaate Hai Faasle......
Rishto Ki Ehmiyat Batate Hai Faasle............
~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2010, 04:24:31 PM » |
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kuch likhungi is par aapki ijazat ho to khwaish ji......
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2010, 04:39:16 PM » |
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Waah khwaish ji bahut hi badhiya kavita hai..zindgi k sach k kareeb apki ek aur rachna bahut pasand aayi...
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2010, 04:43:26 PM » |
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kuch likhungi is par aapki ijazat ho to khwaish ji......
De Di Aapko izzazat!!!!
Jaao jeelo Apni Zindagi-D.D.L.J  |
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2010, 06:12:21 PM » |
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Kuch Yaadein Aisi hai jinhe Main Dil mein Mehfoos Rakhta Hoon
Hardum har Pal Teri yaad Dilaate Hai Faasle...
Des-Pardes mein Naa jaane Kitne Apne Bichde Hai!!!
Do Roti Ki Bhook Mein Naa Jaane Kya-Kya Karwaate Hai Faasl
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!
Above line are too Good.... Bahut achche aur sahiN khayaal ko achcha bayaaN kiya hai aapne... Koshish achchi rahi daad janab....
And Kask jee aapke bhi last do sher achche hai.....
Jisme se pahele wala bahut jyada achcha hai so deep..
Keep writting....
Keep posting......
Keep smiling......
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2010, 06:29:23 PM » |
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thnx parwaz ji...mujhe yo me sabse jyada aapke reply ka wait rehta hai....
thnx alottttt
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2010, 07:35:26 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2010, 07:41:24 PM » |
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Anamika di, bahaut zada khubsoorat likha hai apne bhi..dil se daad..dusra shaer choo gaya..!  shukriya bhai..... |
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 08:36:15 PM » |
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Waah khwaish ji bahut hi badhiya kavita hai..zindgi k sach k kareeb apki ek aur rachna bahut pasand aayi...
Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much geetji.. 
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 09:28:49 PM » |
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Bhut hi khoobsoorat likha hai .........
Wah Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2010, 06:05:48 PM » |
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2010, 06:08:50 PM » |
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