Ibaadat si hui jaati hai...................saru.................

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 30, 2013, 05:16:26 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 31, 2013, 12:00:13 AM »
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Tauhid ji bahut 2 shukriya aapka
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waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah saru ji kya kehne.. behad umdah peshkash. Usual Smile

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«Reply #16 on: December 31, 2013, 12:00:48 AM »
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thanks jeet ji
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किसी एहसान के बदले मिली है दुआ भी 'सरु'
इंसानियत  भी  यहाँ सियासत सी हुई जाती है

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wah wah wah wah bohut khub
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«Reply #17 on: December 31, 2013, 12:01:40 AM »
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thankeww sooo much sudhir ji
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«Reply #18 on: December 31, 2013, 01:07:26 AM »
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bhut khub ...
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«Reply #19 on: December 31, 2013, 05:08:20 AM »
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waah waah Saru jee bahut umda, khaas taur se ye sher bahut pasand aaye:

मुझसे   पूछे   बग़ैर   मेरे  फ़ैसले  होते  रहे
ये  ज़िंदगी  भी  कोई अदालत सी हुई जाती है

कोई समझे खता तो  समझे मगर मैं समझती हूँ
उसकी  मुहब्बत  में  इबादत  सी  हुई  जाती है

किसी एहसान के बदले मिली है दुआ भी 'सरु'
इंसानियत  भी  यहाँ सियासत सी हुई जाती है

DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #20 on: December 31, 2013, 01:42:04 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaah saru ji aap aur aapki poetry ek dam kamaal hoti hai... zabardasttttttttt khayaal rahe sabhi ashaar mein... behad hi umda peshkash rahi... hazaron daaaaaaaad qubool kare...
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«Reply #21 on: December 31, 2013, 02:47:34 PM »
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वाह....बहुत खूब...ढेरों दाद....
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«Reply #22 on: December 31, 2013, 03:01:35 PM »
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aqsh ji thankewww very much ...I like your compliments..

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Waaaaaaaaaaah saru ji aap aur aapki poetry ek dam kamaal hoti hai... zabardasttttttttt khayaal rahe sabhi ashaar mein... behad hi umda peshkash rahi... hazaron daaaaaaaad qubool kare...
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«Reply #23 on: December 31, 2013, 03:02:10 PM »
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thanks Rajan kondal
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«Reply #24 on: December 31, 2013, 03:04:25 PM »
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thanks a lot iftakhar ji
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waah waah Saru jee bahut umda, khaas taur se ye sher bahut pasand aaye:

मुझसे   पूछे   बग़ैर   मेरे  फ़ैसले  होते  रहे
ये  ज़िंदगी  भी  कोई अदालत सी हुई जाती है

कोई समझे खता तो  समझे मगर मैं समझती हूँ
उसकी  मुहब्बत  में  इबादत  सी  हुई  जाती है

किसी एहसान के बदले मिली है दुआ भी 'सरु'
इंसानियत  भी  यहाँ सियासत सी हुई जाती है

DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #25 on: December 31, 2013, 03:04:57 PM »
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thanks a lot amit ji
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वाह....बहुत खूब...ढेरों दाद....
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«Reply #26 on: December 31, 2013, 03:07:44 PM »
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thanks a lottttt Hasan ji
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«Reply #27 on: January 01, 2014, 05:35:30 PM »
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«Reply #28 on: January 01, 2014, 08:02:40 PM »
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thanks a lot prasaad ji
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«Reply #29 on: January 01, 2014, 10:13:36 PM »
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नज़रों ही नज़रों  में  मुहब्बत सी  हुई जाती है
ख़ामोश हैं लब यारब  क़यामत सी हुई जाती है

भटकते  हुये  भी  देख तेरे शहर में आ पंहुचे
जैसे मिरे  खुदा  की  हिदायत सी हुई जाती है

जो  आसपास  था  उसे  फ़ुर्सत  से देखा मैंने
फ़िज़ाओं की धुन्ध भी नियामत सी हुई जाती है

मुझसे   पूछे   बग़ैर   मेरे  फ़ैसले  होते  रहे
ये  ज़िंदगी  भी  कोई अदालत सी हुई जाती है

हिस्सा  रखते  हैं  जो सिर्फ़ दौलत और प्यार में
हर उस शख़्स से मुझे ख़िलाफत सी हुई जाती है

कोई समझे खता तो  समझे मगर मैं समझती हूँ
उसकी  मुहब्बत  में  इबादत  सी  हुई  जाती है

किसी एहसान के बदले मिली है दुआ भी 'सरु'
इंसानियत  भी  यहाँ सियासत सी हुई जाती है



NazroN hi nazroN  meiN  muhabbat si hui jaati hai
Khamosh hain lab ya Rab qayaamat si hui jaati hai

Bhatakte hue bhi dekh tere shahar me aa panhuche
Jaise  mere  khuda  ki  hidaayat  si  hui  jaati hai

Jo aas paas  tha  use  fursat se  dekha  maine
FizaoN  ki  dhundh bhi niyamat si hui jaati hai

Mujhse  pooche  bagair  mere  faisle hote rahe
Ye zindagi  bhi  koi adaalat  si hui jaati hai
 
Hissaa  rakhte hain jo sirf daulat aur pyar mein
Har uss shakhs se mujhe khilafat si hui jaati hai

Koi samjhe khataa to samjhe magar me samajhti hoon
Uski  mohabbat   meiN   ibaadat  si  hui jaati hai

Kisi  ehsaan  ke  badle mili hai dua bhi ‘saru’
Insaaniyat bhi yahan siyaasat si hui jaati hai





wonderful composition,ma'am
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