Tum hi ho naa...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 12, 2011, 12:17:51 PM
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Maine tumhe apne ansuo ki dastan nhi sunayi,
per merri har muskurahat mein tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apne raato ko jaagne ki wajah nhi batayi,
per merre sapno ki khubsurati tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apne ehsaso ki betaabi nhi dikhayi,
per merre har jazbaat ki tishnagi tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apni bite kal se rubaru nhi karwaya,
per merre aaj aur anewale kal mein tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apne lafzo mein base shakhs se nhi milwaya,
per merre har lafz ki gehrai tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apni yado se door hi rehna sikhaya,
per merri har yad mein samayi tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apni khamoshi ka kissa nhi sunaya,
per merri har pukar ki sadaa tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apna haal-e-dil kabhi nhi jataya,
per merre jine ki wajah tou tum hi ho naa.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2011, 12:29:43 PM »
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Very nice Geet di..
Applause
Khush rahiye,,!
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2011, 12:32:40 PM »
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kya baat kya baat--
aap ke nagme ufff nagma nahi ek ek---shabd nhi mil rahe ke kya kahun.
bas Behad sachhe aur masoom ehsaas ek sachhi mohabat me dhadkte dil ki.
mai to bas dua karunga--
aapki har khuwahis poori ho- aameen.
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2011, 12:32:57 PM »
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kya khoob kaha hai geet ji......
very sweet...
very romantic...
bht khoob ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2011, 12:47:21 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rahim,killbill ji n priya ji...killbill ji shukriya apki duao ka...
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2011, 02:22:12 PM »
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hammmmmmmmmmmmmmm bhut umda likha hai aapne geet ji


nice one


one line by me plz dnt mind

maine tumhen dil me basaya
mere sanson ki bandish tum hi ho na

maine tumhen apna banaya
mere jivan ki talash tum hi ho na

mai tadap raha hu aaj bhi teri yaad me
meri yaadon ka shahar tum hi ho na

ek baar aakar kaha bhi do
har raah me mere hamsafar tum hi ho na
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2011, 02:30:36 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya raahi ji aur bahut khubsurat kavita likha shukriya share karne k liye...
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2011, 02:45:54 PM »
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Maine tumhe apne ansuo ki dastan nhi sunayi,
per merri har muskurahat mein tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apne raato ko jaagne ki wajah nhi batayi,
per merre sapno ki khubsurati tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apne ehsaso ki betaabi nhi dikhayi,
per merre har jazbaat ki tishnagi tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apni bite kal se rubaru nhi karwaya,
per merre aaj aur anewale kal mein tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apne lafzo mein base shakhs se nhi milwaya,
per merre har lafz ki gehrai tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apni yado se door hi rehna sikhaya,
per merri har yad mein samayi tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apni khamoshi ka kissa nhi sunaya,
per merri har pukar ki sadaa tou tum hi ho naa,

maine tumhe apna haal-e-dil kabhi nhi jataya,
per merre jine ki wajah tou tum hi ho naa.........


Good One .... broken Ji !

Very Impressive ... Very touching .... !

dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2011, 02:47:44 PM »
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hamey shayris ko addict kisne kiya ,,tumhe ho na
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2011, 02:48:33 PM »
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mast likha re Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2011, 02:50:55 PM »
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hamey shayris ko addict kisne kiya ,,tumhe ho na
mast likha re Applause Applause

Thnx priya...
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2011, 05:02:14 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Janaab kia kaheN... Realy mindblowing thoughts and
expression in your poetry...

Bus ahsaas ki ghanak hai ke lafzon ki khanak..
jo bhi hai bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Likhati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2011, 02:44:53 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji n shihab ji..
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2011, 06:30:30 PM »
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Nice Geet JI
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2011, 06:34:02 PM »
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Shukriya rishi ji..
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