<>*Umar bhar rahega hume tera intezar*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 26, 2010, 09:47:59 AM
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<>*Umar bhar rahega hume tera intezar*<>


Jate jate hothon se nikli unke ye baat
Main kuch bhi na keh pai khadi rahi chupchap
Aankhon me thi nami uske,  anchhue se jazbaat
Hothon pe thi wahi muskurahut, dil me ek tufaan

Maine usko chaaha hai jaise wo ho meri jaan
Lekin meri preet se wo raha hardum anjaan
Anjaan raha ya anjaan bana maine ye na jana
Lekin dil me dard utha, jab wo ho gaya begaana

Uske dil ki baat kahi uske naino ne din raat
Lekin lub se na nikli ab tak uske wo dil ki baat
Jate jate bole wo bht hi achcha raha aapka saath
Ab jate hain fir milenge yanhin tak tha apna saath

Hum kya kehte dekhte rahe num palkon se chupchap
Jab pehle hi na kah paye unse apne maasum jazbaat
Ab bas itna hi kehna hai tham k unka haath
Raah takenge hum aapki sare sare din sari raat

Tum kehte rahe … kuch pal ka tha mera tera sath
Hum kehte rahe…oo jaan umar bhar rahega hume tera intezar!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2010, 10:02:59 AM »
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so sweet and love full anu ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2010, 10:09:05 AM »
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na humko inkaar tha na unko ikraar tha
pyar tha dil mein hohton par inkar tha
keh paatey they na unko kuch bhi dil bekraar tha
hum aaj bhi kartey hain pyaar  koi unhein bata de
intzaar unko hi nahin humko bhi sadyion se unka intzaar tha
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2010, 10:17:49 AM »
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anamika ji........

kya baat he .itna khubsurat bhi bhala koi likhta he kya ? Applause Applause Applause notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

apne bht bht sundar aur itna touchy likha he ki mere paas words nahi he tariif karne ke liye........true feelings of a true heart......wese ek baat puchna chahta hu .....likha kiske liye he ji ? icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

agar munasib lage to jauru bataiyega ..... sunny sunny sunny sunny sunny

lijiye iske jawab me kuch likha he for u and ur cute n sweet poetry...ye jo likha he usme kisi ki help li he mene unki help ke bina ye kabhi pura nahi ho pata ......hope u will like it ....

Beech Raah Me Unhen Tum Chor Na Aanaa Zindagee
Ab Jo Aao To Unhen Bhee Saath Laanaa Zindagee

Hai Ye Mousam Khushnumaa Or Hawaa Mahakee Hui
Houle Se Phir Pyar Kee Barsaat Laanaa Zindagee

Raah Taktaa Hoon Ki Wo Aa Jaaye Kis Pal Me Kaheen
Aa Ke Phir Na Jaayen Wo Sougaat Laanaa Zindagee

Moond Ke Palkon Me Rakh Loongaa Sapano Kee Tarah
Khwab Me Har Raat Unko Hee Tu Laanaa Zindagee

Na Rahe Koi Fasla Na Rahe Koi Tamnna Baki
Khud Ko Unme Sama Unhe Ghar Lanaa Zindagi

Bahot Hua Intjaar Ab Na Kar Bahana Zindagi
Ab Jo Aao To Unhe Bhi Sath Lanaa Zindagi……………
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2010, 10:39:57 AM »
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Bahut Khub Kasak Ji Aisa Kyu Hota Hai Jab Kisi Ko Sacche Dil Se Chahte Hai Wo Hi Kyu Humse Itne Dur Ho Jate Hai Aapne Jo Bhi Likha Hai Wo Aisa Laga Rha Hai Ki Mere Hi Dil Ke Byan Ho.. Aapne To Wo Pal Wapas Yaad Dila Diye.. Aankhen Nam Ho Gai Humari To... Applause Applause


Unki Yadein Hi Aisi Thi Ki Hum Rah Nahi Pate Hai..
Unko Dekhe Bina Ab Muskra Bhi Nahi Pate Hain..

Wo Humse Jate Jate  Kah Gaye Kuch Is Kadar Ki..
Tumhe Akele Hi Khush Rahna Is Raah Mein Mere Bagair..
Ab Kaun Unhe Batlaye Unhe Ki Humari Khushi To Unke Sath Hai..

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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2010, 10:47:24 AM »
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ab aapko bhi batana hoga kiske liye likhte hain hum.....kahiye rajaji....
waise aap bataiye ye kiski help li aapne...jaldi bataiye....
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2010, 10:49:00 AM »
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na humko inkaar tha na unko ikraar tha
pyar tha dil mein hohton par inkar tha
keh paatey they na unko kuch bhi dil bekraar tha
hum aaj bhi kartey hain pyaar  koi unhein bata de
intzaar unko hi nahin humko bhi sadyion se unka intzaar tha

bht acha likha h saahil aapne keep writing...
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2010, 10:56:15 AM »
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sorryy nirala ji wo flow me bas likh gai itna dhyan nahin raha edit kar deti hun ab ji....
thnx jo aapne ye bataya ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2010, 10:57:42 AM »
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rishi thnx k tumne ise feel kiya.....and pasand kiya uske liye bhi

tumne bht hi achcha likha hai ..yunhi sath raho likhte raho....
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2010, 11:11:13 AM »
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Bahut Bahut AUr Bahut Khoob Kasakji..

har Shabd Lajawaab!!!!Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor Yeh Kavita

Dil Ko bhaa Gayi.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut Ache Matrix guy Ji Saahil Ji Aur Rishi Ji..Bahut Khooob

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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2010, 11:20:07 AM »
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Dagmagate Hue Kadmo Ko Ab Hum!!
Kuch Yuh Sambhaal Lete Hai

Ruswa Naa Ho Mohaabat Kahin!!
sar Apne Hum,Har Ek Ilzaam Lete Hai

Mere Huzoor Mujhko Saza Dekar Khud Bhi Ro pade
Kaampte Honton Se Bhi Jo Hum uska Naam Lete Hai

Inn Ashkon Ki Kadar Sirf Woh Hi Jaane!!!
Jo Inn Ashkon Ko Aankhon Se Girte Hi Thaam lete Hai

Waqt Aur Naseeb Dono Hi Insaan ke Haath Mein nahi
Jo Faisla Apne Haq Mein nahi,Usse Bhi Apna Maan lete Hai

"Khwaish" Khwaishe To Humesha Se Hi Zinda Rehti Hai!!!
Par Mohabbat ki Raah Se Door,Ab Hum Vishraam lete Hai
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2010, 12:17:23 PM »
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bht khub khwaish ji.........bht hi sundar likha he ....superb
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2010, 12:46:35 PM »
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Bahut khoob kasak ji..matrix ji,rishi ji n khwaish ji bahut acha sath diya hai apne kasak ji kaa...
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2010, 12:56:03 PM »
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bht bht shukriya khwaish ji aapka ..k aapne meri koshish ko pasand kiya aur itna sunder reply kiya....sach me aapka reply aate hi na lagta hai k aahn wakai me accha likha hai maine.....
iska reply karne ki koshish karungi ji..thnx alot for ur valuable time j..itne busy hokar bhi aap ne itna waqt diya mujhe...thnxxx alot
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2010, 12:57:03 PM »
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geet ji bht bht shukriya aapne pasand ki meri ek koshish
yunhi sath dijiyega
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