FIR SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE----------MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on June 10, 2010, 03:05:50 PM
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SOOKHE PATTON KO HATAYA JAYE
FIE SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE

KAB SE ROOTHI HAIN BAHAREN HUMSE
CHALO UNKO BHI MANAYA JAYE

HO GAYEEN RUSWA JO YAADEN MERI
UNKO SARE BAZM NA LAYA JAYE

TOOTATI SAANSON KO AKHTIYAR AAYE
EK BAAR TO UNKO BULAYA JAYE

KOI EK TO AISA HO IS JAHAN ME
JIS PE MERE DIL KO AITBAAR AAYE

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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2010, 03:46:00 PM »
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buhat khoob! ... achha laga parh kar.. is rachna ko likhnay n share.. ka shukriya..
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2010, 04:03:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya vb ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2010, 04:09:14 PM »
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bhaut acchi poem likhi hai aapne... with some lovely charms...  notworthy
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2010, 04:11:11 PM »
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thanks Fatimaji
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2010, 04:56:01 PM »
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wah bahoth qoob mamta saheba , dad hazir hai qubool karen ,, sher dil pe acar chodte hain ,, allah apko khush rakhe ,,



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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2010, 05:54:06 PM »
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SOOKHE PATTON KO HATAYA JAYE
FIE SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE

KAB SE ROOTHI HAIN BAHAREN HUMSE
CHALO UNKO BHI MANAYA JAYE

HO GAYEEN RUSWA JO YAADEN MERI
UNKO SARE BAZM NA LAYA JAYE

TOOTATI SAANSON KO AKHTIYAR AAYE
EK BAAR TO UNKO BULAYA JAYE

KOI EK TO AISA HO IS JAHAN ME
JIS PE MERE DIL KO AITBAAR AAYE




bahut khub mamta g

bedard jindgi ko khushaal banaya jaye
kyu na gumo se jindgi ko sajaya jaye

ban na jaye koi masoom insaan se khuda
kyu uski her baat mei ha ko milaya jaye

banaye koi bhi taj kisi ki yaad mei lakin
haath kisi mazdoor ka na phir kataya jaye

kha jayega dhoka dekh kar gum bhi ek bar
kyu na gumo mei he bus muskuraya jaye

kuch to hai hamme bhi shayer ki se baat
gazel likhkar kyu na sabko ye bataya jaye




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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2010, 10:35:53 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

BAHUT ACHCHE MANOJ JI BAHUT KHOOB!DAAD DENE KA YE DANISHMANDANA ANDAZ LAJAWAB HAI.BAHUT KHOOB BAHUT KHOOB.....
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2010, 12:09:26 AM »
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Bohat Achche Mamta Ji, Aur Manoj Ji,.
Bohat Achche,.

Ek Koshish Bas Aap Sabki Duaa Chaahoonga, Mere Liye Dua Karein


Kuch Riwaaj Is Shehar Ke Badlaa Ke Chalte Hain,.
Ab Ki Baar Chalo, Sabko Jagaaa Ke Chalte Hain,.

Tayyar Hona Jaaye Phirse Koi Aashiq Yahaan,.
Apne Zakham Sabko Dikhaa Ke Chalte Hain,.

Unhe Ikhtiyaar Hai Hume Chahna Ya Thukraana,.
Chalo Unke Dar Hum Sar Jhukaa Ke Chalte Hain,.

Dhoondenge Wo Hamaare Wajood Ko "Azeem,.
Ab Jo Hamaari Mohabbat Ko Thukraake Chalte Hain,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2010, 12:20:58 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Mamta ji great creation,beautiful lines by Manoj ji and Azeem bhai.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2010, 12:59:53 AM »
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SUPARB!!!AZEEMJI KYA KAHE AAP KI SHAAN ME ?LAFZON KA KOTA KHATM HO GAYA HAI.BEHAD SHUKRIYA....AAPNE WAQT DIYA HUMARE QALAAM KO PADHA OR SARAHA....ITANA HI NAHI APNE ZORE QALAM SE EK KHOOBSURAT TOHFE SE HUME NAWAZA.IS NEK NAWAZISH KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA........
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2010, 01:02:53 AM »
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MADHU JI HAMESHA KI TARAH AAP KI DAAD HUM DIL SE QUBOOL KARTE HAIN...AAGE BHI AAP KI HOUSLA AFZAI KI MUNTAZIR.......
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2010, 07:38:54 AM »
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waah bahot khoob Mamta ji,behatreen ghazal likhi hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Manoj ji and Azeem dear aapne bhi bahot khoob likha hai  Applause Applause Applause Applause

THANX
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2010, 11:03:07 AM »
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SOOKHE PATTON KO HATAYA JAYE
FIE SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA JAYE

KAB SE ROOTHI HAIN BAHAREN HUMSE
CHALO UNKO BHI MANAYA JAYE

HO GAYEEN RUSWA JO YAADEN MERI
UNKO SARE BAZM NA LAYA JAYE

TOOTATI SAANSON KO AKHTIYAR AAYE
EK BAAR TO UNKO BULAYA JAYE

KOI EK TO AISA HO IS JAHAN ME
JIS PE MERE DIL KO AITBAAR AAYE



behtreen mamta ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2010, 11:05:21 AM »
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bahut khub mamta g

bedard jindgi ko khushaal banaya jaye
kyu na gumo se jindgi ko sajaya jaye

ban na jaye koi masoom insaan se khuda
kyu uski her baat mei ha ko milaya jaye

banaye koi bhi taj kisi ki yaad mei lakin
haath kisi mazdoor ka na phir kataya jaye

kha jayega dhoka dekh kar gum bhi ek bar
kyu na gumo mei he bus muskuraya jaye

kuch to hai hamme bhi shayer ki se baat
gazel likhkar kyu na sabko ye bataya jaye







waaah manoj kya baat hai gud knock....!!
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