Ghayel hai mera naam.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on July 24, 2011, 02:35:34 PM
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Iqbal Ashaar bhai ki ek khoobsurat Nazm hai.......Urdu hai mera naam main khusro ki paheli......bas usi zameen par kuch apne baare me kehne ki koshish ki hai.

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Jo sabko samajh aaye wahi sher sunaye
Khamosh ghazal meri bohat shor machaye
Hai mujhko yaqee.N mere liye bhi hai duaye
Allah ka diya sab hai magar hath hai khaali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Yeh sach hai kabhi chehra nahi maine dikhaya
Surat me magar meri mujhe tu nazar aaya
Lagta hi nahi koi bhi ab mujhko paraya
Ek khwaab mai kisi ka hu pehchaan khayaali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Be_baat ki tohmat na kabhi mujh pe lagana
Behtar na zamane se mai aala na zamana
Mil jaye kahi mujhsa koi mujhko batana
Makhlookh nahi dooji koi mujhsi bawali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Rahat* ki tarah humne bhi chehre hai banaye
Sanjeeda bhi Rana* ki tarah hum nazar aaye
Kya baat magar humko koi q na bulaye
Tumne hai suna tumhi zara do baja taali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Sajid Ghayel

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* Rahat Indori and Munawwar Rana
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2011, 05:24:15 AM »
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Iqbal Ashaar bhai ki ek khoobsurat Nazm hai.......Urdu hai mera naam main khusro ki paheli......bas usi zameen par kuch apne baare me kehne ki koshish ki hai.

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Jo sabko samajh aaye wahi sher sunaye
Khamosh ghazal meri bohat shor machaye
Hai mujhko yaqee.N mere liye bhi hai duaye
Allah ka diya sab hai magar hath hai khaali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Yeh sach hai kabhi chehra nahi maine dikhaya
Surat me magar meri mujhe tu nazar aaya
Lagta hi nahi koi bhi ab mujhko paraya
Ek khwaab mai kisi ka hu pehchaan khayaali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Be_baat ki tohmat na kabhi mujh pe lagana
Behtar na zamane se mai aala na zamana
Mil jaye kahi mujhsa koi mujhko batana
Makhlookh nahi dooji koi mujhsi bawali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Rahat* ki tarah humne bhi chehre hai banaye
Sanjeeda bhi Rana* ki tarah hum nazar aaye
Kya baat magar humko koi q na bulaye
Tumne hai suna tumhi zara do baja taali

Ghayel hai mera naam meri baat nirali
Main thoda sharifo sa lagu thoda mawali

Sajid Ghayel

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kya taa'rruff karaya  hai apna, janaab khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

janaab munawwar rana aur rahat indori dono mere pasandida shayron mein se hain.


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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2011, 05:53:30 AM »
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Ghayal Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab waah kia kahne aapke... kafi achchi nazm kahi hai..
Aur behad khoob khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile Aate rahiye...

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2011, 04:48:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob ghaayal saaheb!
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2011, 01:31:57 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2011, 09:04:49 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kya taa'rruff karaya  hai apna, janaab khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

janaab munawwar rana aur rahat indori dono mere pasandida shayron mein se hain.




Thanks for ur time and comment Adil saheb.
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