***gaya waqt laut kar nahi aata***

by kaushikbhawna008 on July 25, 2008, 10:47:37 AM
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ye pal thahar kyu nahi jaata
kyu gaya waqt laut kar nahi aata
 
kitne khush the ham kabhi saath unke
kyu khushi ka wo pal laut nahi aata
 
wo sard mausam mei nange paao se chalna
kyu baarish ka mausam fir saath bhigo kyu nahi jaata
 
hai nikalti to dhoop ab bhi hai har roz
fir gam ka ye mausam dhal kyu nahi jaata
 
na hoti thi kabhi koi dua hothon pe to kabhi
fir aaj uske bin dil ye behal kyu nahi jaata
 
sochti hai BHAWNA yu to dunia chalti hi jaayegi
fir mera hi waqt kuch sambhal kyu nahi jaata
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2008, 06:12:23 AM »
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gujre palo ki chand yaadein
pal pal yu tadpati hai hamein
nahi laut kar kabhi beeta pal hai aata
bas aakar yahi batlaati hai hamein
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2008, 06:52:45 PM »
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bahoot khoob kahaa bhawna ji aapne.

"Kuch lamhe kuch ehsaas mitaye nahi jate,
Kuch meethe-meethe pal bhulaye nahi jate,
kuch nazre khud hi keh jati hai,
Kuch alfaaz sunaye nahi jate".
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2008, 06:18:14 AM »
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bahoot khoob kahaa bhawna ji aapne.

"Kuch lamhe kuch ehsaas mitaye nahi jate,
Kuch meethe-meethe pal bhulaye nahi jate,
kuch nazre khud hi keh jati hai,
Kuch alfaaz sunaye nahi jate".

shukriya satya ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2008, 06:27:17 AM »
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ye pal thahar kyu nahi jaata
kyu gaya waqt laut kar nahi aata
 
kitne khush the ham kabhi saath unke
kyu khushi ka wo pal laut nahi aata
 
wo sard mausam mei nange paao se chalna
kyu baarish ka mausam fir saath bhigo kyu nahi jaata
 
hai nikalti to dhoop ab bhi hai har roz
fir gam ka ye mausam dhal kyu nahi jaata
 
na hoti thi kabhi koi dua hothon pe to kabhi
fir aaj uske bin dil ye behal kyu nahi jaata
 
sochti hai BHAWNA yu to dunia chalti hi jaayegi
fir mera hi waqt kuch sambhal kyu nahi jaata


wah kya baat kahi hai Bhavna

BITA WAQT GAR LAUT AAYEGA
YEH DIL HAR PAL UNHI KOH PAYEGA
JINDAGI KA MAJA DUGNA HO JAYEGA
AAKOH KA SAPNA, SACH HO JAYEGA


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2008, 06:30:32 AM »
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gujre palo ki chand yaadein
pal pal yu tadpati hai hamein
nahi laut kar kabhi beeta pal hai aata
bas aakar yahi batlaati hai hamein



bahut badiya Bhavna


BITEY WAQT GAR LAUT AATEY
FIR TANHAYI MEH HUM KAHA AATEY
HAR PAL UNHEY SAATH BITHATEY
YEH AAKHEY ROH ROH NA THAK JATEY


JASBIR SINGH


gujre palo ki chand yaadein
pal pal yu tadpati hai hamein
nahi laut kar kabhi beeta pal hai aata
bas aakar yahi batlaati hai hamein



bahut badiya Bhavna


BITEY WAQT GAR LAUT AATEY
FIR TANHAYI MEH HUM KAHA AATEY
HAR PAL UNHEY SAATH BITHATEY
YEH AAKHEY ROH ROH NA THAK JATEY


JASBIR SINGH


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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2008, 06:34:43 AM »
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bahoot khoob kahaa bhawna ji aapne.

"Kuch lamhe kuch ehsaas mitaye nahi jate,
Kuch meethe-meethe pal bhulaye nahi jate,
kuch nazre khud hi keh jati hai,
Kuch alfaaz sunaye nahi jate".

wah wah wah bahut badiya Satya


AISEY SUNHERE PAL KOH NA MITANA
WOH PYAR BHAREY LAMHEY NA MITANA
INHI YAADOH SEY JEETEY HAI HUM
PYAR KI YEH SAUGAAT NA MITANA


JASBIR SINGH


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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2008, 07:24:21 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya jasbir ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2008, 07:26:39 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya jasbir ji

Thanks Bhavna


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2008, 12:46:14 PM »
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ye pal thahar kyu nahi jaata
kyu gaya waqt laut kar nahi aata
 
kitne khush the ham kabhi saath unke
kyu khushi ka wo pal laut nahi aata
 
wo sard mausam mei nange paao se chalna
kyu baarish ka mausam fir saath bhigo kyu nahi jaata
 
hai nikalti to dhoop ab bhi hai har roz
fir gam ka ye mausam dhal kyu nahi jaata
 
na hoti thi kabhi koi dua hothon pe to kabhi
fir aaj uske bin dil ye behal kyu nahi jaata
 
sochti hai BHAWNA yu to dunia chalti hi jaayegi
fir mera hi waqt kuch sambhal kyu nahi jaata


BHAWNA.. Yaadon Ko.. Dard Ko.. Aur Mohabbat Ko behad Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai Aapne..!! Aur apni Zindgi se aapne Jo Sawalaat Kiye Hain.. Waqai Dil Ko Chhoo Gaye..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2008, 05:38:31 AM »
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ji shukriya mann ji

mann ji is kavita ko mein jab jab bhi padhti hoon sach khud bohut hi udaas ho jaati hoon......ye sawaal baar baar mere mann ko jhanjhol dete hain......k kyu aisa hota hai .....kyu kisi ko itna dard aur itni tanhaai milti hai...?

thnx mann ji jo aapne mere likhe ko saraha aur samjha bhi notworthy
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: August 10, 2009, 08:31:15 AM »
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Nice one Bhawna Ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2011, 09:14:18 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob likha Bhavna ji ek ek labz dil ko chhu gaya  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2011, 06:16:01 PM »
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wah. aapne purani yade taza kardi .. bhawna ,, thanx .. us pal ko yad dilane ke liye  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2011, 07:57:27 PM »
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Bahut umda bhawanaji..
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