FATOOR (4- Liner)... "MohaN"

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Suntaa hoon ke qanoon bante hain torhne ke hee liye
Iss liye har qanoon hee dosto koi bhi torhh saktaa hai
Magar yeh jo ek fatoor bharaa hai aapke dilon mein
Gore kaale kaa woh bhalaa kaun jorhh saktaa hai

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FATOOR

Suntaa hoon ke qanoon bante hain torhne ke hee liye
Iss liye har qanoon hee dosto koi bhi torhh saktaa hai
Magar yeh jo ek fatoor bharaa hai aapke dilon mein
Gore kaale kaa woh bhalaa kaun jorhh saktaa hai

Surindar N.      "MohaN"

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