e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche

by kaushikbhawna008 on April 30, 2008, 05:46:29 AM
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e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

karni hai mujhe abhi kai baatein
unke haathon mei apna naam to likhne de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

dil mei hai uthte tufaan kai
unki baahon mei mujhe kuch pal rehne de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de


ek muddat se soyi nahi hoon mein
unke kaandhe par sar rakhkar sone de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de


in aankhon mei hai kuch nami si ab
kuch khwabon ko to pura hone de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

hai kai lamhe abhi adhure jo pure hamein karne hai
jo vaade kiye the saath unhe to pura karne de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

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pandit
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2008, 06:21:53 AM »
vey well writen..........kaushik ji......waah........
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

karni hai mujhe abhi kai baatein
unke haathon mei apna naam to likhne de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

dil mei hai uthte tufaan kai
unki baahon mei mujhe kuch pal rehne de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de


ek muddat se soyi nahi hoon mein
unke kaandhe par sar rakhkar sone de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de


in aankhon mei hai kuch nami si ab
kuch khwabon ko to pura hone de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de

hai kai lamhe abhi adhure jo pure hamein karne hai
jo vaade kiye the saath unhe to pura karne de
e waqt tu laut chal kuch piche
kuch pal unke saath aur jeene de


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maya01
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2008, 08:56:55 AM »
Wah Wah kya baat hain its a very heart touchting shair
yaar i like it very much  Clapping Smiley


Salaam from:

maya... Winking
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 06:57:48 AM »
nice one bhawna!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 07:01:03 AM »
Bahut khoob Bhawna Ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2009, 07:07:02 AM »
Fantastic...bahoot bahoot Khoob Bhawana .. its simply superb.. bahoot Khoob!..

Sach mea beete palo ki yaad taza kara di.. kaash aisa ho pata jab dil karta hum thoda peeche ja paate.. Usual Smile

Very well expresse!
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 05:25:29 AM »
thnk you every one notworthy
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 05:33:23 AM »
Nice to see you online today Bhawna!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 05:38:44 AM »
Wah very nice and beautiful creation Bhawna ji,excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_thumleft
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 05:44:00 AM »
thnk u madhuwesh ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2010, 10:01:29 AM »
Excellent creation Bhawana Ji. Bahut hi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Keep writing.

Mujhko milne ki bas ek baar ijaazat de do
Mera dil rakhne ko thodi si muhabbat de do



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