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by saahill on February 12, 2011, 11:55:23 AM
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dosto sheyar bhi likhe ghajal hi likhi nazam bhi likhi ab apke sath se our pyaar se geet likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon saath dete rahiye ................................................. ...................
yeh geet mere dil our mere sath ki situation ko bayan karne ki koshish


mere dil ne mujhse aaj kaha main kisi pe aa gaya hoon 
mera dilbar  mujhko mil gaya uske paas jaa raha hoon ....

uski ankhon mein dekha maine alag sa nasha ,uski dadhkan se poocha
kya hai tujhko pata main apni dadhkan ko yun thamaa sa raha hoon
mera pyaar mujhko mil gaya uske paas jaa raha hoon .

uske dil ne kiya tha ek aisa ishaara na samjha kuch bhi
dil kho gaya hamaara apne khoye dil ko main talaash raha hoon
mere dil ne mujhse aaj kaha main kisi pe aa gaya hoon

meri aankhon ne bhi to saath dil ka diya , kuch dekha na samjha
bas khud ko lutaa diya main dil se aankhon se yeh sawaal kar raha hoon
mera dil kho gaya hai ankhon mein khawab bas gaya
mera dil kho gaya hai ,jaane kya ho gaya hai .................. 
 
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2011, 02:47:35 PM »
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dosto sheyar bhi likhe ghajal hi likhi nazam bhi likhi ab apke sath se our pyaar se geet likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon saath dete rahiye ................................................. ...................
yeh geet mere dil our mere sath ki situation ko bayan karne ki koshish


mere dil ne mujhse aaj kaha main kisi pe aa gaya hoon 
mera dilbar  mujhko mil gaya uske paas jaa raha hoon ....

uski ankhon mein dekha maine alag sa nasha ,uski dadhkan se poocha
kya hai tujhko pata main apni dadhkan ko yun thamaa sa raha hoon
mera pyaar mujhko mil gaya uske paas jaa raha hoon .

uske dil ne kiya tha ek aisa ishaara na samjha kuch bhi
dil kho gaya hamaara apne khoye dil ko main talaash raha hoon
mere dil ne mujhse aaj kaha main kisi pe aa gaya hoon

meri aankhon ne bhi to saath dil ka diya , kuch dekha na samjha
bas khud ko lutaa diya main dil se aankhon se yeh sawaal kar raha hoon
mera dil kho gaya hai ankhon mein khawab bas gaya
mera dil kho gaya hai ,jaane kya ho gaya hai .................. 
 

Very Impressive .... Saahiil Bhai !

dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2011, 06:05:49 PM »
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wah ---
mast mast geet likha h ji
daad hai ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2011, 07:36:55 AM »
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thx ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2011, 07:39:46 PM »
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Nice Sahill Bhai
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2011, 01:39:58 AM »
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.thx rishi bhai
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2011, 04:43:32 PM »
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shukrya sanghwan sahib ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2011, 05:48:08 PM »
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nice Geet....Saahill ji.......
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2011, 01:08:28 AM »
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SHUKRYA ANAAM JI AISE SATH DETE RAHIYE
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