Ye dil...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 21, 2011, 10:10:19 PM
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Ye dil ki adat badi buri hai,
har kahiin bus unhe dhundhe jata hai,
kabhi hansata hai unhe yad kar,
tou kabhi unki gair hazri mein ansu bahata hai,


main smjhati hu ise abhi milan ka waqt bahut door hai,
merri aur uski halat bebas aur majboor hai,
per manane se kahan maan pata hai,
unhe apne paas bulane ki baat har baar dohrata hai,


jo machalta hai zyada tou unki tasvir dikha deti hu,
jo tadapta hai tou unki awaz suna deti hu,
per phir mujhe har pal satata hai,
un tak jane ka rasta mujhe dikhata hai,


ab kya kahu ki unke bina jina muhal tou hai,
unki yado mein merra haal behal tou hai,
per nasib kab har dafa khushio se milwata hai,
kar k bahane hazar dilwalo ko azmata hai,


ae merre dil tu tham ja kuch waqt k liye,
vo ayenge hamein apna banane k liye,
kyun yu ghadi ghadi unki aas lagata hai,
hokar merre sine mein tu unse wafa nibhata hai............

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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2011, 10:29:24 PM »
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Bohat khoob geet ji, ur a wonderful writer pls keep writing.. Mujhe bas ap hi ki posts ka intezar rehta hai..
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2011, 11:54:52 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2011, 10:02:59 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya diya ji n nirala ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2011, 10:35:05 PM »
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BAhut Khub Geet Ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 22, 2011, 10:43:39 PM »
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Shukriya rishi ji..
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2011, 04:43:25 PM »
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wowwww its nice--
dil ke halat ki achi peshkah ji
bht khub
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2011, 12:31:14 AM »
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wowwww its nice--
dil ke halat ki achi peshkah ji
bht khub

bahut shukriya sarfira ji...
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2011, 01:17:52 AM »
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Wah..!! Bahut Khoob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye Aapke liye..

Uff.. ye Kambakht dil, bada hi natkhat hai ye dil...
sach bhi to hai ke ye hai to hamare sine me shamil..
jise bhi dekhle bas use pyar kar baithta hai ye dil..
Rehkar hamare sine me kisi aur k liye bhi dhadakta hai dil..

Shukriya..
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2011, 01:22:00 AM »
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Wah..!! Bahut Khoob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye Aapke liye..

Uff.. ye Kambakht dil, bada hi natkhat hai ye dil...
sach bhi to hai ke ye hai to hamare sine me shamil..
jise bhi dekhle bas use pyar kar baithta hai ye dil..
Rehkar hamare sine me kisi aur k liye bhi dhadakta hai dil..

Shukriya..

Bahut khoob likha apne mhmd ji bahut shukriya apka...
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2011, 01:48:36 AM »
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Shukriya..

aise hi likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2011, 01:59:13 AM »
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Shukriya..

aise hi likhte rahiye..

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