FIR SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE----------MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on June 10, 2010, 03:05:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 11, 2010, 11:06:29 AM »
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Bohat Achche Mamta Ji, Aur Manoj Ji,.
Bohat Achche,.

Ek Koshish Bas Aap Sabki Duaa Chaahoonga, Mere Liye Dua Karein


Kuch Riwaaj Is Shehar Ke Badlaa Ke Chalte Hain,.
Ab Ki Baar Chalo, Sabko Jagaaa Ke Chalte Hain,.

Tayyar Hona Jaaye Phirse Koi Aashiq Yahaan,.
Apne Zakham Sabko Dikhaa Ke Chalte Hain,.

Unhe Ikhtiyaar Hai Hume Chahna Ya Thukraana,.
Chalo Unke Dar Hum Sar Jhukaa Ke Chalte Hain,.

Dhoondenge Wo Hamaare Wajood Ko "Azeem,.
Ab Jo Hamaari Mohabbat Ko Thukraake Chalte Hain,.

-Azeem-


naaaaice one azeem sb
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«Reply #16 on: June 12, 2010, 12:35:17 PM »
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Nice poem Mamta-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Koi naya geet chheda jaaye
Sathi naya ab dhunda jaaye

Phir se kisi pe etbaar kiya jaaye
Phir se zindagi ko ab jeeya jaaye


SOOKHE PATTON KO HATAYA JAYE
FIE SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE

KAB SE ROOTHI HAIN BAHAREN HUMSE
CHALO UNKO BHI MANAYA JAYE

HO GAYEEN RUSWA JO YAADEN MERI
UNKO SARE BAZM NA LAYA JAYE

TOOTATI SAANSON KO AKHTIYAR AAYE
EK BAAR TO UNKO BULAYA JAYE

KOI EK TO AISA HO IS JAHAN ME
JIS PE MERE DIL KO AITBAAR AAYE


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«Reply #17 on: June 12, 2010, 05:11:15 PM »
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Nice poem Mamta-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Koi naya geet chheda jaaye
Sathi naya ab dhunda jaaye

Phir se kisi pe etbaar kiya jaaye
Phir se zindagi ko ab jeeya jaaye



ZAKAM KO USKE PHIR EK BAAR KUREDA JAYE
KYU NA HAALEDIL USSE PHIR PUCHA JAYE
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«Reply #18 on: June 13, 2010, 11:16:37 AM »
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Are nahi laga sakte ho tum marham tou nahi koi baat
Bade sadist ho zakhmo ko kuredne ki tum karte baat

Bhole ban kar haal na puchho,Behte hain ashk tou behne do
Jis-se bhee badhe baichainee dil ki,Aysi tassalee tum rehne do


ZAKAM KO USKE PHIR EK BAAR KUREDA JAYE
KYU NA HAALEDIL USSE PHIR PUCHA JAYE
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«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2010, 12:46:32 PM »
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NICE  RESPONCE KOYAL JI N MANOJ JI!!!LAJAWAB!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: June 13, 2010, 12:51:28 PM »
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DAMAN ME SAJAYE HAIN ZAKHM SITARON KI TARAH
KHUSHIYAN HI KHUSHIYAN HAIN ANARON KI TARAH
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«Reply #21 on: June 13, 2010, 01:24:23 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI KHAMOSH JI,BAHUT KHOOB KOSHISH HAI AAPKI.....

KUCH RIVAAZ IS SHAHAR KE...................

TAYYAR HON NA JAYEN...............

LAJAWAB PESHKASH........
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«Reply #22 on: June 13, 2010, 04:41:30 PM »
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Are nahi laga sakte ho tum marham tou nahi koi baat
Bade sadist ho zakhmo ko kuredne ki tum karte baat

Bhole ban kar haal na puchho,Behte hain ashk tou behne do
Jis-se bhee badhe baichainee dil ki,Aysi tassalee tum rehne do



bahut khub koyal g
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«Reply #23 on: June 13, 2010, 04:43:34 PM »
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DAMAN ME SAJAYE HAIN ZAKHM SITARON KI TARAH
KHUSHIYAN HI KHUSHIYAN HAIN ANARON KI TARAH

gd one mamta g
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«Reply #24 on: June 15, 2010, 01:11:49 PM »
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Ghazal likhne ki bahoot achhi koshish ki hai Mamta ji. Khayalat ka izhar behad purlutf hai. Apne meter mei likha hai ye baat sabse achi lagi. Akhri ke  ashaar me chuk hui par koi baat nahi , bahot jald aap mahir-e-ghazal ho jaengi. Jo koshish karta hai wahi paata hai.  Likhti rahiye. Mai kuch islah karna chahta tha par apke  bura manne ke khauf ne baaz rakha.
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«Reply #25 on: June 16, 2010, 12:24:40 AM »
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bahot khoob mamta saheba ,,acha kalaam hai,upar ke chaar ashaar bahot hi khoob kaha hai aap ne .. wah
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«Reply #26 on: June 16, 2010, 06:33:10 AM »
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Nazar Saheb bahut bahut shukriya.5th shair ko islah ke saath likhte to ahsaanmand hoti.
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«Reply #27 on: June 16, 2010, 07:02:34 AM »
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ADEEB SAHEB! PRANAAM! AAP KI HOUSLA AFZAI KA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA.
AGAR AAP SHAIR KI ISLAH KAR DETE TO BEHTAR HOTA.BURA MANANE JAISI KOI BAAT NAHI.WAISE BHI AALOCHAKON KI SOHBAT BEHTAR HAI .APNI KAMIYON KA AHSAS JO HOTA HAI.KOI TO HO JO AAINA DIKHAYE.VARNA TO KHUSHFAHMIYON KI KAMI NAHI.MUJHE ACHCHA LAGEGA KI AAP AAKHIRI SHAIR KI ISALAH KAREN TO.........
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«Reply #28 on: June 16, 2010, 07:10:04 AM »
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SOOKHE PATTON KO HATAYA JAYE
FIE SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE

KAB SE ROOTHI HAIN BAHAREN HUMSE
CHALO UNKO BHI MANAYA JAYE

HO GAYEEN RUSWA JO YAADEN MERI
UNKO SARE BAZM NA LAYA JAYE

TOOTATI SAANSON KO AKHTIYAR AAYE
EK BAAR TO UNKO BULAYA JAYE

KOI EK TO AISA HO IS JAHAN ME
JIS PE MERE DIL KO AITBAAR AAYE



Wah! Kya khoob likha hai aap ne Mamta Ji
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«Reply #29 on: June 16, 2010, 11:33:53 AM »
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Mamta-di thanks a lot.....

NICE  RESPONCE KOYAL JI N MANOJ JI!!!LAJAWAB!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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