kuch aur kiya jaye............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on August 26, 2010, 09:09:28 AM
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 HO GAYA SOG BAHUT KUCH AUR KIYA JAAYE
CHALO NIZAAM-E-DIL PE KUCH GOUR KIYA JAAYE

JHARNE LAGA HAI AB TO RANJ-O-GHAM KA PALSTAR
RANGEEN DAR-O-DEEVAAR KO KISI TOUR KIYA JAAYE

RAAH-E-HAYAAT ME SUBAH SE SHAAM HO GAYEE
DOULAT KEE NEKIYON KO AB KOUR KIYA JAAYE

MUSHKIL KEE IS GHARI ME TANHA NAHI HAI TU
AHSAS IS YAQEEN KA SHAHZOR KIYA JAYE

ROODAD-E-BEBASEE KA UNVAAN BANOON KAB TAK
DUNIYA SE KHATM AB YE ZULM-O-ZOUR KIYA JAAYE

MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 06:32:12 PM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 26, 2010, 09:09:28 AM
HO GAYA SOG BAHUT KUCH AUR KIYA JAAYE
CHALO NIZAAM-E-DIL PE KUCH GOUR KIYA JAAYE

JHARNE LAGA HAI AB TO RANJ-O-GHAM KA PALSTAR
RANGEEN DAR-O-DEEVAAR KO KISI TOUR KIYA JAAYE

RAAH-E-HAYAAT ME SUBAH SE SHAAM HO GAYEE
DOULAT KEE NEKIYON KO AB KOUR KIYA JAAYE

MUSHKIL KEE IS GHARI ME TANHA NAHI HAI TU
AHSAS IS YAQEEN KA SHAHZOR KIYA JAYE

ROODAD-E-BEBASEE KA UNVAAN BANOON KAB TAK
DUNIYA SE KHATM AB YE ZULM-O-ZOUR KIYA JAAYE

MAMTA BAJPAI

BAHUT POSITIVE JAZBE KA EHSAAS KARATA HAI YE KALAAM....VERI NAAAAICE MAMTA JI
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 07:49:39 PM »
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA KHAMOSH JEE!
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2010, 08:13:51 PM »
Mamta Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob mohtarma kia kaheN bus matla padhe hai abhi Us per dil se daad kia aat hai bahut umdaa...

Chaliye aapki Gazal per aate hai.....         


Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 26, 2010, 09:09:28 AM
HO GAYA SOG BAHUT KUCH AUR KIYA JAAYE
CHALO NIZAAM-E-DIL PE KUCH GOUR KIYA JAAYE

Masha Allah Bahut khoob realy behad deep thought ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne..... ek naye andaaz meiN Daad           


JHARNE LAGA HAI AB TO RANJ-O-GHAM KA PALSTAR
RANGEEN DAR-O-DEEVAAR KO KISI TOUR KIYA JAAYE

Hmmm Bahut achche yeh bhi khoob hai... Daad janaab.. Usual Smile         


RAAH-E-HAYAAT ME SUBAH SE SHAAM HO GAYEE
DOULAT KEE NEKIYON KO AB KOUR KIYA JAAYE

Kia baat hai wah jee waah ... Aap bahut zahin hai.... is sher se saaf hai...           


MUSHKIL KEE IS GHARI ME TANHA NAHI HAI TU
AHSAS IS YAQEEN KA SHAHZOR KIYA JAYE

Shahzor ke mayne humare zahen meiN nahi hai .... Aapne sochke hi likha hoga... so abhi iske liye kuch nahi kaheNge..         


ROODAD-E-BEBASEE KA UNVAAN BANOON KAB TAK
DUNIYA SE KHATM AB YE ZULM-O-ZOUR KIYA JAAYE

yeh Sher bhi achcah hai per humare khayaal se pahele misre meiN... Banoon ke bajaaye... " baney" chahiye... KyuN ke aap aakele duniyaa se yeh sab khatam nahi kar sakte aur aapka jo radiff hai woh as a order as a request use hai... us hisab se aap akele hi yeh baat nahi leN sakti hai..         


MAMTA BAJPAI

Aapki koshish umdaa hai...
Likhate rhaiye..... Gar koi gustaqi hui ho to mazarhat chahte hai......

Khush rahiye...
Khdua Hafez....         
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2010, 09:27:15 AM »
PARWAAZ JEE ! GAZAL KEE NAZAR NAWAAZISH KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA..........
SHAHZOR KA MEANING HAI BALWAAN YA SHAKTISHAALI.YAHAAN ISKA IST'MAAL YAQEEN KE AHSAS KO TAAQATWAR BANANE KE LIYE KIYA HAI.

AB CHALTE HAIN MAQTE PAR TO JANAAB IS ME MAI AKELI NAHEEN BALKEH POORI AURAT ZAAT KEE PUKAAR HAI.KEH AURAT KAB TAK ROODAD-E-BEBASEE KA UNWAAN BANATEE RAHEGEE?

MUJHE MAHSOOS HO RAHA HAI KEH MUJHE (AURAT ZAAT)KA ISTEMAAL KARNA THA.. TO KARI KO SAMJHNE ME AASAANEE HOTI..

MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 02:32:22 AM »
Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 26, 2010, 09:09:28 AM
HO GAYA SOG BAHUT KUCH AUR KIYA JAAYE
CHALO NIZAAM-E-DIL PE KUCH GOUR KIYA JAAYE

JHARNE LAGA HAI AB TO RANJ-O-GHAM KA PALSTAR
RANGEEN DAR-O-DEEVAAR KO KISI TOUR KIYA JAAYE

RAAH-E-HAYAAT ME SUBAH SE SHAAM HO GAYEE
DOULAT KEE NEKIYON KO AB KOUR KIYA JAAYE

MUSHKIL KEE IS GHARI ME TANHA NAHI HAI TU
AHSAS IS YAQEEN KA SHAHZOR KIYA JAYE

ROODAD-E-BEBASEE KA UNVAAN BANOON KAB TAK
DUNIYA SE KHATM AB YE ZULM-O-ZOUR KIYA JAAYE

MAMTA BAJPAI

Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 05:01:40 AM »
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RAJESH JEE!
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