dard umar bhar ka

by vikas2210 on March 12, 2006, 02:06:48 PM
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vikas2210
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dard mai duba rehta hun
har pal rota rehta hun
kirat hun tujhe yaad mai
bas teri aarzu rakhta hun

meri sanso mai tu basti hai
aankho mai tu hi rehti hai
dharkta hai dil tere liye
khoon ka har katra tere naa leta hai

aankho mai nami rakhta hun
labo ko band rakhta hun
siskiya chupti nahi
har aah ke saath tera naam leta hun :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2006, 02:23:09 PM »
log bhul jate hai hume umr bhar k liye
hum bhula na sake unhe ek pal k liye.
wo ker gaye bewafai zindigi bhar k liye...
hum nibhate rahe waha her zindgi k liye
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roshni246
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2006, 02:24:00 PM »
Puzzled !
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2006, 03:19:41 PM »
gr8888888 tushar

ki hoya rosh.

Dard ka rishta mujhe purana hai bahut
har mod pe deta raha hai saath.....
koi humsafar na mila gale laga usi ne raha hai
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nikki
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2006, 03:25:17 PM »
very nice Vikas n Tushar....
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vikas2210
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2006, 08:15:25 AM »
Thanks NIKKI
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Princess21
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2006, 08:34:12 AM »
Buaht acha likha Tushar!! Ohhhhh Vikasssss Buhat hi lovely likha...buhat khoob!! TUm to buhat acha likhte ho!! Always!!

Ek baar.....Woh humain Apna to kehta....Uski....Zindagi main khushiyon ki bahaar LE aate!!!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #7 on: March 14, 2006, 04:09:34 PM »
thanks neha....

dard ka rishta mere bahut kareeb hai
dil ki dhadkan ki tarah
saanso ki tarah
meri ruh ki tarah
kaya bataoon tumko aur main,
ke dard se hi zinda hun mai
dard se hi meri saanse ha chalti
dard se hi meri dhadkan ha
issi se ruh mai meri jaan baaki hai
dard ka rishta kitna mere kareeb ha
kaya bataaoun.....
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2006, 10:25:43 AM »
bahut khoob....Vikkas ...tushar....n neha...keep it up
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roshni246
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2006, 01:04:49 PM »
GREAT VIKAS honey..........aap ki bhi jawab nahi !!!

Dard hi sahi mere ishq ka inaam to aaya,
Khali hi sahi haathon mein jaam to aaya,

main hoon bewafa sabko bataya tumney ,
yun sahi,uske labon pe mera naam to aaya,

ishq kiya maine ussey har hadd se zyada,
ishq na sahi, par dard woh tamam to aaya,

Tum to mere ho na saki is janam me kabhi,
tu na sahi, paas maut ka mukaam to aaya,

Jeete ji mera ishq to humesha se tha nakara,
maut pe sahi,uski khushi ke kaam top aaya,

Jeevan bhar sabne kiya mujhko "Ghayal",
janaze pe sahi, saath mere aawam to aaya


~roshni~
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vikas2210
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«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2006, 04:50:15 PM »
thanks salma and woooooooooow rosh u are superb honey............

kaya kahe phir se zinda hogaye armaan mere
jo labao pe tere mera naam to aaya

rehta hun khush issi khayal se
bhule hi sahi tumhe mera khayal to aaya
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roshni246
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«Reply #11 on: March 15, 2006, 07:18:57 PM »
thxx vikass......aapka bhi jawab nahi!!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #12 on: March 15, 2006, 08:44:43 PM »
Wah bahut khoobb Vikas.......Tushar bhai.....and Roshni....and all.......


Dard ki bhasha toh meri Kalam khoob batati hai......
Jab Jab likhta hoon isse toh Ghata bhi baras jaati hai.......!!!!!!!!!!!!

~~**Badnaam Shayar**~~
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vikas2210
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«Reply #13 on: March 16, 2006, 08:14:24 AM »
thanks roshni..........

and great gaurav very well written. Aisa laga dil ki kalam se khoon se liki paati aapne.

Dar ka mera rishta aisa hai jaise
rishta hota hai sawan aur badal ka

sawan aata hai aur badal chale aate hai
yaad aati ha aansu chale aate hai....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2006, 08:31:04 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Dard ki bhasha toh meri Kalam khoob batati hai......
Jab Jab likhta hoon isse toh Ghata bhi baras jaati hai.......!!!!!!!!!!!!


Quote from: "vikas2210"
Dar ka mera rishta aisa hai jaise
rishta hota hai sawan aur badal ka

sawan aata hai aur badal chale aate hai
yaad aati ha aansu chale aate hai....



Bahut zabardast aur gehra !

Rajbir
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