gardish me sitaare

by bekarar on November 22, 2008, 07:52:41 AM
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ghazal, sher, rubaai likhe, bane shayar jo saare hain
inka anjaam hai yahi ye mohabbat ke maare hain

bura waqt khuda ki anmol nemat hai aadam ko warna
ye jaat bhul hi jaaye, ki wo kiske sahare hai

hansane ka maza bhi lega wahi, dubta tujhe dekh-ke,
dariya-e-duniya me jise haasil kinaare hain

sar chupane ko mayassar hai, bas khula aasma,
in barasti boondon ko, kaise kah dun baharen hain,

titli ke paron ko noch ke wo maasoom hans diya,
aise hi tere sitam hain aur titli se dard humaare hain

gumon se malamal, raha ta-umra bekarar
koun kahta hai ki mere gardish me sitare hain,
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2008, 08:35:46 AM »
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ghazal, sher, rubaai likhe, bane shayar jo saare hain
inka anjaam hai yahi ye mohabbat ke maare hain

bura waqt khuda ki anmol nemat hai aadam ko warna
ye jaat bhul hi jaaye, ki wo kiske sahare hai

hansane ka maza bhi lega wahi, dubta tujhe dekh-ke,
dariya-e-duniya me jise haasil kinaare hain

sar chupane ko mayassar hai, bas khula aasma,
in barasti boondon ko, kaise kah dun baharen hain,

titli ke paron ko noch ke wo maasoom hans diya,
aise hi tere sitam hain aur titli se dard humaare hain

gumon se malamal, raha ta-umra bekarar
koun kahta hai ki mere gardish me sitare hain,


KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI BEKARAR JI,
AAJKAL AAPKI KALAM JORO-SHORO PAR HAI,
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB LIKH RAHE HO AAP...
KEEP IT UP,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2008, 06:51:55 PM »
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kya lajawaab aur umda likha hai
bekarar ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2008, 07:45:09 PM »
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ghazal, sher, rubaai likhe, bane shayar jo saare hain
inka anjaam hai yahi ye mohabbat ke maare hain

bura waqt khuda ki anmol nemat hai aadam ko warna
ye jaat bhul hi jaaye, ki wo kiske sahare hai

hansane ka maza bhi lega wahi, dubta tujhe dekh-ke,
dariya-e-duniya me jise haasil kinaare hain

sar chupane ko mayassar hai, bas khula aasma,
in barasti boondon ko, kaise kah dun baharen hain,

titli ke paron ko noch ke wo maasoom hans diya,
aise hi tere sitam hain aur titli se dard humaare hain

gumon se malamal, raha ta-umra bekarar
koun kahta hai ki mere gardish me sitare hain,


Bohat khoob Bekarar ji, bohat behter kalam hay aap ka.. bohat taraqi kerien gay aap sukhan wari mien...
Urs.
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2008, 09:06:32 PM »
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aap bahut hi umda shayar hai sajid sahab
aapki har line dil ko chhu leti hai
bahut khub bahut khub
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2008, 09:08:36 PM »
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Bahout umda likha hai aap ne Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2008, 01:56:29 PM »
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thanks Pank ji aur Rajesh ji... Allah aap ko aur traqi day... Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2008, 02:22:16 PM »
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KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI BEKARAR JI,
AAJKAL AAPKI KALAM JORO-SHORO PAR HAI,
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB LIKH RAHE HO AAP...
KEEP IT UP,
BY. K.SHAEL

padhne aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya shally
ji poori koshish karunga ise "up me hi keep" kar ke rakhun
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2008, 02:24:02 PM »
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kya lajawaab aur umda likha hai
bekarar ji Applause Applause

bahoot bahoot shukriya janab....aapne padha aur himmat - afjai ki.
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2008, 02:27:39 PM »
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Bohat khoob Bekarar ji, bohat behter kalam hay aap ka.. bohat taraqi kerien gay aap sukhan wari mien...
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aapke comment padh-kar dil ko tasalli ho gai ki kuch likh paya mai bhi...shukriya hadayat ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2008, 02:30:09 PM »
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Bahout umda likha hai aap ne Bekarar Ji

shukriya rajesh ......
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«Reply #11 on: November 23, 2008, 02:32:09 PM »
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aap bahut hi umda shayar hai sajid sahab
aapki har line dil ko chhu leti hai
bahut khub bahut khub
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thanks a lot panks.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: November 24, 2008, 02:12:25 PM »
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ghazal, sher, rubaai likhe, bane shayar jo saare hain
inka anjaam hai yahi ye mohabbat ke maare hain

bura waqt khuda ki anmol nemat hai aadam ko warna
ye jaat bhul hi jaaye, ki wo kiske sahare hai

hansane ka maza bhi lega wahi, dubta tujhe dekh-ke,
dariya-e-duniya me jise haasil kinaare hain

sar chupane ko mayassar hai, bas khula aasma,
in barasti boondon ko, kaise kah dun baharen hain,

titli ke paron ko noch ke wo maasoom hans diya,
aise hi tere sitam hain aur titli se dard humaare hain

gumon se malamal, raha ta-umra bekarar
koun kahta hai ki mere gardish me sitare hain,


bahut badhiya likhtey ho aap-jaantey ho aap bhee aur mein bhee,fir bhee aupchaariktavash--'Waah Waah'

Maalamaal ho jo gumon se, to baatna bhee seekho,
koi ajnabi to nahi,dost hum tumhaare hain

humey aadat hey dard ko sajaane ki,aazma kur dekho
anubhavi bhawron ke yeh maasom titliyon ko ishaare hain.


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«Reply #13 on: November 24, 2008, 02:28:21 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya janab....
aur jawab me aapne bahoot kuch kah bhi diya....

har aur laga iska ambaar,
har ek ke paas hai beshumar,
kaise ye baanta jayega,
kaise mai kah dun tujhko yaar,
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«Reply #14 on: November 24, 2008, 03:03:59 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya janab....
aur jawab me aapne bahoot kuch kah bhi diya....

har aur laga iska ambaar,
har ek ke paas hai beshumar,
kaise ye baanta jayega,
kaise mai kah dun tujhko yaar,


shukriya hazoor. aap jaisi umda shaayri to nahi pur tukbandi ke shauk zaroor poora kur lete hein.

khajaana na baatney ke
bahaaney hein hazaaar
mut sunao humko kahaani
samajh gaya main saar!
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