hume ek wazood banaaya tune MAA... Intezar !

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   Ki hard dard khud seh kar, hume bada kiya tune Maa
   Ki aaj hume is jahaan kaa ek wazood banaaya tune Maa,

   Na siskiyaan dekhi gayi tujhse hamaari,na aansu hi kabi
   Raat raat bhar jaagkar hume chain se sulaayaa tune Maa,

   Har wo cheez laa kar di jiski zid par humne khaana na khaya
   Phir goad mein bitha kar apne haatho.n se khilaaya tune Maa

   Kitni hi sharaaratein, kitni hi galtiyaan humne ki hongi magar
   Har baar daant kar khud apne seene se hume lagaaya tune Maa

   Har tufaan se bachaaya hume,  har dard se mehfooz rakha aur,
   bhigne na diya baarish me bhi karke duaaon ka saaya tune Maa

   kabhi jo chot lag jaye hume khel khel mein, aankh teri bhar aati
   phir bade pyar se hamare zakhmo par marham lagaaya tune Maa

   ki ajab teri hasti hai Maa,teri koi misaal nah sab jaante hain
   dard hokar bhi hamari khushi k liye har baar muskuraya tune Maa

   ghar laut te shaam ko jab der ho jaati hai gar kabhi to phir mere
   Laut aane tak suni raahon se nazaro ko na kabhi hataaya tune Maa

   Kadee dhoop milti hai jab in raston par kaheen raah chalte hume to
   bahut yaad aati hai us anchal ki chhaw jisme tha chhupaya tune Maa



   Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2010, 10:16:07 AM »
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   Ki hard dard khud seh kar, hume bada kiya tune Maa
   Ki aaj hume is jahaan kaa ek wazood banaaya tune Maa,

   Na siskiyaan dekhi gayi tujhse hamaari,na aansu hi kabi
   Raat raat bhar jaagkar hume chain se sulaayaa tune Maa,

   Har wo cheez laa kar di jiski zid par humne khaana na khaya
   Phir goad mein bitha kar apne haatho.n se khilaaya tune Maa

   Kitni hi sharaaratein, kitni hi galtiyaan humne ki hongi magar
   Har baar daant kar khud apne seene se hume lagaaya tune Maa

   Har tufaan se bachaaya hume,  har dard se mehfooz rakha aur,
   bhigne na diya baarish me bhi karke duaaon ka saaya tune Maa

   kabhi jo chot lag jaye hume khel khel mein, aankh teri bhar aati
   phir bade pyar se hamare zakhmo par marham lagaaya tune Maa

   ki ajab teri hasti hai Maa,teri koi misaal nah sab jaante hain
   dard hokar bhi hamari khushi k liye har baar muskuraya tune Maa

   ghar laut te shaam ko jab der ho jaati hai gar kabhi to phir mere
   Laut aane tak suni raahon se nazaro ko na kabhi hataaya tune Maa

   Kadee dhoop milti hai jab in raston par kaheen raah chalte hume to
   bahut yaad aati hai us anchal ki chhaw jisme tha chhupaya tune Maa



   Shukriya
   Intezar !
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Bahut hi adab bhare alfaz likhe hai apne intezar ji..sach mein maa ka pyar anmol hota hai hame unhe poore dil se shukriya karna chahiye apna [yar humper lutane k liye..maa jaisa iss duniya mein aur koi nhi hota...dil se bahut pasand aayi apki ye peshakash mujhe...bahut shukriya itne khubsurat alfaz likhne k liye...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2010, 11:43:21 AM »
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Behtareeen INTEZAR ji....is khoobsurat kalaam ke liye.....
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2010, 12:49:33 PM »
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Shukriya Geet ji... aapne sahi kaha ki MAA jaisa koi aur duniya mein nahin... Bahut Bahut Shukriya aapka... !

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Bahut hi adab bhare alfaz likhe hai apne intezar ji..sach mein maa ka pyar anmol hota hai hame unhe poore dil se shukriya karna chahiye apna [yar humper lutane k liye..maa jaisa iss duniya mein aur koi nhi hota...dil se bahut pasand aayi apki ye peshakash mujhe...bahut shukriya itne khubsurat alfaz likhne k liye...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2010, 12:51:03 PM »
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Shukriya Irshad bhai... aapka bahut bahut shukriya aapko pasand aaya...

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Behtareeen INTEZAR ji....is khoobsurat kalaam ke liye.....
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2010, 12:53:19 PM »
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Bahot khoob Intezar Sahab. Aapne sahi farmaya, maa ka koi badal nahi. Maa ke Jo ahsanaat hum par hain unhen chukana ghair-mumkin hai. Albatta  khidmat aur farmabardari se agar usko khush rakha jaaye to khushnaseebi ki baat hai. Bahot khoob takhleeq hai.
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2010, 12:57:32 PM »
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Shukriya Riyaz bhai... aapne is par gaur kiya uske liye bahut bahut shukriya... aur karz to hum par itna hai Maa ka ki.. kitni bhi umre lagen kabhi chuka nahin paayenge... khush rehiye... saath rehiye... shukriya aapka...

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Bahot khoob Intezar Sahab. Aapne sahi farmaya, maa ka koi badal nahi. Maa ke Jo ahsanaat hum par hain unhen chukana ghair-mumkin hai. Albatta  khidmat aur farmabardari se agar usko khush rakha jaaye to khushnaseebi ki baat hai. Bahot khoob takhleeq hai.
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2010, 01:01:14 PM »
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intezaar ji.....padhte padhte hi aankhein bhar ai...bht hi pyaar se likhi gai hai aapki ye peshkash...ek bete ne apni ma k liye jo fel kiya dil se bas wahi pyaar  wahi izat hai isme.....uss shakhs kliye kuch kar k khush karne ki chahat haiisme..... bas yunhi dil se likhte rahiye......
aapki ek behtareen peshkash hai ye..hamesha sambhal k rakhne layak......
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maine bhi jab likhna shuru kiya tha to 2-4 lines likhte hi samjho jaise aankhe bhar aayi thi ek ajeeb sa feel tha ise likhte wakt... ye sab uski duaayein hain us maa ki jo hume mehfooz rakhti hai... hum kuch bhi karen kabhi kuch zaada nahin kar sakte uske liye... aapke dil tak ye baat pahunchi uske liye bahut bahut shukriya... Kasak ji...

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intezaar ji.....padhte padhte hi aankhein bhar ai...bht hi pyaar se likhi gai hai aapki ye peshkash...ek bete ne apni ma k liye jo fel kiya dil se bas wahi pyaar  wahi izat hai isme.....uss shakhs kliye kuch kar k khush karne ki chahat haiisme..... bas yunhi dil se likhte rahiye......
aapki ek behtareen peshkash hai ye..hamesha sambhal k rakhne layak......
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2010, 12:24:18 AM »
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yaar Intezaar---- rulaya mat kar aise.
ye KB bhot emotional banda hai--
ghar se duur akela rahta hai aise me ye kavita padh ke aankhe bhar ai--wo to bhala ho meri ankho ka ke ansu aajtak bahar nhi aye warna gir jaate ansu aaj.
yahi karan tha ke mai padhta nhi Maa aur riston ke upar likhi kavitayen.
Bahut Ehsaas aur pyar bhari kavita--
mere hisse ki wo duayen jo meri maa ne mujhe diya wo tere naam.
khus raho----

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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2010, 12:37:25 AM »
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maa ki duaayein bahut jaada hoti hai... jo baanto bhi dusro ko to kam nahin hoti KB bhai...  aap kyun aise dard samet kar rakhte ho... us maa ki duaayein uske har wazood par humesha rahegi... aur aap door ho kar bhi maa se door nahi hote... bas aap apna khayal rakho aur maa ko yaad rakho sab badhiya hoga bhai... !

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yaar Intezaar---- rulaya mat kar aise.
ye KB bhot emotional banda hai--
ghar se duur akela rahta hai aise me ye kavita padh ke aankhe bhar ai--wo to bhala ho meri ankho ka ke ansu aajtak bahar nhi aye warna gir jaate ansu aaj.
yahi karan tha ke mai padhta nhi Maa aur riston ke upar likhi kavitayen.
Bahut Ehsaas aur pyar bhari kavita--
mere hisse ki wo duayen jo meri maa ne mujhe diya wo tere naam.
khus raho----


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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2010, 06:06:26 AM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai intezar Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2010, 07:19:41 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2010, 08:07:28 AM »
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Shukriya Geet ji... aapne sahi kaha ki MAA jaisa koi aur duniya mein nahin... Bahut Bahut Shukriya aapka... !

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«Reply #14 on: December 12, 2010, 09:15:22 AM »
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   Ki hard dard khud seh kar, hume bada kiya tune Maa
   Ki aaj hume is jahaan kaa ek wazood banaaya tune Maa,

   Na siskiyaan dekhi gayi tujhse hamaari,na aansu hi kabi
   Raat raat bhar jaagkar hume chain se sulaayaa tune Maa,

   Har wo cheez laa kar di jiski zid par humne khaana na khaya
   Phir goad mein bitha kar apne haatho.n se khilaaya tune Maa

   Kitni hi sharaaratein, kitni hi galtiyaan humne ki hongi magar
   Har baar daant kar khud apne seene se hume lagaaya tune Maa

   Har tufaan se bachaaya hume,  har dard se mehfooz rakha aur,
   bhigne na diya baarish me bhi karke duaaon ka saaya tune Maa

   kabhi jo chot lag jaye hume khel khel mein, aankh teri bhar aati
   phir bade pyar se hamare zakhmo par marham lagaaya tune Maa

   ki ajab teri hasti hai Maa,teri koi misaal nah sab jaante hain
   dard hokar bhi hamari khushi k liye har baar muskuraya tune Maa

   ghar laut te shaam ko jab der ho jaati hai gar kabhi to phir mere
   Laut aane tak suni raahon se nazaro ko na kabhi hataaya tune Maa

   Kadee dhoop milti hai jab in raston par kaheen raah chalte hume to
   bahut yaad aati hai us anchal ki chhaw jisme tha chhupaya tune Maa



   MAA SE BADH KAR DUNIYAN ME KOI NAHI
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